Comments: 68
Xbxg32000 In reply to ??? [2008-07-01 04:54:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :].
-gl hf
~Xbx
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MyNameMattersNot [2007-12-03 10:24:18 +0000 UTC]
Great metaphor. I didn't know quite what was going on until the end.
I love surprises.
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Xbxg32000 In reply to Kaiyuan42 [2007-12-03 02:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks for the comment, I appreciate it a lot.
-gl hf
~Xbx
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Xbxg32000 In reply to inspirational-dreams [2007-12-03 02:03:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for featuring me! I am flattered, haha.
-gl hf
~Xbx
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LaBruyere [2007-11-12 04:20:39 +0000 UTC]
*see
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LaBruyere [2007-11-12 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]
I think this is well written. I hate poems that go on and on without saying anything.
The only thing I say wrong with it was grammatical:
"You've went" should be "you went" or "you've gone".
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thecrossing [2007-11-12 00:55:25 +0000 UTC]
I like the word choice and the imagery, but I think the metaphor could be a little more effective if it was more clear at times.
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teethonreed [2007-11-09 06:31:41 +0000 UTC]
I like the poem. The imagery and metaphor is good, but the spoiler comments are a bit too much, I think.
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nineinchnailbunny [2007-11-09 05:50:05 +0000 UTC]
I can't even begin to describe how that made me feel. Centimental and a little sad I think...
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CrypticButterfly [2007-11-09 03:13:47 +0000 UTC]
A very well thought-out poem with beautiful imagery and a gentle mood. Good job.
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sweetheart18 [2007-11-07 00:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Excellent word usage. You use very colorful language to illustrate the poem.
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laceratedwrists [2007-11-06 05:24:14 +0000 UTC]
i was going like
'deyng! a phone conversation!"
my mind was venturing into it's own imagination when the sudden realization hit me!
hahaha
so beautiful!
i love it!
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cookie!
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Xbxg32000 In reply to laceratedwrists [2007-11-06 23:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
-gl hf
~Xbx
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ZelasMetallium [2007-11-06 05:10:52 +0000 UTC]
I was very confused about the "cord" line until the end. Then I was like "Huh, what?" and had to go back and reread.
I liked it very much, you really kept on subject without showing it was a phone conversation till the very end.
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myshadow535 [2007-08-06 03:25:13 +0000 UTC]
this poem puts any work that i have ever written to shame and i applaud the beauty that you have so expertly woven into a tapestry that revovles within my minds eye. Bravo.
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jdesutter [2007-06-22 04:16:47 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing! are you into music by any chance? because you should be..
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Xbxg32000 In reply to jdesutter [2007-06-23 17:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Yes, I am very into music, I like Rock, Metalcore, Acoustic, and Pop mostly.
-gl hf
~Xbx
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kamikaze-des [2007-02-18 04:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Nice one. Touching.
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Xbxg32000 In reply to kamikaze-des [2007-02-21 20:44:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the comment :].
-gl hf
~Xbx
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MahouTragicQueen [2007-02-11 19:27:10 +0000 UTC]
The descriptions are excellent.
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Xbxg32000 In reply to Amandadear [2007-02-11 20:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Lol, thanks for the comment! And that sounds like an interesting idea, it would be cool. I am glad you enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks again!
-gl hf
~Xbx
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Amandadear In reply to Xbxg32000 [2007-02-11 20:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Anytime!! Very welcome!
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Lena-Hyena [2007-02-11 18:47:07 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it very much, it's put together elegantly and cleverly. Your language is quite elaborate and it takes some time to go through it, but, again, it is a very nice read.
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Xbxg32000 In reply to Lena-Hyena [2007-02-11 20:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the comment, I am glad you enjoyed reading the poem :].
-gl hf
~Xbx
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Kijan [2007-02-11 18:43:07 +0000 UTC]
I think praising your work would be a bit unoriginal, I'll just go with the flow and say, WOW!
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Xbxg32000 In reply to Kijan [2007-02-11 20:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Haha, creative :]. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :].
-gl hf
~Xbx
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