Comments: 30
Cwylldren [2010-12-04 10:07:17 +0000 UTC]
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All right, I probably shouldn't be saying anything because I couldn't possibly make anything like this with only a ballpoint pen. But here's a few things I observed:
First, the positive:
-the fur is absolutely amazing. Though it lacks a bit of the "fuzzy" quality that's easy to do in pencil, it still looks real and is incredibly detailed. The fur on the chin is particularly well done.
- the white whiskers against the black fur is also very difficult and well done
- the general stance and emotion come accross wonderfully
The negative:
- the ears appear a little small, but as I don't know this paticular tiger personally, it might be natural after all
- the whole of the face seems to progressively twist more towards the observer as you go down. For example: the stripes are perfectly centered between the ears, but are no longer so between the eyes. The eyes are in three-quarter view, but the nose twists progressively until the muzzle is almost in frontal view. Be careful of that next time (it's the most difficult part of an animal face and I've made that mistake myself)
- I do like the eyes, but there's a little something missing. Ballpoint pen is tricky, but a very light sheen on the iris would help bring some depth into them, I think. (This is nitpicking of the highest order and feel free to disregard it).
Hope this helps, and keep that ballpoint rolling!
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LisaCrowBurke [2010-12-05 04:33:39 +0000 UTC]
very nice drawing. i love ballpoint pen, too! so much you can do with it, but i hate that red tint... and it's not archival :/
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bobuzumaki [2010-11-29 10:46:27 +0000 UTC]
O_O awesome.
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rebel-rogue-127 [2010-11-17 00:59:57 +0000 UTC]
Great job!!!!! Can't believe you're so awesome with pen!
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Thokage [2010-11-14 20:22:20 +0000 UTC]
awesome o.O
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iytj [2010-11-13 10:59:16 +0000 UTC]
excellent work!
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Howling-Silver [2010-11-13 05:37:40 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!!
I love the detail in the face and fur. The nose looks a bit off at this angle though, looks more like you are seeing it straight on, rather than at an angle like the rest of the picture. Thats the only thing I can really see. You did an amazing job on this piece!
Puts my tiger to shame lmao
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