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ZakkVanBurace ā Beyond the Rainbow
Published: 2010-09-02 14:08:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 5614; Favourites: 372; Downloads: 2
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Hii everyone!!
I've tried to effort myself in this picture since this is my last day with tablet
, but well, I'll have mine some day . I like this kind of pictures featuring beautiful females and all but I think I'm gonna try other kind of themes, so this is maybe the last one (though I draw more of this again in the future), I want to focus in other stuff
. BTW I think I'll conserve this character and will become one of my OCs, so I'm planning to give her a background story and a personality
, but I don't have name yet, anyone has any suggestions for a name for her??Also, I swear I'm going to do your commissions as soon as I can from now on
Done with SAI
Time: 6 hours
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are OPEN
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You have very good coloring on this but there are other problems stylistically and anatomically.
First of all, you're gonna wanna pull away from all the painfully generic anime traits you have going on. Experiment more with anime eye variations, facial structures and ways of coloring hair or it'll become learned into your system and your art will never stand out.
There are a few anatomy problems as well, notably in that her torso, arms and legs do not coincide together. Take a look at a picture of a real girl to use as the basis for making a more cartoony version.
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thank you very much for the critique
I'll have in mind all your suggestions
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Wow! I'm amazed with the picture, and since this is an impressive artwork, I shall give you one. ^^
The presentation is so colorful and well shaded, in fact, what I first noticed is how colorful this whole picture turned out, what I love is how you blend them together nicely, also the shadings are well done.
The girl here is quite beautiful if you ask me. I love how you did her dress, it's simple and quite fitting for this picture. Her wings are beautiful and quite big indeed. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Now the only small error here is her arm. One of them is slightly bigger than the other one because of perspective. No worries, since it's the only minor flaw I could find, the rest of this great picture is what makes it still enjoyable.
In addition, the details of the flowers and glowing doves further adds the positive feeling to all of us. Anyone sees this will surely make their day feel better. I've too felt the positiveness coming out of this amazing picture. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
In conclusion, you have put a lot of heart and soul into making this beautiful picture, anyone sees this will surely come out happy for what you created. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/aā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for all you've said
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In addition, whatever I see, I learn. So we both learned something new. That's why we're here.
Hehe, sorry about that, an awesome person I met said something about this. Practice makes perfect as say they.
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How did you do that? did you use photoshop? looks gorgeous. i like the colour effect.
now, just a bit suggestion, i think the body proportion looks slightly slanted? for example, look at the feet part. they don't follow the symmetrical line. i hope you get what i am saying... But all in all, I like the mood!
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Thank you
Oh I understand what you said XD, but this drawing is a year old and I already knew the proportion thing, but thanks anyway ^^
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Ohh thank you! XD
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You're very welcome, darling!
Keep up the amazing work!
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Well, since I'm poor I can't necessarily write a critique, but I can still leave you with some advice, right?
Though I can't put it in practice myself, the anatomy here is a liiiiitle bit off. Especially the feet/leg lenght. Also the left side of the head kinda sticks out too much. It may not seem too noticeable now, but if you flip the picture it'll stand out a lot. That's a great trick to getting the right proportions. The skirt is also a bit stiff-looking.
Now the best part~! Good point. And trust me, there are a lot.
First off I love the coloring. The cell shading is amazing the lighting is also fantastic. I'm quite jealous since I can never make anything shiny, actually. The hand structure is quite good and the background is beautiful. I love the third flower from the left and the doves, but the most outstanding is definitely the shading and coloring overall. Great job!
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the dress was good^^ (and drawing dresses is not my specialty) but the structure of the body, you must improve it. before, it was really a challenge for me to draw a girl. i've studied... and studied... and studied.... then i got it! 
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Thank you
Yeah I also think I have to improve the anatomy in my drawings, but it's veeery hard for me 
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hehe... i only know how to draw animals before. then i checked out humans. that's when i started making comics...X]
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This deviation has been featured here :[link]
Thank You once again
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aah thank you very much!!
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your welcome :Smile:
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Isabelle? Esa? Blueberry head? XD pretty pic
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thank you
Aahh I'll think on Isabelle... thank you!
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You're welcome
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It looks really beautiful!
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aah thank you very much!
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No problem
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Utterly glorious use of color! She's stunning!
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