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Description From The Adventures of Fox Tayle, Chapter 17

We continued down the hall for about another hundred feet before we came to a door. It was unmarked. "Here, Fox, there's something I want to show you before we leave." Carlos swiped his keycard in the lock and opened the door. The motion-sensing lights came on upon our entering, and I was confronted with a disturbing sight. Along the left wall were two glass chambers identical to the one I had been in, but they were filled with something other than water. It had a yellowish tint to it. Carlos was silent as I took in the scene. Inside the chambers were two creatures that looked similar to me. They were roughly six feet tall and covered in fur, and had tails and digitigrade legs like myself. They were both canine, but each had a different head shape and fur color. Their eyes were closed and they weren't moving. They seemed to be asleep ... until I noticed the neat row of bullet holes across the chest of one. They were dead! Then I realized the awful truth -- these two corpses were Wolf the gray wolf and Shep the German Shepherd, my counterparts from the experiment! They had both been shot and killed in their cages on that fateful day ten months before. I fought to keep from vomiting at the terrible epiphany.
Carlos spoke up. "Dr. Cardiff couldn't bear to have them carted off to the furnace. He had their bodies preserved in formaldehyde in these chambers after their deaths. They've been here ever since. Cardiff comes here every day and looks at them. He locks himself up in here sometimes. Most of us think it's a morbid curiosity he has. Others believe he's haunted by them."
I leaned up against the glass of Shep's chamber and looked at his face. He had a peaceful expression, probably from muscle relaxation after death. I imagined that he probably died a horrible death, shot clean through by multiple rounds from an automatic weapon. Wolf looked much the same way, but his mouth hung open slightly, his tongue out. They had been brought into this world to be made into soldiers, to kill. Instead, they were the ones who were killed, for no reason other than that they were no longer wanted. Had they had the chance to plead? To protest? To defend themselves? I doubted it. And I myself was alive only because they were dead. Only I had escaped, because the gunfire that killed them woke me up. I already had a sinking feeling that I was the only anthropomorphic animal on the planet, and now having seen the proof that Wolf and Shep were dead, I could finally believe it.
"We need to keep moving," Carlos said urgently. "VΓ‘monos. Let's go."
I touched the glass with my hand and closed my eyes. "I'm so sorry," I whispered. Then I turned and followed Carlos through the door on the other side of the room. The lights shut off behind us, darkness again hiding the lifeless bodies of Wolf and Shep from the world.

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Comments: 33

SyukriTheFury [2011-11-21 21:05:00 +0000 UTC]

try listening to [link] while reading this part, its epic! anyway, love the chapter, and the series as a whole. keep up the great work!

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Earthpatriot117 [2010-04-27 00:46:25 +0000 UTC]

What's the whole story called?

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Dogman15 In reply to Earthpatriot117 [2021-11-08 11:54:42 +0000 UTC]

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s64 [2009-05-24 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]

*sniff* Poor Fox...

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TailstheChosenOne [2008-12-09 00:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Sorry to hear that bud. I know how ya feel. I lost my mother this way. *Sigh* Humans can be so cruel sometimes.

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dracotharpian [2008-11-29 09:19:28 +0000 UTC]

This is so...touching! but i would rreally like to read it from the begining. which story is the start of the series?

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Ffex [2008-10-28 05:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Dang. You got a good story here. I just found it. Good art work too. I could spend a lot of time reading. Unfortunately, I must go to bed, I'll chk it later. Thanks

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Dogman15 [2007-11-02 03:32:55 +0000 UTC]

I have to admit, I've known of this picture's existence for quite a while now, even before I became a deviant; and I must say - you, Jay, are a very good writer AND artist.

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Antransfare [2007-11-01 13:13:52 +0000 UTC]

I still think that's Griff >>

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wannabemustangjockey In reply to Antransfare [2007-11-01 20:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Griff's not dead.

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Antransfare In reply to wannabemustangjockey [2007-11-02 01:25:18 +0000 UTC]

So his sleeping in the tube? >>

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sliverwolf16 [2007-09-01 02:57:04 +0000 UTC]

man let me know when it will be published i buy like 100 copies

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CidolfasSilverwing [2007-07-24 18:02:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm at a loss for words over the heart-devouring tragedy depicted.

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kenai21 [2007-07-09 16:47:50 +0000 UTC]

wow that hurts deep down.. to truely know your alone and for those you knew to be on display..do you have the rest of this story so far on here i would wish to read it though i hope it is not as sad as this part completely. one reason this hits me hard is i saw a grey wolf get shot for no reason other than the peoples boredom and i have a german shepard-wolf mix. this really hurts cause whenever i read something i put myself as the character i read of and feel their pain

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kenai21 [2007-07-09 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]

wow that hurts deep down.. to truely know your alone and for those you knew to be on display..do you have the rest of this story so far on here i would wish to read it though i hope it is not as sad as this part completely. one reason this hits me hard is i saw a grey wolf get shot for no reason other than the peoples boredom and i have a german shepard-wolf mix. this really hurts cause whenever i read something i put myself as the character i read of and feel their pain

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timid-wolf [2007-07-08 04:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Im really sorry about the previous comment. This just was so sad it tore at me. Please, if you recieve this could you respond?

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wannabemustangjockey In reply to timid-wolf [2007-07-08 04:50:15 +0000 UTC]

It's ok, I was trying to make that part of the chapter really hit the reader hard. I'm not offended by your previous comment or anything.

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timid-wolf In reply to wannabemustangjockey [2007-07-08 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I just have a thing for german shepherds, esp soldiers.

Would you mind if I did a fanfic of this? It helps me when Im depressed, to ressurect characters that I liked . Im still going to give you original credit and so-on. Im just asking to borrow the characters or maybe resurrect the german shepherd or something. I can even send you the story first if you want

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wannabemustangjockey In reply to timid-wolf [2007-07-08 18:54:17 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate your interest, but I've been discouraging fanfics of this story (there's a LOT more to it than just this part) since I've been working on it for 2 years and would like to publish it someday. Sorry.

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timid-wolf In reply to wannabemustangjockey [2007-07-09 01:44:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay, its fine

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sliverwolf16 [2007-03-19 23:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Damn, that's sad. I feel sorry for him.

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timid-wolf [2007-02-18 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, could you make it any more depressing?

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JFW [2007-01-13 06:34:43 +0000 UTC]

GRIFF? D8 * Taps the glass * GRIFF??? >O<

NOOOO! >O< * breaks the glass and steals him * >x3 mehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehe

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professionalamature [2006-11-06 09:43:29 +0000 UTC]

*Sniff.. Sniff*

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vampslust [2006-05-11 19:40:56 +0000 UTC]

that is the saddest part of the story other than the first girl that died

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Kuzzy [2006-04-28 22:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I've been a little hesitant to reading your chapter (so much and so long!) but this sparked an intrest in me. I think I will get down to it as soon as I finish of my school things.

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ZebraRaine [2006-04-22 22:05:50 +0000 UTC]

Really nice!

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kushaba [2006-04-22 21:24:06 +0000 UTC]

oh my god *starts to tear up* those monsters!

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SargerenComis [2006-04-22 00:48:01 +0000 UTC]

That is tear jerking. You really have a great pic. I love the way you did the reflections on the floor.

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meshugga [2006-04-21 04:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Weird how a work of fiction can stir you more than a newspaper telling you about a bus carrying seventysome people careening off a cliff does. Really moving. Shows just how human Fox really is...

Interestingly enough the harsh labaratory lighting actually makes it kind of sadder. Its like...bodies of sentient beings on display in a museum.

Ive just kind of got the creeps right now so my words are kind of jumbled. Good job.

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wannabemustangjockey In reply to meshugga [2006-04-21 20:32:41 +0000 UTC]

You're right about that; when I heard about that bus crash my thought was wow, that sucks, but how can they wonder how it happened...when the bus was way overloaded, driving way too fast on a dangerous road?

It is amazing how fiction (especially when it features furry animals) can have a greater impact on people than real life. Creeps you out, does it? Well them, my work here is done...

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CabooseRIF [2006-04-21 01:30:54 +0000 UTC]

wow- that's a realy moving story, i need to read all of it. oh- and the picture is just as good as the story behind it

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TaiOMega [2006-04-21 00:56:37 +0000 UTC]

*sniffle*

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