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Octorin [2011-01-27 20:38:04 +0000 UTC]

The whole book (the pages) looks awesome, but this is my fav.
That door is so nicely done! Awesome work with the lightning! And he burning/smoking up: lovely texture and good pose and expression for the guy

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LeaDragonmaster [2011-01-05 15:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Gillar verkligen bilden till höger! Perfekt tema för skräckfilmer o dyl. Kanske ett alernativ till en tavla åt mig?

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w176 [2010-12-28 22:33:54 +0000 UTC]

I noes! Surprice. I like how the door both seeem like a promise and a threat

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Alkanchel [2010-10-28 13:00:25 +0000 UTC]

as of general composition, I think the left panel is absolutely gorgeous; the balance between dark and light, fire and shadows is superbly done. the right panel however I feel is slightly unbalances in detail level towards the top of the panel. the blank space on the floor leaves the image feeling unbalanced and out of focus.

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Alkanchel [2010-10-28 12:56:15 +0000 UTC]

also. i think you could a more defined transition from hip to left thigh

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Alkanchel [2010-10-28 12:44:39 +0000 UTC]

there is something off with his left elbow, also, I think you got something wrong with the shadows and lighting on the right picture (even though it's pretty stunning)

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solvebring [2010-10-28 10:07:30 +0000 UTC]

Forgot to comment the expression of his face on the first one.
It's great, lots of emotion.

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solvebring [2010-10-28 10:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Especially the illustrations of that "Dead End".
Like those details very much, even if they're few. That trash bin is a real nice one.

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tinzart [2010-10-25 09:29:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice pencil work.

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wiccanbear [2010-10-25 08:53:08 +0000 UTC]

ok, i love these two pages. seperatly. together they are too much. the eye cant deside on which part to look at.
let start with left page with the boy. again, everyt hing has imporoved in your style. he looks amazing! stroke, balance you got it all goign on here in perfection! event he smoke looks right and not to busy, becasue its supposed to be.
only question i have is, why put so much detail in all of him , from his amazing face to the smoke and fire to the great stroke count of his body and then totaly blow it on making whimp hands? they acctualy stand out like sore thumbs becasue of their over simplicity. it detrackts from the rest. i think if you added even the slightest more detail to them or even shadowing along the bottem it would slove the problem.
as to the right page. wow, just wow hunny. then only thing needed with this page would be that its too close tot he other page. witht hem both having so much happening in both pictures its an over whelming image to take in. i'd sugjest adding about an inch of space between them if you plan on scanning them or redoign them ever. or find a way to join the two together. as they are now they are sperate and too close. i personaly would just extend the brick wall over jsut a little on to the left page so that you get move of a connection feeling to them both. maybe bring a little garbage along with it.
other then that i'm loving this. the style and story have captured my imagination witht he beauty of the set up and the intrige of what the hell is going on! and you know what they say, if you can get them in the first three pages youll have a reader for the rest of the book.

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