lohkk [2012-10-06 03:52:08 +0000 UTC]
Hello! Just a writing tip- whenever a new person starts speaking, you have to start a new paragraph. So for example, where you wrote the following:
"Jerk..." you mumbled."Hey now. No need to be rude, Pet." He said.
It would actually be formatted:
"Jerk..." you mumbled.
"Hey now. No need to be rude, Pet." He said.
Also, rather than a period behind "Pet", you would use a comma. Then "He" would be lowercase. So it would read:
"Hey now. No need to be rude, Pet," he said.
Hope that helps :3 For more explanations on the subject, you can read this if you'd like ^^ : [link]
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