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Published: 2012-07-09 20:24:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 8536; Favourites: 182; Downloads: 237
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colored it with SAIAhri is angel!!XD
I am very hungry for Critique, please give me an advise so I can improve!
It can be anything from composition, anatomy, coloring, shading/lighting, and etc.
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Her tails have no attention to detail? Other than just another person about the shading you should make her tails look soft and sexy too, she is a kitsune after all...their name originates from their magnificent tails x)
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ohh thanks for the advice!
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i have 2 suggestions. :3 make the collar bone a little more noticable in detailed pics like this and... make the bewbs a bit more squish squish.. example... in some shirts.. there are ripples in the fabric. know what i mean?
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Great artwork of Ahri. I do really like the shading for her dress and hair, though I feel the shading on her shoulders, breast, and thighs are a little much.
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little much as in it need more shading?
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I think so. At the moment, they kind of look like bruises.
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Very nice. c: Don't be afraid to use darker shading.
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Thank you! Next time I'll be more thoughtful with shading!
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Hey it looks really good! I like the artwork and colours. However I think the lighting can be improved a bit on her shoulders and boobs. It almost looks like there is a red sore on her shoulder, maybe just make the red a bit more subtle?
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Ahh I see thank you for the advice!
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Amazing! Truly amazing, especially her boobs.
There's some shading missing on her head thoug
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Thanks!
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Nah nah, man. Look at her legs. See her left leg? Look at how the hip would make it attach to her butt/waist. Her leg would have to be so far out that she would walk like a crab all the time.
Be sure to draw the underneath of the body before adding in the other details.
Otherwise, this is a nice and health looking Ahri.
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I though about the legs too
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Very nice!
Because you asked for critique: The one thing you might watch is the shading on the forehead.
The part in her hair, in particular, almost looks like it could be a horn. Throwing bit of shadow in there would fix that up nicely.
Still, great job. Too Stronk. GGWP.
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Ohh I didnt notice there! Thank you so much for pointing it out! I will fix it now
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