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Published: 2016-04-16 14:52:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 622; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Your back is the coal-sheering ember
of burning paper-- I remember your rings
ridging your form, every
knuckle snatching my last trip
from the water.

I cannot resurface with the tip of my nose
memorizing your every rise;
I cannot breathe, knowing your skin
will never be familiar.

I tattooed you spineless but my knees
still have gashes from the nights
we prayed together; I miss finding god
somewhere between your hips,
your lips, lithe - soft -
wrapped around my flaming core.
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Comments: 16

roylapost [2016-04-21 14:29:24 +0000 UTC]

I think that last stanza made me .

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your-methamphetamine In reply to roylapost [2016-04-22 15:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Oops

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0hgravity [2016-04-19 13:35:18 +0000 UTC]

lovely cadence to this. it's all very smooth and fiery, like a flame. wish I could critique, if only to be of help, but this has surpassed my abilities.

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your-methamphetamine In reply to 0hgravity [2016-04-22 15:43:32 +0000 UTC]

Sensei
(thank you )

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0hgravity In reply to your-methamphetamine [2016-05-01 02:16:45 +0000 UTC]

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Atomograd [2016-04-18 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]

"I cannot breathe, knowing your skin
will never be familiar."
every arch a tease, each vertebrae another inch of distance.

i still love your work, so much. i've been so busy for the past while! every so often your spoken word cd catches my eye and i throw it on for inspiration.

i hope you're well!

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your-methamphetamine In reply to Atomograd [2016-04-22 15:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Aaaahhhhh, are you ever not lovely, lovely Mathieu?!

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Atomograd In reply to your-methamphetamine [2016-06-14 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]

mayhaps not, but everyone knows the most gorgeous silver tongue here is you, darling <3

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emsoileau [2016-04-16 22:56:48 +0000 UTC]

that final stanza though.

that final stanza though.

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your-methamphetamine In reply to emsoileau [2016-04-22 15:44:40 +0000 UTC]

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Adrolyn [2016-04-16 20:24:39 +0000 UTC]

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your-methamphetamine In reply to Adrolyn [2016-04-23 07:13:52 +0000 UTC]

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palaeochannel6 [2016-04-16 16:38:08 +0000 UTC]

the plot moistens

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your-methamphetamine In reply to palaeochannel6 [2016-04-22 15:44:55 +0000 UTC]

guiltily

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palaeochannel6 In reply to your-methamphetamine [2016-04-22 20:51:31 +0000 UTC]

my my. also, very well done.

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your-methamphetamine In reply to palaeochannel6 [2016-04-23 07:14:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you, kindly

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