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Published: 2007-02-26 04:04:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 54796; Favourites: 2270; Downloads: 649
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Description Emo?
is it really that bad?
you cant accept the fact
that i get a little sad?
that i am a little mad?
so i favor black
and i dont like pink
you use those as reasons
to make my soul sink
so some of us cut
and some of us dont
we can smile
laugh love and live
we're just not like the rest
sure we cry
we want to die
but none of you understand
its not like we had planned
to live life like this
to spend our days
depressed and amiss
we're not bad people
we dont worship satan
we're not out to kill anyone
we just dont like the world
as much as everyone else
and we dont like ourselves
as much as we could
but we're ok with that
you can call us ugly
you can call us fat
but you cant change who we are
we are emo
whats so wrong with that?
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Comments: 320

OliviaSFA [2008-03-29 09:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I just read this. You make a good point. I'm more of considered a goth, but unlike the others I don't hate emos. A lot of people think it's better to just repress their feelings, and never talk them through which makes them worse and worse, but for some reason talking about your feelings makes you "weak" I think it makes you smart. Kudos dude.

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Jaythorne [2008-03-28 02:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Yea and Yeah! I can connect with this... even tho I'm really only half-emo. Nonetheless, beautifully written! I don't feel so alone.

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yaoifan444 In reply to Jaythorne [2008-03-29 06:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Its nice not to feel alone

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Jaythorne In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-03-29 20:04:21 +0000 UTC]

It is. ^^

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despiration [2008-03-27 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, and it makes a great point
I hate it when people put down others because they're different
people call me emo or goth all the time because I happen to not like bright colors and prefer to wear all black and lots of eye makeup, and other such stereotypical things
if you ask me I'm neither one >.> and goths are completely different than emos so that further proves my point
n.n I think emo peole are cool
love your poem great job!

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yaoifan444 In reply to despiration [2008-03-29 06:21:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I can definitely relate to you, not feeling like either one

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despiration In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-03-29 13:59:05 +0000 UTC]

n.n

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Lykoleon [2008-03-26 23:52:24 +0000 UTC]

i liked the poem and was feelin' good till i scrolled down and read the obnoxious comments people put against the preppy population. tch--hypocriticaaal.

yeh so good poem. terrible crowd

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yaoifan444 In reply to Lykoleon [2008-03-29 06:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Man have i struggled with some difficult people on this poem ><.
"If you've not positive judgement, do not judge with negativity" cant remember who said that

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Lykoleon In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-03-30 03:33:05 +0000 UTC]

>< people are dumb

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roonscape [2008-03-26 19:54:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm not emo but I love this piece! I'm not a prep either. I'm just me, Rowan.

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yaoifan444 In reply to roonscape [2008-03-29 06:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. and hooray for being yourself

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DarkGirlx003 [2008-03-26 16:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Waaah! Thats so true! *sniff*

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DecemberRiver [2008-03-26 00:42:06 +0000 UTC]

hi. i can't agree more. when i read this poem i sudenly feel like im not alone. good job.

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Kirsty-babie [2008-03-25 23:05:58 +0000 UTC]

it's so true! like my so-called-friends call me an emo... but they also call me a chav which i don't understand 'cause i look nothing like them! Any-who It's brilliant in my situation and i think i'm going to fave it

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yaoifan444 In reply to Kirsty-babie [2008-03-29 06:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you so much Your kindness is greatly appreciated

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Kirsty-babie In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-03-29 15:37:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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xxxBrokenSoulxxx [2008-03-25 21:39:28 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem! simple love its like omg sounds like me and my best friend

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1994toinfinity [2008-03-25 21:26:28 +0000 UTC]

emo sucks balls, be bright be happy, what are you trying to prove? youll surprisingly find how beutifull happiness and the work of god is. may the lord bless your soul, you know that he loves you, and thats reason enough to not be emo or depressed.

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yaoifan444 In reply to 1994toinfinity [2008-03-29 06:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Just so you know, i do not find myself to be 'emo' anymore. I've changed.
And i am aware of how lucky i am to have the things i have, and how i should not be depressed. But it has developed into a mental illness of the mind for me, and i am being treated for it.

Thank you

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maddiemoo39 [2008-03-25 05:15:13 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful. I totally agree with what you are portraying here about emos. I am emo myself and i too have had people come up to me and say: "Ooooh you're an emo!!" or "Go slit your wrists and die!!" and it is true that not all emos cut themselves, i know some who don't.
We are only branded these days by the way we dress and the music we listen to.
Once again well done =]

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yaoifan444 In reply to maddiemoo39 [2008-03-29 06:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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StarOfTheStorm [2008-03-24 14:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you. Simple enough. That was wonderful!

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xXCinderemoXx [2008-03-23 19:11:13 +0000 UTC]

God, I love it.
It's so blatently truthful ^^

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ddrfreak13 [2008-03-23 02:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank god someone says something truthful about "emo's" I can't stand when people come up to be and go "So your emo right? YOU CUT YOURSELF OMFG *spazzattack*"

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WhatsThisJack [2008-03-21 22:16:12 +0000 UTC]

perfect.... perfect!!!

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yaoifanboy6 [2008-03-21 21:15:02 +0000 UTC]

what a very truthfull poem

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aMortician [2008-03-21 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

this poem makes me happier and less depressed... it explains me well i think... and who the hell likes pink?!
i don't cut.. and i don't wear eyeliner.. or have black hair.. but i wear black and i'm depressed usually.. does that count me as an emo? or am i just a wanna be?

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yaoifan444 In reply to aMortician [2008-03-29 06:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Your neither, just you and thats all you need to be
Thank you

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aMortician In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-04-02 13:40:51 +0000 UTC]

thx

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tomdmerritt [2008-03-20 23:21:12 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful =")

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tiersa [2008-03-20 21:04:27 +0000 UTC]

this is great....i really don't know how else to put it....dewwwd.. great job!!!

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Catgrrl101 [2008-03-20 15:32:38 +0000 UTC]

holy shit so true and so beatiful i agree 100% i cut do you?

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yaoifan444 In reply to Catgrrl101 [2008-03-29 06:37:26 +0000 UTC]

Used to, not so much anymore because i promised my boyfriend i would quit for hime
Thank you

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Subject-A27688 [2008-03-20 06:23:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, really, I'm emo too, so it makes me think some sort of things, like the problems that are here in my country right now ... yes, we are what we are ...

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Wolfy-Amadeus [2008-03-19 23:32:49 +0000 UTC]

This poem made my day a whole lot better

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yaoifan444 In reply to Wolfy-Amadeus [2008-03-29 06:38:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to know it

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I-Avenger [2008-03-19 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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yaoifan444 In reply to I-Avenger [2008-03-29 06:42:27 +0000 UTC]

and this was supposed to prove...what?

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animeNinjaTitan [2008-03-18 21:18:17 +0000 UTC]

so true

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sam-plant [2008-03-18 20:52:34 +0000 UTC]

ahahhahahahahahhh

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emobananek [2008-03-18 20:20:33 +0000 UTC]

i completely agree and i love to be other then rest, but i hate, when somebody is looking at me, like i'm some kind of freak

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Neon-Letters [2008-03-18 13:24:09 +0000 UTC]

awh,
its a nice poem, and i can undertsand why you get fed up.
I dress emo, thoguh i cant say im depressed so thats an upside non?
and your typnig and grammar is fine
unfortunately mine rarely is
x

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Shizuma-saito [2008-03-18 00:06:55 +0000 UTC]

to be young again, intersting poem but i think "emo" is just a phase teens go through eventually they break out of it, mostly because people get old....

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yaoifan444 In reply to Shizuma-saito [2008-03-29 06:45:06 +0000 UTC]

As it may be just a phase, teens have feelings too, which are just amplified by hormones. still hurts

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soulesslife [2008-03-17 23:39:59 +0000 UTC]

I like your poem its so true . . . in my eyes any ways I especially like the part "none of you understand" its so like me keep it up

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zachwimberly [2008-03-16 21:31:20 +0000 UTC]

ok go to this link [link] either you copied of this person or they copied off you or you both copied off some website but you both have the same poem just thought i would let you know

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yaoifan444 In reply to zachwimberly [2008-03-29 06:47:16 +0000 UTC]

The poem "Emo?" was written by no one other than myself. They copied. Damn me for not putting a copyright on it...
Thank you though, for letting me know this

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zachwimberly In reply to yaoifan444 [2008-03-29 15:07:53 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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passion4writting [2008-03-16 17:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Great poem I agree I hate the preppy bitches at my school who cut for fun. And use there daddies money wait till they get old and wrinkly the wont have the mony then. We will always have more styles besides flowers and sequences.

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