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temiel — Not All Caged Birds Sing

Published: 2009-09-03 02:39:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1714; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 32
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Description THEY BROKE UP, GUYS.

Another Astral Arcana picture, very quick pencil/ink job, then equally quick PS colors. About the millionth time I've drawn these guys, and probably not the last "being sad after breaking up" picture.

Characters are Farael and Rian again.
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Comments: 28

Muirin007 [2010-01-21 02:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, darn it!

This is great! I love her hunched shoulders. They sort of suggest the weight of her sorrow.

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temiel In reply to Muirin007 [2010-01-21 02:52:48 +0000 UTC]

NO DON'T WORRY THEY GOT BACK TOGETHER!!!!

I had a lot of fun drawing the really loose body language with this, I almost never get this "gestural" with my drawings, but it was a nice way to do it for this one.

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ParaParano [2009-09-25 16:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Your style is really quite beautiful. I think these characters coupled with your art would tell a really enchanting story.

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temiel In reply to ParaParano [2009-09-25 16:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! That means a lot!! They're all sort of tied in with a storyline, but certainly nothing's written down. I keep thinking I should do a comic, but it's just so much work!

Regardless, thanks for the fave and the kind words. I really appreciate it!

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degdie [2009-09-21 16:18:21 +0000 UTC]

amazing style

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temiel In reply to degdie [2009-09-21 16:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm so glad it made it into the feature!

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bumble-boo [2009-09-17 21:27:19 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so sad and beautiful. I love the expression of your character Rian, it's very convincing. Her face is beautifully and delicately drawn as well! Great work.

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temiel In reply to bumble-boo [2009-09-17 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That's really sweet to say. Looking back, I never intended to work this to finish, but I just really liked the effect of the lines and the simplicity of it. I don't think I'll be able to achieve that kind of spontaneity again for a while, but I really do love this one, so I think it's worth it

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bumble-boo In reply to temiel [2009-09-18 18:56:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! It's funny how sometimes the "fling" pictures (if you will), turn out the best, and the more you work them up, the more they lose their appeal. I guess that it's something to do with the "movement" and emotion of the original sketch and sometimes, it's hard to bring to the finished piece.

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temiel In reply to bumble-boo [2009-09-18 20:13:46 +0000 UTC]

That's exactly it! There's a certain appeal to the worked-up ones too, of course, but it was SO hard for me to learn when to stop and leave it. I think I'm getting a little better, but still not perfect

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bumble-boo In reply to temiel [2009-09-18 21:12:50 +0000 UTC]

It all come with practice! We'll get there.

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Hieyizar [2009-09-17 17:14:06 +0000 UTC]

I really like their expression *.*!! well done!**

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temiel In reply to Hieyizar [2009-09-17 18:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the faves, I really appreciate it

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EnkaOwakura [2009-09-14 15:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Love the clean colors and the line work. I think the proportions of the hands are a little off,maybe it's just me

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temiel In reply to EnkaOwakura [2009-09-14 15:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Hm, they could be, I did this really quick Glad you like it, though! I really appreciate the fave

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Rezwana-S-Khan [2009-09-04 16:28:22 +0000 UTC]

i love the emotion!

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Inkovic [2009-09-04 09:17:12 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece, very well done

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DrearyThoughts [2009-09-03 14:17:38 +0000 UTC]

WHAT??? They broke up?? what the hell happened?

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temiel In reply to DrearyThoughts [2009-09-03 14:30:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so many things... an evil undead cyborg pirate captain named Bloody Robert Kimball opened a black hole over Boston and released a stillborn godling that Trean had to pursue inside the black hole to kill, and she never came out.
Farael, being a dutiful son, decided to avenge her and in doing so had to break a former member of Bloody Robert's crew out of imperial navy jail, thus putting Farael and Rian on the Empire's blacklist.
After killing off Bloody Robert, Farael wanted to regain his standing and rank with the navy and atone for blatantly being a criminal. Rian wanted to go back with him, but he wouldn't let her because they'd lock her up for being a repeat offender, and he told her that "some birds, once caged, never sing as sweetly". Hence the title.
They still love each other, but circumstances forced them apart. I refuse to let them be over, though!! They're so cute, and I'm totally convinced they're in TWOO WUV. Besides, nobody dumps the Ruby Mockingbird THAT easily!

...Sorry for the text wall. Long story.

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DrearyThoughts In reply to temiel [2009-09-03 18:13:02 +0000 UTC]

OMG that is so incredibly romantic! As the story progresses let me know what happens! I'm hooked!

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temiel In reply to DrearyThoughts [2009-09-03 18:30:06 +0000 UTC]

OMG I KNOW *dies* I'll definitely let you know, crazy shit happens all the time

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DrearyThoughts In reply to temiel [2009-09-03 18:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Great
I wish Ramon was into Role playing like stuff...or at least into collaborating on a story.

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smexy-sarah [2009-09-03 13:21:40 +0000 UTC]

i love the faint sketchiness of it. i don't know if that's intentional but it makes it pretty

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temiel In reply to smexy-sarah [2009-09-03 13:26:56 +0000 UTC]

It is intentional. I thought it would look too stark and outliney if I erased the pencil lines, so I kept them to give it an extra dimension. I'm quite pleased with the result

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smexy-sarah In reply to temiel [2009-09-03 13:31:07 +0000 UTC]

you should be, it's very good

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Sahreeb [2009-09-03 05:41:27 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad! And quite lovely. I also like the color palette, and the cloth.

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temiel In reply to Sahreeb [2009-09-03 11:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Yeah, I'm far more pleased with the result of this one than the time I spent on it would warrant. I kind of like the messy, almost-unfinished look.

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TracyLeeQuinn [2009-09-03 02:41:31 +0000 UTC]

oh, so sweet, you know i love the face hold<3 so beautiful, i love your palette!

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