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Unaccompanied-me — Misogyny, Misandry.
Published: 2008-09-26 02:13:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 389; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Throwing their nets outlungs like a steamboat
(Javelin hearts
Javelin hearts)
grapeshot firing outwards like teeth
like rubies bloody rubies
all over the floor
over the floor
in the crowded air
current sea
throwing their nets out
(Vapid javelin hearts)
catching the fish that aren't
there in their minds
UFO telescoped eyes
guns guns
All of it firing squad splendor
All of it washing in Magma
stones become water
and water is air and sound
slashing and clanging and noising
drownitout plugitout
submerge.
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Comments: 23
violent with whiplash, the nature of people, the things we create and make which only ensnare
well, these are the things it made me think of
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Then you've got an excellent hold on what I was going for. Thank you!
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really powerful... there is an implied manicness, through the jumbled phrasing, the crazy images... lots of deep stuff going on and i notice you mentioned thom yorke ^, i was literally just about to make that comparison.
you've captured an element of his apocalyptic/social/political/abstract style but also made it your own very effectively.
this is too cool
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Wow, thank you very much! I've always felt some kind of connection with Thom Yorke, like our minds work in similar ways.... not that I always understand him, but, y'know. I take that as a great compliment!
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well, from reading your stuff i'd say you definitely share something with thom in there, and that is no bad thing
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What does that mean?
Actually this was sort of intended to be a song... to which the music will never be written, so it's left a poem, but if anyone's ever heard Thom Yorke's "Skip Divided" I imagine it would feel like that.
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wow, I'm depressed I havent kept up with your stuff.
and even more depressed that you and I haven't talked at all 
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I think you'd be more depressed if you had kept up with my stuff... it's sorta taken that turn... lol...
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I like it anyway. :3
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Whoa, I bet I completely missed the point of that.
But I really liked the use of words and all.
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Well what do you think of it? What does it make you think of?
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Well, fishing (of course). Kindof makes me think of the way people put themselves so openly out there, without fear of being hurt, and children, who don't know fear well enough to hide from it...
And then the way it can all go downhill.
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You're pretty close with the people putting themselves out there thing...
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Wow, really? That's a nice metaphor you got there.
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That's a little part of it though... its just about how loud people are about nothing, kind of. It's hard to explain...
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No, I get it. Kindof...
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I only kind of get it myself to be honest... like I know what I'm feeling and why, but its hard to express it in any way except jumbled images...
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