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Published: 2004-09-08 17:05:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 3010; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 944
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MaverickJester [2004-09-24 21:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Beautiful as all your work is.


However- a thing I noticed. In the second panel, Black Dude (Omar? Not sure) looks totally calm... Then switches into rage in the third. FOr the effect I think you're going for (the set-up panel before the tell-off), he should at the very least (in fact, perhaps this is the best choice, as it shows passage of time) look at least marginally pissed, a furrowed eyebrow, lip curled, something of that sort (I think that explanation of what I mean is rather pointless, sicne you have a damn good grasp of facial expressions).


Good job overall. I do like how you make these (what was it exactly, all the panels drawn on seperate sheets then put into PS?), most comicers I've seen do it all on one thing.

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Wen-M In reply to MaverickJester [2004-09-24 21:45:28 +0000 UTC]

now that you pointed it out, yeah, i think i missed that detail on Omar's reaction. yeah. thanks dude. I always appreciate observations such as yours.

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MaverickJester In reply to Wen-M [2004-09-25 00:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Woah. And here I thought my comment would get lost in the flow of comments artists of your calibur tend to attract.


Aaannnyyywaaaayyyy, no prob, Wen-Man. Haha.

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piratevamp [2004-09-11 21:10:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah man, you tell Lenny what for....make him come to his senses!

Great job with the cross-hatching

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CozmikSummoner [2004-09-11 20:08:24 +0000 UTC]

This's soooo awesome! Do you consider this one of your unfinished projects? If so, you should definitely finish it!!^^

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Metamorphosis-Cat [2004-09-11 05:25:17 +0000 UTC]

my god the details @_@

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wardy360 [2004-09-08 20:52:52 +0000 UTC]

wow! really love the line/cross-hatched style of this. looks really cool, kinda gives it a gritty reality. good story idea too!
excellent stuff bud!

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CookieSoul [2004-09-08 19:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Interesting how you expressed so well the enragement of the black guy..I like how the background is blurred..very nice.

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Shiev [2004-09-08 18:25:29 +0000 UTC]

lovely facial expressions!!

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candiice [2004-09-08 17:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice! Interesting

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kerberos- [2004-09-08 17:07:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah! stick it to the man. this is kinda like a soap opera in slow mo.

I can't believe the detail you put in it.

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