Comments: 16
0hgravity [2016-04-19 13:35:18 +0000 UTC]
lovely cadence to this. it's all very smooth and fiery, like a flame. wish I could critique, if only to be of help, but this has surpassed my abilities.
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Atomograd [2016-04-18 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]
"I cannot breathe, knowing your skin
will never be familiar."
every arch a tease, each vertebrae another inch of distance.
i still love your work, so much. i've been so busy for the past while! every so often your spoken word cd catches my eye and i throw it on for inspiration.
i hope you're well!
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Atomograd In reply to your-methamphetamine [2016-06-14 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]
mayhaps not, but everyone knows the most gorgeous silver tongue here is you, darling <3
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emsoileau [2016-04-16 22:56:48 +0000 UTC]
that final stanza though.
that final stanza though.
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palaeochannel6 [2016-04-16 16:38:08 +0000 UTC]
the plot moistens
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