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cerebraleye [2010-07-12 00:02:04 +0000 UTC]
I like the shading of the black and white background. Yet, I find the spiral effect is not there. To me it looks more like a well of darkness. I think that the body positions are too much in a single circular pattern and not in a spiral pattern downwards. also the body is not turning in a way that leads the eye in a spiral pattern. you have the rotation to sever in each new position so that it looks independent from one another. it looks more like a group of people falling then one person falling. You detail is great, you lines are intense and sharp. I think if you work on the composition more in the sketch place then it will open a new aspect of your work. Keep it up!
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TaylorGarrity In reply to cerebraleye [2010-07-12 01:14:45 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. Thanks for the crit! I had some trouble with this page so, I always appreciate hearing what can make my work better.
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cerebraleye In reply to TaylorGarrity [2010-07-12 04:19:07 +0000 UTC]
I can see where the challange is with that piece. Still, you are doing a great job!
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TaylorGarrity In reply to BorilZaf [2010-07-12 01:17:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks you! Yeah man, that would be awesome! I saw your Bald Avenger and bulletproof Corset pic for Eric and I was blown away! Just spoke with him today and we wanna run it in the book if that's cool with you. Your a badass artist, so we'll run any an all fan art you do brother!
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Fladam [2010-07-11 07:45:48 +0000 UTC]
That's really good. The sense of distance is really hypnotic. The close up facial expression really looks nice.
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CyrusComicProject [2010-07-11 06:01:13 +0000 UTC]
WOW! I love your hatching, I don't use them myself, because it makes it kind of difficult to input color, how does it effect you when you try to put color in, it does matter whether you use photoshop.etc?
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TaylorGarrity In reply to CyrusComicProject [2010-07-12 01:19:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Sometimes color will add to it, but a lot of the time it it just muddies everything up. I color all my stuff in layers when I use digital coloring, that way none of my ink work is compromised.
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Brett-Girod [2010-04-28 05:59:50 +0000 UTC]
He's done for. Reminds me of a super jail transition. Haven't seen it? google it. You will love the animation sequences. I have to applaud your attention to detail even without a back ground you let your pen run wild drawing every strain and vein.
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TaylorGarrity In reply to Brett-Girod [2010-05-03 16:06:05 +0000 UTC]
I haven't seen it. I'll google it. Sounds good from the title though... I'm picturing OZ to the EXTREME!!!!
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TaylorGarrity In reply to usn1 [2010-03-04 00:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Pat! Gotta love Steranko... you know I heard he was once a magician, and that influenced his crazy cool visual effects.
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