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Published: 2009-04-27 15:19:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2327; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 0
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Description Yay~I had fun doing this piece~
Here is Yuna the Doomsday Seraph, 's character, she's uber cool~

Character Reference: [link]
Upper Body Pose Reference: [link] - =SenshiStock

Thank you very much *OmegaRaptor29 !
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Comments: 21

Kittymoon00013 [2009-04-27 19:39:21 +0000 UTC]

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Vision

Originality

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Impact


Very well done ^_^, however I noticed that you made her tattoo differently then the original artist did. She had a heart at the top of it instead of just a circle/oval shape e.deviantart.com/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)" />.

It's not a bad thing to ask (hopefully!), but why did you put your signature on the inside of her jacket/cape instead of in the lower corner of the paper like alot of your other works e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />? Other then that, it was very nicely done and the way the birds are drawn in is a cool touch e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />.

I would have given it a higher rate for originality, but she's another person's creation so I felt weird going higher then 3, nuu /_/...

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AdorkaStock [2009-05-01 16:02:56 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured in my recent journal! Thanks for using the stock!

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YunaSakura In reply to AdorkaStock [2009-05-01 22:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks~
More love to you and your friends
*spreads all the supporting love *

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AdorkaStock In reply to YunaSakura [2009-05-01 23:04:16 +0000 UTC]

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WatchaTophat [2009-04-29 16:19:43 +0000 UTC]

So shiny! I particularity like it on the boots. Beautiful character!

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YunaSakura In reply to WatchaTophat [2009-04-29 23:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I tried making it metal-ish/rubber-ish

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Susaleena [2009-04-29 07:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Featured here [link]

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YunaSakura In reply to Susaleena [2009-04-29 15:11:27 +0000 UTC]


*commments*

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Kittymoon00013 [2009-04-27 19:40:39 +0000 UTC]

This rocks. I love how you made her eyes look. The pose itself works well with this character too .

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YunaSakura In reply to Kittymoon00013 [2009-04-27 22:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Heheh thanks~ Oh and the heart shape tattoo wasnt visible on the reference he sent me and I placed the watermark there to prevent future problems and issues
Sorry, the critique thing wasnt supposed to be there, so i kinda canceled your critique post! Sorry sorry sorry!

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Kittymoon00013 In reply to YunaSakura [2009-04-27 22:31:48 +0000 UTC]

I see. We all have things we don't mean (Or want sometimes!), happen to us now don't we ?

I only asked about the tattoo because on his version of the character in the info there was a link to the original where her tattoo was in the shape of a heart, nuu /_/. I can see now why you put your signature where you did too. And the Watermark as well.




At least your not me today . I have been running into everything and nothing is working/going right .

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YunaSakura In reply to Kittymoon00013 [2009-04-27 22:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Hehhe yeah. Oh and he didnt send me the link I had above, it was linked to his photobucket So the one he had, the heart wasnt visible

Awww, well we all have that days, you are not alone and you can pull through it ;3

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LemiaCrescent [2009-04-27 19:31:24 +0000 UTC]

I wonder what this whole "critique" business is about. Why would it be shared with all your watchers? >___>

Anyway I'll do it here. It's quite beautiful and I have a difficult time necessarily picking out things that are "wrong"... I mean... I think her hair is GORGEOUS how you did the lighting. I think the magic around her would look much better if you used a technique like you did with the hair. Umm. Everything is stylized..Uhh..I like it.

YOU DID A GREAT JOB! (why would all the critiques go to the watchers? I mean then your inbox will be flooded with everyone elses critiques and it's confusing. o_o)

"Critiques should be thoughtful, in depth responses to the work. Artists have the option to consider the Critique as Fair or Unfair. Critiques are displayed on your profile page and are shared with your +Watchers. More about Critique" D:

" When you receive a Critique you respond by marking it as "fair" or "unfair". If you mark a Critique as "Fair" it will immediately get posted to your Deviation page and the Critic and his Watchers will be notified of your approval in their respective Message Centers. If you mark a critique as “Unfair” it will not be posted to your Deviation page and the Critic and his Watchers will be notified of your decision in their respective Message Centers. Only the Critic will be notified as to the reason that you marked the Critique as "Unfair".

When you receive a Critique and mark it as "Unfair" you will be prompted to select a reason among these choices: "Not Constructive", "Useless", "Inflammatory", "Not Objective", "Spam". You must indicate a choice or the Critique will remain in your Message Center.

Please note that writing a Critique takes time and thoughtful effort by a Critic. Although marking a Critique as "Unfair" will not display the Critique on your deviation page, it will still be viewable by a Critic’s watchers and through the Critic’s profile page. Therefore sensitivity should be shown in marking Critiques as “Unfair.”

A Critique is deemed “Fair” or "Unfair" based on the method and effort of the Critic. It is not appropriate to deem a Critique “Fair” or "Unfair" based on either a positive or negative opinion about the artwork itself. "

OMIGADDD TOO MUCH WORK!

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YunaSakura In reply to LemiaCrescent [2009-04-27 22:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, the critique thing was a mistake XD maybe i accidentally put it up XS
And yesh, its alot of words to write

Hehhe and thanks for the wonderful comment~

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LemiaCrescent In reply to YunaSakura [2009-04-27 23:42:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. XD Yeah I almost clicked the critique button a few times in several of my deviations but I think it's rather pointless and just floods the inbox. o_o

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YunaSakura In reply to LemiaCrescent [2009-04-27 23:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, its another way to fill in the message box

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Susaleena [2009-04-27 17:57:39 +0000 UTC]

This is so gorgeous! Wow! I love it!

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YunaSakura In reply to Susaleena [2009-04-27 22:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thank you Selena~

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Susaleena In reply to YunaSakura [2009-04-29 07:14:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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AdorkaStock [2009-04-27 16:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Dude this is so sweet! I love the colors and all the reflected light. It's so SHINY!

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YunaSakura In reply to AdorkaStock [2009-04-27 16:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Heheh thank you very much~

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