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Published: 2012-06-29 16:05:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 3001; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 17
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The guest star, i.e. the lovely Kumar (the savannah cat hybrid) belongs to thanks again for allowing me to use him!!
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Aww man... That was wrong...
Good job on the page, true poetry.
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I was listening to Deep Purple while looking at the last panels....
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Oh no! QAQ Why?! Noooo! *literally flipping tables on this side of the world*
True you are a truly great creator, I can't kill my OCs as easily as you just made it seem. I prolong their suffering to much or give them a break but you just off and shot Pinni D;
*sad but wants to see how story continues further*
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UMF. I LOVE THE GUARD'S FRECKLES! they are so cute. But NO HOW COULD HE KILL PIN?!
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Yes indeed it is sad...
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Too late! Unfortunately for poor Pinin...
Thanks again for your comments!
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poor pin, i was listening to this when i read it [link] it just made it sadder to me 
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So sad. Your story is so moving, but man, it's just sad.
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I'm very happy to know that you are still following it... Thanks a lot for your sweet comment!
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That's INSAAAANE !!! can't waiiiiiit!!! amazing job again!!suspens is at his top!^^i'm like a groupie waiting for twillight!!!!
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Thanks a lot for all your comments and compliments! I'm overwhelmed! you don't have to wait much, here you are [link]
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They are not allowed to have cookies? I think there must be something specific behind the fact that they killed him for having cookies.
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It's because they believed he stole them. Hybrids are thought to be lower then 'pure' humans and the smallest infractions are grounds for death.
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I couldn't have said it better! Thanks a lot! 
The attention that you put in reading the story really amazes me 
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It's easy to pay attention when something is so well put together!
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Nyoooooooooo Pinni QAQ
Those soldiers have not a bit of compassion Q~Q Though i would guess so, if they are taught to believe that hybrids are lover than humans and animals >.>''
Wonder what will be in next page~ o3o Chapter wrap-up? >w>''
P.S. Kumar's ears are hiding really well behind his hair at first two panels XD law
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Thank you dear! It is a real mistery for me to try to understand what nazi soldiers thought when they killed jews..
Next page will be my usual cumbersome considerations about life and death ...
Ahhhhhhh I forgot them again!! I want to bury myself.. how can I be so careless? I hope won't kill me for this.. 
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Re-read the page again >w>'' Noted one thing in dialogue >w<''
Where Ma Vlast say "Have you heard?" It might be better to use "Did you hear?" current version sounds more appropriate for something Ma Vlast is re-telling o3o'' While second one i think is better suited for sudden sounds >w<''
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Thanks a lot!
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You are welcome >w<~ And it's alright >w>'' That happens XD *pets* After all you have faithful readers to check on them and help spot~ >W<
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I have no idea either o3o'' We can only guess though =w='' Or speculate what kind of thinking is needed to be for a human not to appear to be human in ones mind and beliefs >w>''
Awww >w< I see o3o *wiggles* Am curious to see~ >W<
It's ok~ >W< Doubt Furu will mind it much XD And that happens ewe'' *pets*
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NO!!!......
Lackeys with guns do not make Soldiers....and would have shot them both if I was there.....
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Thank you my dear! I'm sure you would have done it! (with your newly traded sniper rifle 
Too bad for Pin that you were not there!
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ;(
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Noooo! D: Please don't tell me Pin died! ;_;
Why would they shoot him just because someone GAVE him cookies?! >_<
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You will see it very soon my dear...
Thanks for your kind comment, as always!
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You're welcome! ^^
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Pin, no!
Can't wait for the next page, i love the story, the art, and the characters ^^
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Thanks a lot for reading it!
Right now I'm writing the author comment for the next page... it should be ready very soon...
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