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Nuttelia [2012-06-04 11:22:30 +0000 UTC]

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To start, this deviation is quite stunning. You have good vision - I get the exact scene. I love the use of shadow along the edges, too.

My complaints -

~One. I don't know if you intend to, but there's a thin, microscopic line, maybe only one pixel wide, but still there. It's slightly - green grey. It's a little disturbing and kind of makes the horse look separate from the background. It's better around the head but places such as the legs and under the stomach are rather disturbing.

~Two. The mane and tail look a bit...unnatural. I can't really describe it in detail though.

~Three. One little thing - you kinddeeeer went a liiiitle bit over the top with the blurring in the background. The horse looks a little too... BANG in your face.

~Four. Nice with the markings, they're fantastic on the neck. Just maybe keep them a liiitle more restrained. I think you should reduce it a bit.

I hope you take none of this as offence... as it is a critique. I am taking this honestly, but this work is FANTASTIC. Wonderful. Spectacular. Stunning. Knock your socks off standard. Keep it up. You have amazing technique.


~Telli

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HappyPineapple-96 [2012-06-11 05:39:30 +0000 UTC]

WOW this is TOTALLY AMAZING!

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bellequine [2012-06-04 20:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I love the mane and tail so much!

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MagicalUnicorns12 [2012-06-04 10:36:39 +0000 UTC]

I was going to write a Critique but I can never find enough to say!

The cutting is really neat though, much better than mine! :3 I think the background is nice, though you might not of taken that because I usually use stock for my backgrounds. I like the picture of the horse, (s)he has a really nice coat.

What did you hand paint? It says you hand painted something but I can't see it, sorry :c

I could of made this a critique, couldn't I?

10/10

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