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Vtruss1 ā Perched Griffin
Published: 2014-05-08 13:48:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 28
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Alright, another practice run.Ā I had a whole bunch of words this time but I couldn't post as the website decided to be a butt.Ā To summarize, I like this better than my last one.Related content
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This piece has nice style. It really feels like your own. Fucking love the wings so much that I feel a bit inspired by them and the path you took to creat them. Along with the treee, which has way better contrast and lighting than that other piece I critiqued of yours, the one with the Link pony.
It took me a little to realize that her hind legs look a little weird, though, like they were chopped off or something. I kind of understand this from trying to draw griffins before and making sure their body seems right. That's the one flaw I see in this whole thing, but it still leaves a fair enough impact on me.
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Also, if we're going to be realistic here, that griffin looks like she's in the shadows, or that she -should- be. But I'm not complaining about that so much.
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Great pic!
I feel it seems kind of dark,
and the title doesn't seem to fit it just right...
it looks like she's spying rather than hunting.
Her back paws are kind of unnoticed, and thy seem to blend in too much with the tree.
The background is amazing! I like the 2-3 trees tangled together as her hiding spot.
a little much detail to the griffon and less to the background ( id of a weird transition )
As her face stands out most of anything else in the pic.
anyway, i'm no professional at Critiques, but just my opinion ( ur drawing is WAY better than mine e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you for the advice.Ā As for the title, dA won't let me change it.Ā It's not supposed to be named that so now I have to wait for the website to be fixed so I could rename and put in description.
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Cool posing, quite awesome art! ^_^ I'll have to share this with a friend who loves Gilda, unless he hasn't found it himself heh
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Thank you and share away!
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Nah.Ā Just hiding for a bit.
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i feel the need to hunt a griffin now O.o
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Maybe that's why he's in a tree.
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im a pegasus... nowhere to hide muhahahaha
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