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topec — I couldn't like her by-nc-nd
Published: 2013-02-07 05:28:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 470; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 3
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Description It couldn’t be, for you see
It would only end in tragedy
If I tried to swoon
I would look like a buffoon
I’m a goof, not one of the aloof
If I tried in her mind I would go poof
I would lose what we have and I treasure that dearly
The problem is I see her too clearly
Once I saw her shine I knew she'd never be mine
That she sees me as swine
I’ll just stand last in line and after her I will pine
Unable to cope, I mope; thinking that I am such a dope
That for me there is no hope
I’ll never get to hold her hand
I’ll never give her a forever band
Or take her to another land
She will never stand next to me in a dress
Her skin I will not get to caress
And her hair I will never see in its morning mess
I’ll never tell her about how wonderful things went today
She’ll never want to hear what I have to say
I’ll just let this little crush decay
I won’t let her see my heart; I won’t let my feelings show
She’s up on her pedestal, looking at us all below
I just stay in the crowd, cheering her on
She sees me and waves but then she is gone
So I hang my head in shame
Knowing I’ll never set her heart aflame
That she thinks of me as lame
Not even worthy to tame
After all she barely even knows my name
It’s just as well
If in love with me she fell
The entire world I would tell
Knowing that she saved me from my lonely hell
I’ll just stare at her forlorn; my heart torn
Knowing our love will never be born
Deep down my feelings I will shove
We will never be in love
She only thinks of me as a gnome
She’d never give my heart a home
So I’ll never give her a poem
I’ll just add them to my tome
It’s a pity we could never be
But I already know, we would end in tragedy
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Comments: 6

LilysUsername [2013-02-21 20:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful ^^ It really would make a beautiful song. I might adapt it into one, if you'd let me, and if I had spare time xD

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topec In reply to LilysUsername [2013-02-21 22:08:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm honored you like it so much. I've got other pieces of poems if you need more length and I believe I could find a way to make them fit...
So yeah, feel free to put it into a song but I'd really like to hear the song when your done, if that's all right

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LilysUsername In reply to topec [2013-02-22 02:09:22 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to have one of my friends sing it, then, because I'm not the best singer, hehe But definitely!

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topec In reply to LilysUsername [2013-02-22 03:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Okay... I'll send you a note when I think I've fused them to make some sort of sense and I'll let you decide... This should be fun

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WDLady [2013-02-07 06:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, not bad. Might make a nice little song. :3

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topec In reply to WDLady [2013-02-07 18:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Musicals and poems are actually very similar in the way they rhyme. I've always liked musicals Good rap as well but that's harder to find. It's usually crude words set to rhyme.

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