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Published: 2007-11-09 15:01:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1395; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 30
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Description This is one of many I wrote this summer.

Lost love?
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Comments: 15

demonboy81 [2011-02-26 15:32:14 +0000 UTC]

That made me cry cause of some thing I am dealing with right now... May I use that?

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JoseRamirez [2009-04-07 02:52:07 +0000 UTC]

This speaks directly of how I feel in the current situation I am in in my life, thank you.

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tsims533 In reply to JoseRamirez [2009-04-13 01:12:53 +0000 UTC]

I remember the day I wrote it. I remember how I felt at the time. I hope you feel better soon.

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VisualPoetress [2008-03-26 04:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautfiul heartfelt words

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tsims533 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-03-26 16:10:22 +0000 UTC]

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DiamondGirlFL [2008-03-26 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]

how true....you think you have it....then, discover you never did....

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DJLD [2008-03-26 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Been there-- done that!

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TSHansen [2007-12-24 06:52:27 +0000 UTC]

so many questions felt, unasked echoes reach are souls from some vast far away mountain. Love a forever thing in this world but a mayflies life strangely we look at it departing in disbelief.. Mystery within mysteries. I to have been deaf to its call, not knowing its name until its long gone.

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tsims533 In reply to TSHansen [2007-12-25 05:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Well said!

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AnnaKirsten [2007-11-17 09:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful pro's... I know the feeling!

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blackclawinc [2007-11-09 16:45:55 +0000 UTC]

well done the poem stirs th the soul and tugs at the heart strings and the mood that is created it only described by blue

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tsims533 In reply to blackclawinc [2007-11-09 17:30:59 +0000 UTC]

That was deep man! Thanx!!

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blackclawinc In reply to tsims533 [2007-11-09 23:17:44 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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meeden [2007-11-09 15:40:45 +0000 UTC]

this is one of those amazing poems that grabs your attention with the image and then the words spiral up and down as the emotions would within the heart. Well done!

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tsims533 In reply to meeden [2007-11-09 17:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanx sooo much! I've never submitted any of my poems until today. I wasn't sure anyone else besides me would like it.

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