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I think I killed my gray markers… I hope I can get them replaced.

Second and final part of my audition. That makes a total of 13 and a half pages all drawn within the span of roughly 3 weeks… I think that’s considered a record for me comic wise.

The coloring I tried to pull off here was a sort of contrast/retro look. With only a hand full of selected colors (not counting the different shades of the same color) and filling the panels with just enough to bring out the characters and not make it look too bland.

The reason I drew the flashback of events in a sorta stick figure form is because the original concept was to use my persona form. But since the rules say I have to be human, I can cheat with my story concept by just doing stick figures to portray the events (this is cause if I do make it to the next round, I plan to be teamed up with =Cheeko-001 , so without saying that I got chanced coming to the Real like her, it could be part of it, does that make any sense?)

In any case, should I get picked to continue to the next round in the tournament, or not, I learned a great deal just doing this audition. So much so that I feel a new sense of motivation to better produce EH at a timely basis.

Anyway, here’s to hoping I get chosen. Good luck to all you guys out there who are also auditioning.

Done fore the Artist At The Ready tournament
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Comments: 60

Wazaga In reply to ??? [2011-05-26 12:22:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much. but this was for the first contest 2 years ago. you can find the new audition pages in my gallery

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1nky In reply to Wazaga [2011-05-26 12:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh God, whoops. XD Sorry!

(Rushes to other piece.)

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Riverfox237 [2009-08-31 19:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Hi, Wazaga! ^^ Finally dropped by to comment on your wonderful comic. I found it when auditions first came out and was kinda drowned by the number of auditions (ugh fail), but I thought you deserved a real comment. Because your audition is absolutely lovely. (Also was delighted to find out that you're also the Wazaga who's friends with Cheeko; I just read both your webcomics earlier this week and loved them, so I came searching on DA for you and...I'm rambling again, pff. Ignore me and my constant need to explain things. XD)

Anyhoo! I really love your characters! Phox is beautiful, and I love her polite form of speech. And Rocky is abso-stinkin'-lutely adorable, especially in those bottom panels there. Your pacing and storytelling also rock; this was a really interesting introduction, awesome way to catch peoples' attention in the beginning! And I agree with certain other commenters, the stick figures are cute and I don't think they are cheating at all. ^^ Gives it a fun flashback feel. You have obvious comicing talent, getting all of these interesting perspectives and backgrounds in there. Last but CERTAINLY not least, your coloring skill is beautiful! I marvel at anyone who can use markers that effectively, especially as you did on that first page!

Welp, on to reading the rest of the entries you made. ^^ Congrats on getting all the way to the second round, btw! And amazing job on your audition!

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FeretStudios [2009-07-09 13:56:03 +0000 UTC]

The angle of the first panel, at the top, is very cool.

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Wazaga In reply to FeretStudios [2009-07-09 17:53:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I bet the vanishing points are all screwed up though. it was completely free hand.

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FeretStudios In reply to Wazaga [2009-07-10 02:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Eh, who needs vanishing points?
XD I kid.

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Skylord [2009-07-02 05:43:47 +0000 UTC]

You may find this an impertinent question, but enlighten me:

Was there a specific reason you went from full-colour markers to a more subdued colour scheme? And was this more in the interest of time constraints, or was it something you intended from the get-go?

I'm just curious, is all.

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Wazaga In reply to Skylord [2009-07-02 09:31:28 +0000 UTC]

well, it's a little bit of everything really...

I've always had a major problem with keeping deadlines with myself when it comes to making comics. and because of it, my personal webcomic has been sorta suffering.

Auditioning for the tournament opened several opportunities for me. one was the need to create, write and produce a short comic story of several pages within the deadline. the other was experimenting with a new media that I haven't really taken the time to actually practice.

my original plan was to make the first part in full color, the reason was to practice blending, shading and strokes for texture.

then make the second part gray-scale only, the reason being to practice tones and depth. but my gray markers were running out and I currently can't afford to replace them, so I was forced to improvise by adding the few colors I did as a substitute.

so it was more for an artistic reason than anything. and with having less to worry about in the coloring department, I managed to add a whole extra page at the end.

in any case, I really enjoyed doing this. it was a great learning experience for me, and I hope to take that and incorporate it into my own webcomic

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Hero-of-justice [2009-06-30 20:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work Wazzy! I hope to meet you in the tourny! XD

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fishy-kun [2009-06-29 05:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Impressive! The neatness looks almost alien among the many other auditions. If you make it into the tourney, I'll root for you!

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Wazaga In reply to fishy-kun [2009-06-29 05:18:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks! but it's hardly nest to my own standards. this is the messiest thing I've ever done, and the mistakes! gah, I could tear my eyes out just looking at them!

but thanks for the kind comment in any case

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fishy-kun In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-29 23:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear. Now you've piqued my interest. Time to procrastinate and explore your gallery...

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Wazaga In reply to fishy-kun [2009-06-30 03:46:09 +0000 UTC]

enjoy your visit

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RockDeadman [2009-06-27 06:44:35 +0000 UTC]

wow.... it's refreshing to run into another traditional artist around dA....... seems like there's so few of us.....
anyways..... great comic.... i like your style of
coloring...... i can't help but study it and try to
analyze what kind of techniques and strokes you use......
this is definitely goin in the faves.......
what kind of markers do you use btw.......?

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Wazaga In reply to RockDeadman [2009-06-27 12:39:02 +0000 UTC]

prismacolors they are the only professional markers I can get around here, or I would have tried copics too

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RockDeadman In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-27 18:49:48 +0000 UTC]

sweet.... i use prismas too..... they're the best kind imo..... but after the last tourney i was in i have to buy a new set cuz i pounded the hell out of em..... XD

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Wazaga In reply to RockDeadman [2009-06-28 04:31:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I gotta place an order to replace my gray ones, too.

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RockDeadman In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-28 04:50:33 +0000 UTC]

heh.... yeah.... i'd think you'd have to replace some blue too..... XD

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Wazaga In reply to RockDeadman [2009-06-28 04:58:20 +0000 UTC]

nah, the blues aren't prismas. they are some sort of architect markers that I found on sale for cheap. 6 shades of the same color and still fairly new.

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RockDeadman In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-28 05:01:15 +0000 UTC]

ah.... i see....
well you made them work really well...... color me impressed.....
pun intended....

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Ninou-san [2009-06-26 20:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh this was REALLY well done~

Hope i get ta see more of yours in the future round ^^

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Wazaga In reply to Ninou-san [2009-06-27 04:13:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i hope so too.

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ElCapoeria [2009-06-26 19:15:15 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is really frickin good. I haven't seen any of your other stuff, but i can tell you've done this before. The art is excellent of course, but in especially impressed with the writing and pacing, super good job. Im entering AatR also and trying to wrap up my audition in time and can tell already there's going to be some stiff competition. Good luck!

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Wazaga In reply to ElCapoeria [2009-06-27 04:13:15 +0000 UTC]

well, I've never participated in a tournament, but I have done comics before, so I had some practice. thanks for the nice comment, and good luck in the tournament.

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EdDarkflame [2009-06-26 15:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Been waiting for this one to come. I like the way it turned out, Waz And of course, you left me waiting for the next one
I really hope you and Cheeko make it to the next round and up to the finals I wish you both good luck!

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Wazaga In reply to EdDarkflame [2009-06-26 16:03:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I try to please. I hope we make it too

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EdDarkflame In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-26 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]

You are doing very well I am pleased!

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FlyKiwiFly [2009-06-26 15:22:26 +0000 UTC]

great audition! I love your style and your OCs Best of luck in the competition ^^

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Wazaga In reply to FlyKiwiFly [2009-06-26 15:32:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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obsessedkitten [2009-06-26 10:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Awesome I love it!

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WILIZIN [2009-06-26 08:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Excellent. You character interaction was superb. I really hope you get in. It would be cool to see you continue. ^^

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Wazaga In reply to WILIZIN [2009-06-26 09:52:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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HapyCow [2009-06-26 07:34:52 +0000 UTC]

So adorable! XD I love the markers..but yeah I know the feeling of em dying (especially the gray ones, wahh)..*sigh* I'll miss you, markers.

Anyway. Awesome stuff. Sounds like you're coming up with "TEH EPIC STORY!"

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Wazaga In reply to HapyCow [2009-06-26 09:50:25 +0000 UTC]

really? thanks! I hope I don't disappoint.

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MegSyv [2009-06-25 23:44:05 +0000 UTC]

*cough*
Oh yeah. I forgot to mention, the writing in this comic is absolutely stellar. It makes mine look scattered and disjointed when you compare them. XP I love your story as to how you entered the Real. So creative!

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-26 00:52:54 +0000 UTC]

really? I feel I was being too wordy with it. not to mention sort of cheaty with the stick figures part.

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MegSyv In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-27 20:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Nonsense! I thought that was one of the most enjoyable parts!
I think... Hmm. We should see how the audition and the first rounds go. If we both emerge unscathed, we can try noting the judges and getting their opinion of the matter. I'd like to have their approval before trying anything.
BUT UUUUGH IT WOULD BE SO COOL. XD

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-28 04:30:06 +0000 UTC]

ok, you had me until you mentioned noting the judges, then you lost me... what are we asking them about???

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MegSyv In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-28 21:49:26 +0000 UTC]

If they have any objections to us forming a team. I'm worried that it might go against what plans they have for the contest, or if they feel it would cause any complications within the competition. If worse comes to worse, we just call a truce and travel together through the Real, not necessarily fight together. :/
AUGH BUT WE ARE SO MEETING UP AT SOME POINT DANGIT.

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-29 04:07:37 +0000 UTC]

well, what I understand from the rules is that we can team up if we want, but we can only fight with 3 chars max (2 of yours with one of mine, or visa-versa)

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MegSyv In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-29 10:38:02 +0000 UTC]

YEEEE. How could I have missed that part?!
Okay, this tournament is going to rock. I'll have to note you later with what ideas I've been pushing around.

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-29 11:08:09 +0000 UTC]

hit me with your best sister!

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MegSyv [2009-06-25 23:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh. My. GOSH!! This contest just got THAT much more exciting!!! YOU AND ME ON ONE SIDE WOULD BE UNSTOPPABLE. Enough said. Seriously!! XD XD XD
Aaaa! I have to figure out how this will work into the "story" I have planned already... but no doubt it will be SUPER fantastic. I think I've already settled on a plan just sitting here typing out this comment.
HEY. If we both get into/past round one we need to start talking both together and with the judges to see how this might work.
AAA I'M SO EXCITED!

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-26 00:51:42 +0000 UTC]

I second that notion! we should start planning the plot right away! (or at least after the first judging)

oh, oh, can you imagine if somehow we stayed in the entire tournament all the way to the final round? that would tricked out to the max!

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MegSyv In reply to Wazaga [2009-06-26 06:28:45 +0000 UTC]

OMIGOSH YES IT WOULD. XD XD XD
How tense would that be? We'd HAVE to end up fighting each other eventually. What if that was the FINAL round? Ooooh, the drama! Two friends who have been able to make it through the ENTIRE competition forced to fight each other! XD
Aaaugh, calm down. We have to get there first. XP

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Wazaga In reply to MegSyv [2009-06-26 09:54:59 +0000 UTC]

it would be really epic if it did happen that way, wouldn't it? ah, the perk of dreaming!

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Sir-Talen [2009-06-25 22:46:28 +0000 UTC]

I think this is the first non-traumatic audition page I've seen from any of the contestants. Congrats.

And your human form is as cute as your dragon one.

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Wazaga In reply to Sir-Talen [2009-06-26 00:42:01 +0000 UTC]

heh heh, thank you.

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lennan [2009-06-25 20:31:30 +0000 UTC]

I really love the shots on the first few panels, way to make the camera angles!

The only thing I found weird was the switch from full colour to minimal colour. Was that supposed to be on purpose? Because it makes it looks rather unfinished.

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Wazaga In reply to lennan [2009-06-25 20:36:28 +0000 UTC]

erm..... yeah, it was actually. part of it was testing color effects,and part of it was struggling to make it on time. even if I did have 5 days left.

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