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WingedWilly — Lucky dreams
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Published: 2013-01-22 15:37:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 716; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 3
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Русская версия:[link]ЕЩЕ один подарок просто так - на этот раз,короткий комикс)
Я просто вовсе меховичков учусь рисовать на этой неделе,вот и эти ребята затесались. Идея тоже случайно совершенно пришла.
Надеюсь,тебе нравится и я не сделал никаких ошибок относительно того как ты хочешь видеть своих персонажей)
Random short comic gift for the
You Im just learnin to draw furry creatures right now so I draw those guys too xD
Hope you like it and I didnt mess up any thing you want your characters to look like
Characters belongs to
Idea and art (c) belongs to me.
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I might also suggest some English grammar corrections. For example: "Hey Green-green, do your feathers really bring good luck?" and "Sure thing! What should I do?" and I think "Fill this pillowcase." Might be a little better than "that." Hope this helped.
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Huh?
OH oh oh, you commented on my critique, haha. I got the message instead of the artist. xD
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Ah, whoops, missed the reply button. 
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Thank you for the detailed great criticue,I really like it becay\use its fair and intresting to read.
btw as i said its only a first shots with half a body of furry creatures and I decided to avoid srs drawing here like those lighting and sahding you mentioned.
It supporse to be easy to look strip without taking too much attention and time.
Just little piece of funny cake.
I agree it could be even better,it was my decition.
Once again, THANKS
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I might also suggest some English grammar corrections. For example: "Hey Green-green, do your feathers really bring good luck?" and "Sure thing! What should I do?" and I think "Fill this pillowcase." Might be a little better than "that." Hope this helped.
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hmmm okay...but I always thought those criticues are for art criticues actually... :\
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I suppose so; I simply thought the point is to help suggest improvements to make your comic even better. Nothing bad implied at all.
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oh ok than. I thought ya another one who jsut finding waht to complain on.
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No problem! 
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*bursts out laughing, hsmmering my fist on the ground* xD
Flay... This is holarious xD
First I was like: "Grifgions and winged dogs/foxes by Flay! 
Then i was like: "wait... They are extreamly well done!^^"
And then i was laughing my head off xD
Seriously Flay... Its amazing
The fur on the griffin looks very cosy and soft. I like the furr ball on his face most ^^ it very effectivly gives him a cool, goofy kind of look
Best of all fur/hair things i this drawing is the mane of the fox to me^^ it looks just great^^ perfectly fitting your style. And the color fits the color of the wings^^
They too are beautifull^^ I like how you draw feathery wings^^
You should try drawing dragons with fur, manes and feathery wings once^^ or even try drawing an oriental dragon^^
What i miss a bit here are shading, gliws and lighting..that what i normally so love about your art.
But as its a comic, no background or source of light, this is quite normall i guess xD
Also... Im sureshading and lighting fur is very very dificult...so drawing furry stuff like this os propably better for you to train, right?^^
But what you did add wonderfully are the expressions
Idk why...but since you made that pagewith Solistice and her expressions, the one where you used the new format first time, your expressions and body language of the characters you draw has become truly epic!
This comic is so funny xD
Love it^^
Keep up drawing furry creatures^^
And keep up your humor
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wo-hohoho wait! firt of all its not my characters,they're fan-based :0
They actually belongs to
I was concentarating on joke in strip and expression,lazy enough to avoid shading and lighting this time.
Actually I dunno how to sahde/light fur yet so...
YAY thankies
Im keep learning it,so better arts goes futher
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I know that the chars arent yours
I read discriptions you know xD
And yeah^^ keep at it^^
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guess you said all you could.thanks...
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D'aww Flay. That's just too cute! 
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hahah yeah its really meaningfull hah
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well that is so funny, but nice work man. I'm impressed. I want to rate you as: 100% no, this is low. I will rate you as... OVER 9,000!!!~%
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hahhaha thanks I really appreciate this!
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Your welcome. Oh by the way, come check my Deviant ID, there is a web call "Steam" you should check out www.steampowered.com!
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I didnt really understood this one...
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Ok, Let me tell you what is Steam is.
[link] click it, and see what is it.
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I know what is it...I didnt understand why you linked me it
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If you have it, can we friend in Steam?
My URL is Snivy116.
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steam cant find you for some reason
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sorry Im not adding everyone. It's "Carl De-Ninja".
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Not adding everyone? you mean, your not adding someone you don't know?
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I mean there are so many of you guys from dA. And all of you spamming me when Im adding you on steam.
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Well, I don't spam in Steam; which means I don't really talk like some kind of Nerd.
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hah thats alright than,added.
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well, I do Talk if somebody talks first, Or I just started... BUT I don't really chat that much, plus If I am Spamming, Then why am I in computer, Replying it?
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:\ Don't know right? anyway, let's close this conversation and start in new one like... Note sending. agreed?
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well nah. agreed with closing it xD
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and how you got it,future-looking man?
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I'm always good at math.
Lucky feathers + bad bed rest = feather donation?
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oh,I thought you meant ya saw it somewhere already
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It's alright to be suspicious.
Sometimes I think of a funny scene or snippet of a show, then sometime later, it becomes real in a way. It really surprises me when that happens.
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heh. I can read someones mind way similar - like I thinks of it, and somebody else says it. 83
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yeah Worked on it for a bit. thanks
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