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Wasserbienchen — IBAW 93: Lightweighted
Published: 2013-03-09 14:13:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 16566; Favourites: 164; Downloads: 87
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-> NEXT … I'm splitting the next part. Because I planned to squeeze in too much apparantly… anyway, yeah.
Enjoy, I gotta get out! xD
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Comments: 121
The art has improved. <3 Ahhhh~
I like how you make it so Bianca is doing what she believes is right. And White is doing what she believes is right. Once again, when you change the perspective and look at the situation from their eyes, their reasons make sense. It's justifiable for them to act this way given the circumstances, it's just really unfortunate their decisions had to clash this badly.
Another gray area...and really? You can see sooo much fault in both of them it makes me smile, because not only are you unsure of who's really "right" on the matter, but who would you side with? They're both wrong at certain levels...I love that human aspect of it. We're so used to seeing clear cut good and evil that this is really refreshing.
Also, I really like how you resolve conflicts. Making it more human to not hold a grudge forever and to resolve differences...it's way more realistic. (and heartfelt in my opinion. someone who can forgive shows a lot more dimension about about their character than somehow who gets revenge)
Soooo, instead of the traditional haircut, she ditches the hat?
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Makes sense. This is pokemon after all, the hat is like, essential.
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White's eyes are so beautiful!
your story perfectly represents the meaning of the game, the virtues embodied by the legendary Pokemon and everything is as mature as it should be!
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R is kinda a pansy... but that's cool because it's no fun if everyone has the same personalities! Love your story!
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Pfff, took me like 5 hours to catch up with this thing, but damn, was it worth it. You have an amazing story going, can't wait to see where it'll lead.
Keep up the great work~<3
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when do you upload your comics? Is there a fixed date?
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Nope, sorry. They get released as they get done. It doesn't usually take that long, however, so usually you won't need to wake exceptionally long. ^^" So just be patient a bit.
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oh. I really like your comics, I recently found it. The story is amazing.
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My Favorite Nuzlocke Series!! Keep up the good work!
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Thank youuu <3 I shall!
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You are amazing at this. The whole Nuzlocke, a phenomenal new spin at Pokemon. Congratulations.
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Damn this is awesome.
Maybe I should start shipping N x White XDD
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your nutzlocke challenge is really amazing, how do you draw! i'm curious to the next page, what will happen with n and white!
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Text walls and I have a very love-hate relationship, apparently, computer problems and all. And I'm still not the slightest bit sorry to be dumping this on you. :3 /shot
Well. Wow. What a page, continued disrespect for the environment (I swear that this littering is going to catch up to White someday, if only in crack) and all.
The panels in the second scene are flippin’ amazing. 
Moving on, N proves that he can’t help but creep on White even when he’s not in the game, but it’s good to see that Elesa (or was it Lauren?) actually got through to him. He just bought a one-way ticket to disaster, though, given that this arc’s coming to a close and will definitely not result in sunshine and roses, even if White doesn’t transcend dimensions and have Naub burn down the tower so she can make a political statement or something like that. Wait, that can’t happen; Naub’s not there and Champ can’t use Flamethrower. /shot
Speaking of which... she’s trying to accomplish what, exactly, by bringing N along? Sure, maybe standing outside the tower’s locked gate is risky, but can’t they just go on a(n awkward, nonromantic) walk for a while? If they get caught I won’t be terribly surprised if she tries to put the blame on him, though that also seems kinda out of character. Hmm. It’s suspicious behavior, to say the least, and as always I’m curious to see what happens next, even if I probably won’t be getting a healthy dose of stream spoilers any time soon~
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Wow, I love the way you draw eyes *u* And, yeah, you portray the characters and their inner turmoil very well, even just looking at their expressions ^^ And I especially love that panel where White lets go of the hat! It could be a standalone picture! Great perspective and atmosphere~
And oh man, I can't wait to see what's going to happen with N in that tower- I have a feeling they might run into some trouble! Plus, I really enjoy the fact that White looks so confident in the last few panels
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GDI WHITE YOU ALREADY GOT IN TROUBLE FOR LITTERING ONCE! HAVE YOU LEARNED NOTHING?!
But no, that was honestly my favorite panel. I love the perspective as she lets go of the hat and the look on her face. It was just incredible. I can really tell you've been working hard on your portfolio--the gains are showing in your art here as well!
I love the panels leading up to White's decision as well. The messy hair, clearing her face, the focus on her determined eyes... it was a really good transition. Now she's acting more like Lauren, I think. She's bolder in her actions and she is thinking them through (proved when she wondered if she'd get in trouble or not). White is more at ease with herself and her Pokemon. She's really grown from the girl who almost punched N for offering help to Sushi.
I really like N's reaction to apologizing to her. He can't quite look at her, and that makes me think he doesn't have to apologize often. This is a good experience for both of them, I believe. That will somehow be twisted horribly and go very wrong knowing you. Hey, White still has to get her scar, right? And if you keep to the update schedule, there are only 2 more pages left!
We'll see about that.
Speculation where this could go horribly wrong: White is with N, who Elesa now knows is real. There's a reason that Celestial Tower is closed at night... that's when they erect new graves and N/White will be caught! Skyla is there for some reason mourning her Ninetails. N and White--OHOHOHOHOH.
The ghosts in there! That's why it's closed at night--they probably become more active! So White and N could get in trouble with the Chandelure and Elygem lines while inside. N can't talk to Pokemon, so he'll be next to useless in getting them out of the situation, so White will have to battle? Maybe? Or she refuses to and gets her new scar protecting N (or Nuria's grave or Champ?) and they run away?
Ahhhhhh now I'm even more excited than I previously was and I didn't think that was possible. Well done as always!
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Aww sweet N^^
He was an asshole maybe but he is soo sweet now
He is not a bad guy
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This new White seems more bold.... More interesting.
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Thank you, thank you, thank you. Aaaaaah, I like this page way more than I should!
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Ooh, Ms. White - taking little N for a walk on the wild side! This should be entertaining. And you know what they say about apologies: after you make up, you can make out!
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Do you know what would have been very powerful? If this update ended right after White throws away her hat and says, "Goodbye." I honestly thought that's where it was going to end. Seeing the next part right after it...kind of got rid of that intensity.
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True.
Bad decision making on my part. (Mostly caused due to me insisting that I needed to have exactly 95 parts… which may not be possible after all anyway. =_
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Ah, it got to be too long? So it might be more than 95 parts either way?
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Yeah ^^" We'll see I guess?
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*shrug* Whatever happens happens.
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Hmm... *begins thinking of various possible plot twsts*
(I know I've said this before, but holy crap I love how you draw N's hair.)
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YYYAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
THIS COULD BE SO GOOD FOR BOTH OF THEM!!!!
Ah... clever Wasserbienchen! I assumed that since N snapped at White, any chance of them working together was over. Maybe it will be, maybe it won't. N's had time to think about it, and he hopefully came here ready to accept that people can change for the better. I wonder what Evera's plan is, and if White will take part in it...
AAUUGGHHH!!!!
They both look so mature, like they are going to act like responsible adults.
(I don't meant that they look like adults, most of humanity refuses to be responsible or reasonable, and it looks like the two of them are both)
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You've outdone yourself!
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Amazing how simply throwing something away can have such an effect.
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Was ist eigentlich aus diesem Experiment von N und Evera mit den Pokebällen geworden? Haben die beiden irgendwelche Schlüsse daraus ziehen können?
Ich frage mich oft, was für ein Ende diese Geschichte wohl nehmen wird, aber um ehrlich zu sein, habe ich keine Ahnung. Ich kann mir allerdings nicht vorstellen, dass es ein Happy End wird ...
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Duuu wirst schon sehen ^^
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this part=awesome. the first half was simply beautiful, and also the way white decided to leave the past behind or at least i hope it's something like that was very well done (especially the giant panel where the hat flies away, wow
champ! we haven't seen any of your pokemon on a while, glad they're still there
...oh. oh. OH. a wild N appeared!
where did he jump out from all of a sudden? well, however, i'm glad he did, and i'm glad he seems somewhat beck to normal
break inside a cemetery? ojoj, let's see where this is going
great page as always!
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Hahaha, thanks. And yeah, the hat was always somewhat of a symbol of how affiliated White felt with the League, and… yeah, so it's very… symbolic. (Surprise surprise.)
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JFHVVKLKCHjfjdsbfdsbkdsbks Dammiiiiiitt I can't handle it all of this soo epic and sjshdjshdjshdjsdffff Excuse me I'm just going to go there and cry the place ful of rainbows.
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Eeeeeeee Rainbows! <3
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Ach, White ist so viel selbstbewusster und cooler geworden, seit sie die Seiten gewechselt hat...*____*
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Oooh, love the panel with the eyes! That somehow really struck a chord.
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There's something about Champ's eyes that I really really really like. Everyone else's eyes in this chapter, but Champ's in particular. Red eyes for a serperior never really sat well with me... ^^
Also? That hat? Glad to see it go. Every time I try and draw a character with a hat, I fail miserably. Plus, it means White kind of gets a Significant Haircut without losing that hair you draw so well!
I'm looking forward to whatever comes next!
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Champ's eyes are probably my favourite part about him to draw ^-^
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I like the panel of White standing on the fence - really good pose. Also N's hair in the foreground, very nice shading
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Hoping this at least turns into something a little better for White. I think of all the things she's been through so far, having her torn between both sides and almost entirely alone was the one situation that really made me feel bad for her. D':
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why do i feel like they are gonna kiss.
please make them kiss.
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OH NO NO KISSY~? ;w;
thats okay~
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