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Flora-Tea [2019-01-25 19:55:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the white highlights you've got going on now. It adds depth and makes it much easier to see Azure

Something I'm curious about though is the way you draw the beaks. Sometimes they have a "puppy mouth" thing going on, but at other times (like at certain side-view panels) they have normal-looking beaks? Or am I just confused? XD

Also, this is a bit random but since I found this recently, I thought I'd share it! An article that I find helpful when it comes to dialogue:

6 Clever Ways to Improve Dailogue

Here are a couple more I've saved that I'd like to share!

“Show Don't Tell

Essential Screenwriting Tips

These are mostly related to handling dialogue and such but yeah XD I found them interesting and I hope they can be of some help maybes. Anyways, keep up the great work! Excited to see what happens next

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Panapoints [2019-01-25 17:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that's sweet! Also, the use of white lines is spot on!

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