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Published: 2011-06-23 06:38:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1976; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 64
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it's a funny little snail which want to know this world xDBlender - modeling
Zbrush - making normal maps
3D max - grass
Vray - render xD
1 or 2 days i spent on this art
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it's not gary xDDD i don't like this mult ^_^
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Oh, this is such an AWESOME picture! I love it!!
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This made me laugh!
Plus, I agree with =Cymae's critique and would like to add one more small bit: the shell texture clearly looks mirrored, if you can find a way to offset it and make it look more asymmetrical I think you'd get much better result.
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thanks a lot, i'm glad u like it ^_^ i know it and i wanted to finish that Snail as quick as i can ^_^ But now i'm working on art with girl and i want to use No mirrored objects and textures ^_^
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There are 2 major pieces of critique I'd like to offer here.
First off, the shell on your snail looks like a bump map. I say that because we get a very angled view of it and it's completely smooth, with no bumps and edges that the texture indicates. If you're going to look at something this side-on you really need to shed the bump map and do things with displacement.
Secondly, the eyes and eye sockets look a bit wrong. Consider thickening up the sides of the sockets more and getting a better fit to the eyeballs. Try looking at real snails to see how their eyeballs fit into the socket. Eyeballs are much bigger than just what you see when you look at someone's eyes. if someone smacked your snail on the back of the head, it's eyeballs would fall out, and this makes it look wrong.
I'd also consider adding some more dynamic lighting and pushing it down further into the grass, with stalks of grass around it.
Cute though, I like the texture on the eyesockets and the little plant thing, the expression is nice too.
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Thanks u very much for critique!
I realy used only bump map without displacement, it's my fail case i don't like to work with displacement map ><
It's a little comic art so i didn't want too much reality, but there was a problem occurred during modeling, and sockets of eyes "get crushed" ^_^
Thanks again for critique ^_^
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That is very cute. At first I thought it was a real figurine, the textures are very nice.
Great job.
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You're very welcome. :3
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That's the first time when I don't look at snail with an "yuck" expression on my face.
Very cute
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thanks i'm glad you like it ^_^
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There has never been a snail more cute :3
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Keep up the good work buddy!
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