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Meerabelle [2016-04-22 12:03:49 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Meerabelle [2016-04-22 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Nirelle16 [2016-04-09 14:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes~ Traditional art

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Nirelle16 [2016-04-09 15:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes Β 

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Nirelle16 In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-04-09 16:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Β  Β 

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SoulShapedFace [2016-04-09 00:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Very good artwork!

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tooth-chocolate In reply to SoulShapedFace [2016-04-09 09:21:36 +0000 UTC]

thx!

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SoulShapedFace In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-04-10 08:51:32 +0000 UTC]

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Looye [2016-04-05 14:31:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice One

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Looye [2016-04-05 15:24:00 +0000 UTC]

thx!

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AmbergrisElement [2016-03-30 16:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Sehr gute Arbeit bei den Schattierungen und Details.

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tooth-chocolate In reply to AmbergrisElement [2016-03-30 16:23:05 +0000 UTC]

dankeschΓΆn

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TearsofTurquoise [2016-03-25 16:43:22 +0000 UTC]


I really like how you created the violin- it looks quite realistic-the shading, shape, etc is very believable However, I think you could blend in the shading a bit more, as it appears to be less smooth looking in some parts. Another suggestion I have for you is to maybe create a solid background next time, because the ruffles of the fabric distract the eye and make it harder to focus on the beautiful violin and notes. Overall, I think you did a great job with the violin's placement and rendering

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tooth-chocolate In reply to TearsofTurquoise [2016-03-25 17:00:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much for the critic and the advices!

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TearsofTurquoise In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-03-25 17:02:20 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Hope it helped

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Rigiroony [2016-03-25 05:47:43 +0000 UTC]


This is great for a traditional piece. I use to make a lot of these type of things before I got really into digital art, so I know how hard it is.
All I can suggest us maybe blend the violin a bit more. Darkening some of the lines wouldn't be a bad thing either.
Hope this helped ~

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Rigiroony [2016-03-25 09:59:41 +0000 UTC]

yes, thx for the advice!

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Rigiroony In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-03-26 15:42:31 +0000 UTC]

Np ^^

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Santa-Fiasco [2016-03-23 17:28:38 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome
your talent is just wow
itΒ  is in black and white but it still is so vivid
good job

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Santa-Fiasco [2016-03-23 18:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very very much

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Santa-Fiasco In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-03-23 19:19:46 +0000 UTC]

np

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IBAIPshow [2016-03-23 11:09:50 +0000 UTC]

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tooth-chocolate In reply to IBAIPshow [2016-03-23 16:49:05 +0000 UTC]

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movie-book-leki [2016-03-23 01:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm here with

I find this drawing very interesting! I really like it how you filled in the entire page with the drawing! As well, I really like the idea of the music sheets in the background! It's very cool how you actually placed notes on it too! (Is it from a real song?) The violin strings are done extraordinarily well. As well, the shading is absolutely exquisite!

Honestly, there isn't much to change. Although, maybe the violin could have a little more of a 'Woodsy' touch to it. As well, perhaps the music book could be a little bigger.

Anyways, Brilliant job!

Keep up the good work!

-Illya

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tooth-chocolate In reply to movie-book-leki [2016-03-23 06:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique! Nice to hear that you like it.
No the notes are not from a real song. What I really play looks very easy, so I just wrote down some notes that look more complicated, but it wouldn't sound good if someone would play them haha^^

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movie-book-leki In reply to tooth-chocolate [2016-03-24 01:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!
Haha!Β 

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NeuroticPhantom [2016-03-22 23:18:45 +0000 UTC]

My critique:
The top half of the background (not including the book) doesn't fit very well with the side or the bottom.
The shading on the top right side of the violin looks a bit off to me.
Some of the lighting is put in incorrect places.
Some of the notes don't look like actual notes, but I'm no musician, and that's just me nit-picking.Β 

Again, like always, fantastic work!Β  Β 

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tooth-chocolate In reply to NeuroticPhantom [2016-03-22 23:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Yes haha
You are really nit-picking aren't you!
The part which disturbs me the most is the shadow of the violin on the book. The outer line is too strong and it looks really strange

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nightshade145 [2016-03-22 22:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Β Β OMFG THIS IS AWESOME!

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tooth-chocolate In reply to nightshade145 [2016-03-22 23:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much

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kiborgalexic [2016-02-25 17:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Great job!

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tooth-chocolate In reply to kiborgalexic [2016-02-25 19:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Vegeta3690 [2016-02-24 11:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Super! Nice dash

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tooth-chocolate In reply to Vegeta3690 [2016-02-24 12:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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AZNUARY [2016-02-22 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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tooth-chocolate In reply to AZNUARY [2016-02-22 21:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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