Comments: 18
TWO--GUNS [2010-04-25 06:01:03 +0000 UTC]
Fluffy tail, dear. Fluffy.
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Savellla [2010-04-21 22:26:37 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I noticed (after a while of looking, mind you) was the hoof print. Assuming horsie did not apparate, there should be a hoof print in the sand between where his two grounded hooves are. Also, a bit of sand perhaps flying off of the front right?
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doberman-momma89 [2010-04-21 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]
maybe it's missing a diamond? lols
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Furaha [2010-04-21 01:38:35 +0000 UTC]
I think what it might be is that the horse is in a sort of static pose. In artwork that phase of the trot is one of the least dynamic, because the straight vertical lines of the horse's legs break up the movement and make it look stiff. Just something I noticed. *shrug* Also, with the text, you might want to move it down ever so slightly so that it's all on the water - right now it just doesn't flow as well because the tip of it is on the mountains.
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youknowit561 In reply to Furaha [2010-04-21 03:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I think you might be right. I definitely agree with you. All I know is that half way through this I knew it was gonna be a fail. Either the stock, or just my crappy skills, somehow, haha. So I guess it's not worth a re-do. However I appreciate your keen eye, thank you!
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