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Tawadi — SORUS Exp - Elkorae

Published: 2011-01-30 23:54:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1223; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 15
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Description See also: "Livine" [link]
She looks SO much better in person, it makes me sad.

Jealous of Fenix's apparent beginners luck, some of the other workers decided to test "the new kid". Knowing how much she despised people, they confronted her and demanded she create something humanoid. She was given a live human female, two weeks and zero restraint.

The woman, named Elkorae, was just as broken as any other test subject, and wanted nothing more than to die. Fenix was not pleased with the idea of working on a live human, but knew killing her or sending her away would have worse consequences. Unknown to anyone else, she made an offer the victim couldnt refuse, and went to work.

Fenix put the girl to sleep and grafted a live livine cutting directly in to the subject. With a generous dose of growth accelerating hormones and all the UV light and water it could ever need, the plant began growing in, and mutating, the woman. Unknown to anyone but Fenix, the woman did temporarily get her wish; she died of trauma when the plant began tampering with her vital organs. She was, at least in body, quickly revived by the plant, with remaining organs still apparently functional.

The woman became completely integrated into the plant, but seems to have a certain amount of control over the many large vines growing from her. Fenix suspects she might be able to wander around if she wasnt so firmly rooted to the ground and had any desire to leave in the first place.

Eklorae appears to have the upper body of a woman and the lower body of a tangled mass of livine. Though she still has some hair, it will eventually stop being produced and fall out or be replaced by plant matter. Around her mouth have sprouted small, teeth like projections similar to those around the flytraps. Like those of the flytraps, they are thin and flexible, made more for keeping food in place than biting or chewing. Her skin cells were filled with chlorophyll, giving her skin a greenish hue. Her two first and two last fingers fused and grew into long, scythe like spikes with minimal range of motion. Along with the writhing vines, she has all the bells and whistles of the regular livine.

When the challengers came to check up on Fenix's progress, instead of finding her with some failed experiment on her hands as theyd hoped, they found a large, humanoid plant lounging happily in an even larger box under ample UV lights in the back of Fenix's space. The woman, if it could still be called that, reacted violently to the other workers when they tried to approach, lashing at them with bony fingers and toxin filled vines. She made a soft hissing sound, like wind through trees, and refused to be calmed by anyone but Fenix, who is apparently just as immune to Eklorae as she is to the other livines.

Despite what most people assume must have been a horrible transformation process, Eklorae seems quite fond of Fenix. Whether this is because Fenix cares for her or because of some other emotional bond is still unknown.

After about a month, Eklorae did something that surprised even Fenix: she produced flowers. The flowers were identical to those found on livine except for one major difference: theyre female-only. Upon hearing this news, efforts to obtain samples surged again, many scientists offering pollen from their cuttings in the hopes of getting a seed from Eklorae, but Fenix again refused, insisting that Eklorae is sterile.

Many researchers have come begging for samples, cuttings, anything, but Fenix does everything in her power to keep them at bay. Fenix has no idea if the plant has any recollection of being human, or of the promise made, but Fenix has no intention of letting it go.
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Comments: 44

k8g8s8 [2011-02-25 14:40:48 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Tawadi In reply to k8g8s8 [2011-02-25 16:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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k8g8s8 In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-25 17:18:06 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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SH9DOW [2011-02-01 01:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Oooo! Creepy looking! But still so awesome!

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Tawadi In reply to SH9DOW [2011-02-01 03:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Im really happy with how she turned out

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ipodsmakemyheadhurt [2011-01-31 22:58:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, amazing work and i love the story! the species she came from are also epic!! Very detailed story, i love the ideas behind this and the story with the women is very cool! good work!! ^^ I love the pose of the plant in the picture, very nasty and intreging!!

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Tawadi In reply to ipodsmakemyheadhurt [2011-01-31 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Fenix may consider stepping out of her comfort zone once in a while, but shell gripe about it the whole way

Im going to get your womb started, kept thinking of all the details in class.

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ipodsmakemyheadhurt In reply to Tawadi [2011-01-31 23:48:47 +0000 UTC]

lol well she did good when she does XD

you know, that womb comment made me giggle XD "my womb" XD

lol!!

sorry my PC is trying to crash on me if i go and come back XS

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Tawadi In reply to ipodsmakemyheadhurt [2011-02-01 00:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Then dont go!

For some reason when I tried thinking up what a giant womb looked like I kept thinking of termite queens, so Im kinda running with that idea. Its pretty nasty

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alienatedallie [2011-01-31 19:20:36 +0000 UTC]

this is freaking awesome as shit!!! I would love to know what would happen if this thing got lose xD

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-01-31 19:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Shes still a plant so shes not going to go very far unless someone sticks wheels on her planter xD

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-01-31 19:30:05 +0000 UTC]

i noticed, i read the story after i commented cuz i jst spazzed out of its awesomeness xD LOL i have an idea for a alien that is undercover as a scientist

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-01-31 19:35:55 +0000 UTC]

What sort of an alien? Human looking or does he/she have to wear a disguise? Fenix will probably take notice, shes pretty good at reading abnormalities that others might miss

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-01-31 21:30:21 +0000 UTC]

im thinking of that, (species wise) im going to draw her in a human disguise n her true alien form. But i will have it that they have certain ways of doing that so that ppl cannot tell a difference, lol if it is tht way it can be like jst hating on each other the whole time cuz u know about each other n yet every1 else seems clueless LOL i want to draw her sooo bad !! At least her human form, i jst cant get her out of my head !! XD

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-01-31 23:28:41 +0000 UTC]

If anything, Fenix would probably like her, depending on her personality. Fenix isnt a fan of people, but shes always interested in new species Beware being studied!

Draw her! Now Im interested XD Does her species have a ref up?

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-01 01:53:58 +0000 UTC]

i will shortly, jst finishing up oc profiles for my 1 series, n than i want to think up her species n how shell look n stuff. Im like soo pumped 4 this new oc XD LOL

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-01 03:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooh ooh I can help, pick me! *dances excitedly* Im good at species!

*puts on nerd glasses and pulls out clipboard* Now, what class? Mammal? Avian? Perhaps a fish or other aquatic origin?

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-01 14:36:15 +0000 UTC]

hmm ok, mammal/humanoid. i already did a sketch, infact ill upload it with the others i did. Im putting them up now i wanna see what u think of her,cuz i like her im jst unsure if i should use her as THAT alien xD but yesh she is pretty epic

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-01 18:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Which one is she? There are a bunch of aliens but none of them look particularly mammalian...

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-01 18:53:14 +0000 UTC]

shes the poison one, humanoid. i would think that is mammal , were mammals

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-01 19:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Most mammals arent poisonous (most), I guess the spikes threw me off

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-01 19:19:25 +0000 UTC]

there stingers actually, hmm i wouldn't know wut to categorize her as xD

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-01 19:30:01 +0000 UTC]

I vote reptilian, but thats just me. Her human name can be Medusa

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 00:36:28 +0000 UTC]

i still think that a reptilian has many reptile similarities n i wouldn't go with medusa jst becus its such a popular greek mythological monster XD but than again im always picky like that, i dont like taking things lmao

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 00:41:22 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs* Medusa was the first name that popped into my head when I saw a poisonous female creature with tentacles all over her head. Kinda seemed appropriate, but what do I know. >.>

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 03:22:16 +0000 UTC]

i know she soo looks like a Medusa xD i want to make her name sound rly alienated tho, like almost unpronounceable

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 03:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Like I said, something like that can be her "human" name. Walking around with a name like Txngya'Orakc is probably going to raise some eyebrows.

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 03:31:51 +0000 UTC]

LMFAOOO i totally miss read that XD but i think even medusa would also raise suspicions, especially since she looks more normal. She jst has a bit of oddness to her as well, but many ppl at s.o.r.u.s are odd are they not ?

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 03:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Magenta? Most of them have like, stripper names. Nice mythological name would be a nice change. And anyway, it was just a suggestion, you can name her whatever you want, shes yours not mine XD
Most people at SORUS are probably too messed up or too busy to notice. Theyll probably just think shes just a foreigner (which I guess isnt entirely false...)

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 03:50:23 +0000 UTC]

yea u totally got a point there xD ill still keep it in mind im jst like i said picky xD haha

yeaaa... definitely messed up XD i could totally tell that from when the first contest took place xD ohh god all those ppl n their torture xD

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 03:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Its like when Asian people come to the US, they usually take on an easier name for us to say like John or Scott, or a short segment of their actual name. We had a Thai foreign exchange student whos full name was Suppachai Suwanwatcharachat...no joke. I was the only one who could say it XD (of the few people who bothered to try anyway). His nickname, given by his mom, was Moo ("piggy", which is weird, he was thin as a rail. I guess he was a chubby baby or something), so thats what he introduced himself as and what everyone called him. Maybe you could do something like that for your girl? Come up with a horrendously long name name for your girl, but give her a nickname, human or alien, thats a little easier on the tongue for us humans.

Do you know Mass Effect? One of my favorite side characters is an alien named Lilihierax (which I only know cuz I had subtitles on, he never says it). His comment when you ask his name is "You can call me Li, humans have trouble pronouncing my full name" XD I love Bioware

I was looking through the ref sheets for the different usable characters...idk if youve looked at the current contest sheet but theyre pretty raunchy.

Wow this got long fast, sorry! I need to go to bed so Ill stop rambling XD

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 04:03:01 +0000 UTC]

YESS!! THAT WAS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING!!!!!!!!!!! XD Im gonna think up a rly ridiculously long alienated name n than shorten it xD !! n i know it, my bf played it but i havent cuz im an idiot XD LOL! i gotta borrow it or somthing ahah, but ive seen the alien many times he looks sick!!

n whats the contest sheet?

n ahah good night im going now too i guess ull see a bunch of my reff sheets tom XD u should check out the species me n my friend came up with XD!

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 04:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Just start mashing away at the keyboard until you get a string of random letters long enough to call a name.

And yes, you do need to play that game. Both of them. Because its by Bioware, and Bioware is god, and god is good, or so Ive heard. Bioware can do no wrong, and they are FANTASTIC at species/creature creation. Try Mass Effect or Dragon Age wiki, youll be inspired, no joke.

And yay sleep.

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 19:18:13 +0000 UTC]

i did it!! i got Kiwiuwah w'jakeiwuwiu

im gonna call her Kiwi for short XD i love it LOL!


i will, it sounds good. I think ive played a bioware game before, unless im wrong. But isnt bioshock by bioware as well? i sware it is >< but my memory is fuzzy n i havent played it in sooo long! N i use to have Dragon Age !! ur talking about dragon age origins right?? cuz i had it for ps3 n beat it all on my elven mage character n than let my cuzin borrow it for a while, i cant wait for part 2 now XD not to mention a new elder scrolls 5 thats coming out next fall OMFG!! im highly addicted to those types of rpgs xD oh yea im rly sure it will inspire the hell out of me XD videogames seem to be my biggest inspiration !

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 19:36:25 +0000 UTC]

...I hate you. *still trying to pronounce that*

Bioshock is NOT Bioware. Bioshock is by Irrational Games and 2k. Bioware did Dragon Age, Mass Effect, Warhammer Online, and Ultima online, among others. Yes, I play DA: Origins. Definitely look up the wikis, its amazing how much thought they put into the origin, politics, interspecies interaction, appearance, etc of the races they make.

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-02 19:41:10 +0000 UTC]

LMFAOOO thats why i thought it was awesome xD , n ok so i have played a bioware game than i know i have to play mass effect xD ! i know right, if the first one was already as amazing than the 2nd has got to be unbelievable! Ill look it up for sure

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-02 19:53:26 +0000 UTC]

There arent any squid species (yet) but to give you an idea of just how much time they put in to the races, Id like to point out the Hanar [link]

I spend hours just reading the different wiki pages to learn all I can about the intricate workings of the ME universe. I find it fascinating! I wish I could work on stuff like that...

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-03 00:27:59 +0000 UTC]

i saved the link n i already got some inspiration from the Hanar ^_^ something i can use in my aquatic world. Im gonna draw it when i get the chance ^^

i do the same thing!! when i get rly interested in sumthing i can read up on it for hrs, especially mythology n anything on aliens xD my faves of course xD btw i actually believe in aliens its probably why im soo fasinated by them xD

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-03 01:15:55 +0000 UTC]

If you DIDNT believe in aliens I would be more surprised. The universe is infinitely huge, to assume that we are the only things in it is foolish. The question shouldnt be "is life out there?" the question should be "has it come here yet?"

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-03 20:50:01 +0000 UTC]

exactly what i think, that exact quote.

"Has it come here yet?"

I have always thought about that, i have never once doubted their existence becuz it is simply retarded to think there isnt any life out there when yet we can sustain life on our planet.

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Tawadi In reply to alienatedallie [2011-02-03 23:17:02 +0000 UTC]

Foolish though it may be there are plenty who seem to like to think it.

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alienatedallie In reply to Tawadi [2011-02-05 14:40:55 +0000 UTC]

yep, its sad really :\

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Nyxity [2011-01-31 03:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Go Fenix. *Pumps fist in approval*

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Tawadi In reply to Nyxity [2011-01-31 03:17:01 +0000 UTC]

She showed them xD

Go to the SORUS group homepage and enter the contest! I bet you could draw something awesome

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