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Published: 2008-10-25 05:29:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 838; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 13
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Sela, one of the main characters in a story I'm working on. Looking for color scheme for this one....Related content
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Pretty! I also have drawings in B & W,will you also add color to this drawing?
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Thanks! And yes, I will add color to this drawing once I get around to it.
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Great one, as for color...I'm not the guy to ask. I supposedly have a terrible eye for color.
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I think orange/yellow or white would be nice for the clothes. But i'm not sure if it's a good idea or what you'd have in mind.
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Yellow is actually my favorite color.
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I really do like the poses and the elegance. I see that you were doing some shading in some of the drapery. I think you should go alittle more harsh on the shading.
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Thanks! Yeah, I drew this when I was hella weak in the shading area.
I'll definitely make those shadows deeper. Thanks!
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Np at all. I wasnt good with shading neither. I still have to practice shading with clothes. xD
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lol we are definitely in the same boat. xD
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I so want to color this. I don't know how but I would really like to add color to this so badly.
Nice work.
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Yeah, go for it! 
Thanks bro.
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Should I take this one or do you have another copy? I'm a little worried about the DEVIANTART stamp but then again maybe I can work around it.
Peace.
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I'll take the watermark off for you. 
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I second the desire to color that.
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really nice contours on the hat, but looks like she's missing a leg. try to draw what you don't see as well as what you do.
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Cool beans, thank you so much!
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Yeah, I'm going to color that one in... after I figure out how.
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lol digitaly or traditionaly?
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Traditionally. I can't do digital art for SHIT. Even if my life depended on it.
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lol im the exact oppositeXD i cant color traditionally
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lol im ok with paints and stuff but terrible with color pencilsXDDD;;;;
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XDDD Colored pencils are easy, once you get a little practice in. The reason why alot of my stuff isn't colored, is because I don't want to fuck up a good picture... I'm terrible with light source and stuff.
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lol it always comes out badXDDD;;;;lol
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XDDDD, mines will too... I'm still practicing.
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lolololololXDDDD ahha practise makes perfectXD
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lol i hate practising!D::::
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I do too! But if you didn't practice, then how did you get to where youou are right now?
I'm kind of slacking on practicing, mainly because I'm always tired (I have animea, so it's hard to fit things in).
But yeah, you didn't get as great as you are right now without it!
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It's when you have low blood iron, and it makes you really tired and stuff. It sucks ass.
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oooo.....iron suppliments might help.....?
soumnd like it does
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Yep! I take iron pills, but I have to keep on taking them for about three or four months, because I had servere animea.:/
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ouch that sounds like it sucks
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very nicely done I like the style of the face and the fluid pose.
I hope you won't take offense at my pointing out a few areas of improvement though...
I happened to read the comment about the left breast. I think that that artist wanted to point out that the breasts aren't in the same plane... You drew her shoulders angled down towards us thus that would affect the angling of the torso and thus where the breasts lies. so the breast on the right (her left breast) should go up or the other must be brought down a bit so as the breast line would also be angled a little towards us.
Another critique that I may suggest is to review hands. I commend the fact that you do not shy away from drawing hands which is very good and all you need is a little fixing of the fingers. for the hand near the face the fingers are drawn too long in that the lines for the fingers seem to come into the area allocated to the smooth back of the hand. the other hand is more about where the finger bends and it's a little unnatural (then again there are stylization that purposely don't care for it so if that is what you are going for then please ignore my critique)
That said I don't mean to offend for I still think it very pretty and I really like the design into a character that is beautiful and very much unique in this DA universe! keep up with the good work!
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Lol, no, of course I don't take offense to your critique! That's what I was looking for.
Hmm, I didn't realise that about the shoulders and torso. 
Yeah, I kinda messed up on the hand near the face, but it was too late for me to fix it when I did it.
Awww, you didn't offend me at all, your critique is much appreciated. 
Thank you so much! Your words as well as others words really mean a lot to me! 
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There is nothing wrong with the shoulder or torso per say (though that might have been unintentional) but it made her pose more natural in that it made her look like she was , how do I put it tilting her upper body towards us) making it more natural than keeping her back straight and only inclining her head. it is simple I guess the coordination of the whole body in that the line of the breast should follow the tilt of the torso.
XP it's dificult drawing hands and even more so to figure them out, but the second hand to be more specific it's probably the two middle fingers (not the index or the pinky) that seem bent away from each other at the joint and that is not really natural. like if you try to hold your fingers together (like where rings are) but try separate them after that first joint I don't think you'll see them come apart... (I'm terrible at explaining/describing sorry)
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I see now, I didn't realize that when I drew it; I was just focousing on the body itself first, then the breasts, but I think I kinda forgot that they're supposed to follow the body.
Haha, no, you're not terrible at explaining/describing at all! You did just fine.
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X3 Thank you 
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Thaks a lot.
What's wrong with the left breast?
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