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Published: 2010-09-06 03:25:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 7617; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 0
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Please note: This comic has been discontinued, and does not go past page 29.
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I. Love. THE FIRST PANEL! You did it so well! The shaking movement, the flying droplets of water... it is so damn believable! Awesome job
And the cave. The detail put into it shows that you really put in effort. Great
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Wow....these pages looks so much better, the anatomy, the dialogue, and the awesome first panel on this page.
It made me so sad when he was saying "please dont kill me", it made me feel so bad for him!
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Oh, a question: how many of the pages are you planning on redoing?
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Ideally, up to page 17. Not all of them will be completely redone, many will just have the characters' colors, patterns, and other minor things redone or corrected.
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Ah ok I see. Cool, can't wait to see them!
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YES! NEW PAGE! i has been waiting soooo long!
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I LOVE love love love the water effect you used in the first panel. It really makes it seem like the character is moving. I'v also noticed you've been getting a lot better at your eyes. They use to kinda bug me that way you drew them so big and I'm not even sure how to describe it -which is why I didn't really want to mention it (that and I didn't want to offend you by critiquing and not saying how to fix it)- but now that your eyes are looking better I just wan't to let you know what ever your doing your doing it very well. THat and your backgrounds have improved immensely!! The textures you are now using are very well used and placed. I absolutely love how you draw your dirt. The circle like texture really works well for it. Any ways over all very nice redo pages ^^ You've improved so much since the pages your redoing.
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You mean those huge button-eyes I used to do(big irises, big pupils)? 
And don't worry about critiquing but not having a solution, I appreciate it anyway!
My BGs have come quite a ways, though things like rock are still a challenge.
I think my main problem is that I'm impatient, and want to rush through things and get them posted.
Now I'm working at stepping back and looking over my work before deciding it's finished. Getting someone else to look it over helps, too.
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Aww, poor Night. He's drooling *pets his tired head*
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Awww, poor widdle Nightie-Wightie I just wanna give him huggy-wuggies and kissy-wissies!
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If you like the smell and taste of sopping wet wolf, be my guest.
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