Comments: 11
MaverickJester [2004-09-24 21:16:36 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. Beautiful as all your work is.
However- a thing I noticed. In the second panel, Black Dude (Omar? Not sure) looks totally calm... Then switches into rage in the third. FOr the effect I think you're going for (the set-up panel before the tell-off), he should at the very least (in fact, perhaps this is the best choice, as it shows passage of time) look at least marginally pissed, a furrowed eyebrow, lip curled, something of that sort (I think that explanation of what I mean is rather pointless, sicne you have a damn good grasp of facial expressions).
Good job overall. I do like how you make these (what was it exactly, all the panels drawn on seperate sheets then put into PS?), most comicers I've seen do it all on one thing.
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Wen-M In reply to MaverickJester [2004-09-24 21:45:28 +0000 UTC]
now that you pointed it out, yeah, i think i missed that detail on Omar's reaction. yeah. thanks dude. I always appreciate observations such as yours.
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MaverickJester In reply to Wen-M [2004-09-25 00:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Woah. And here I thought my comment would get lost in the flow of comments artists of your calibur tend to attract.
Aaannnyyywaaaayyyy, no prob, Wen-Man. Haha.
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CozmikSummoner [2004-09-11 20:08:24 +0000 UTC]
This's soooo awesome! Do you consider this one of your unfinished projects? If so, you should definitely finish it!!^^
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CookieSoul [2004-09-08 19:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Interesting how you expressed so well the enragement of the black guy..I like how the background is blurred..very nice.
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Shiev [2004-09-08 18:25:29 +0000 UTC]
lovely facial expressions!!
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kerberos- [2004-09-08 17:07:12 +0000 UTC]
yeah! stick it to the man. this is kinda like a soap opera in slow mo.
I can't believe the detail you put in it.
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