ForeverMan724 [2009-09-03 04:58:13 +0000 UTC]
dude, this is good man! i love it, i couldnt stop reading until i finished it!
other than a few spelling errors and at least two story descriptions that i couldnt quit understand until i read them over to make sure i was reading the right line for the right character or the right scene description for what was going on (ill read it again and be more specific if you want)
this is a great story! i love the main character being not human but this ilithine <_< right? ^_^ i love that!
keep working it out dude. this is a really cool fantasy story man. i want to read more! lol really O_o i want more.
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