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Verdokai — Death Magnetic p2
Published: 2010-10-20 07:04:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1226; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 14
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Page 1 introduces the world (as some sort of flaky deathness world), while page 2 introduces the character (it's all very pretentious). Not much happens still and he looks like he's burning radioactively, but hey, fun is fun right?
This also introduces the grey ink that sort of ruined a few pages later on, but hey, experimenting is experimental!
Eventually this'll get some text.
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Comments: 19
Seriously, you're so good it actually hurts a bit.
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I like how it just fadning out intp a blank white pages gives the picture a sense of movement.
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I love the detail and the composition, awesome layout
what's your theme?
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It's "I'm a Scavenger" 
thank you very much!
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ok, i can already say that this one is better thent he first! the added stroke quality and movement is increasingly better and adds so much more emotion to the story!! the movement and motion you have is very!!"howles moving castle" style. i dont knwo the real name of that particular style but its Amazing!! with acaptial A!
your over all light dark balance is much better as well. and yes i deffinatly see how you are setting it up for the text. this is "where the side walk ends" quality here!
the only slightly negative thoughts i have is the "smoke", thats what i assume it is, looks just a bit.. crouded. but jsut a little bit.
over all the motion and emotion created by the motion and set up are very stunnign and pleasing. i have to give this one a 9/10. you realy have captured interest in the story with just these first two picturs!! bravo!
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crouded? Do you mean crowded? Or do you mean clouded?
Thanks.
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crowded. im severly dyslexic and when i type the letters all come out crazy lol. sorry.
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Yes, I noticed - it's difficult to decipher your messages some times, but usually it's not so hard to figure out a word from the context
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i do not mind at all 
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Awesome! I agree with w176.
This world seems interesting and the style with which you draw it feels funky and roughly; which I dig big big.
Really freakin nice. There's not many amateur comics which I would say impress me with any touch of originality, but this might do so.
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Rawr! Upload moooooooare! I want to show this comic to the world.
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Let's wait with that until it's got text and stuff
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Interesting thoughts! Nice drawing. Btw. how do you do these clickable pictures? What HTML is used to display that?
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Just take the thumb code from the deviation and paste it into the artist's comment. Thumb codes can be found to the down right of the image - along with the quick links and sharing options
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Aaaaah.....thanks. I like that! I will use that in future!
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This looks awesome! You've got the sketchy pen style mastered.
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