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eternalpose [2015-02-11 00:46:08 +0000 UTC]
reading this fic right now, it's really good and love your art!
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Spilled-Sunlight [2014-05-06 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]
*myself ^^^^^^
dur hurr, typos.
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Spilled-Sunlight [2014-05-06 17:24:01 +0000 UTC]
Tiff, don't run away and be embarrassed, I actually really like this art. Sure, it shocked me at first YEAH, but if we're just screwing around and being brutally honest here, I LIKE creepy stuff. This one just took me off guard. And as you know I highly relate himself to Luffy. We both have similar struggles in life and our personalities click like a puzzle. We're pretty damn close. So I suppose when I see a rather "dark" imagine of this captain, it unsettles me because I think I unconsciously see a bit of myself in it. This happens from watching over 450 episodes and cosplay Luffy over and over...... >3>
So yeah, really great work, and while I'm at it I'd also like to comment on the lighting particularly on Luffy's shirt, it's extraordinary/wonderful.
Oh gosh I hope I don't look at this too much. I hate syringes and have vivid dreams LOL. Wouldn't want those two mixing.. bahahahahahah
-KrisΒ
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20216 [2013-08-17 08:55:19 +0000 UTC]
I second HexTheVixen's request!!!!! That would be amazing! I love reading your stories and looking at your artwork, it always puts a sparkle in my day. You tell amazing stories with just the expressions that you draw, but the fact that you actually take the time to create a whole world-or rather, island- is even more incredible. Thank you for all your wonderful work!!!
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SyIthian [2013-08-04 04:48:21 +0000 UTC]
squee, will the next chapter be out anytime soon?
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HexTheVixen [2013-07-29 02:08:48 +0000 UTC]
I love you're fanfictions especially "for Nakama" and "Blue, Gold, and Pale"! They are so well done and have great story lines! Can I request a scene from Blue, Gold and Pale?
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Zinfer In reply to HexTheVixen [2013-07-29 02:38:54 +0000 UTC]
Yes ^_^ please do. I love requests from my fics
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HexTheVixen In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-29 04:59:57 +0000 UTC]
Can I request the part where Luke Finds Luffy?
Like this area:
Luke covered his mouth in disgust, wanting to turn away but not willing to give up just yet. Slowly he reached out a hand towards the kid's head, struggling to see in the darkness but noting that his face was out of the water. A faint ripple was sporadically emitting from his open mouth, which was an immediate sign to the ape that the soul still held to its vessel.
"Jeez kid" he whispered to himself as he placed a hand on the boy's drenched head, now noting that he was freezing cold. If the human acknowledged his existence he didn't show it. Glancing around to make sure the coast was clear, he reached both hands into the narrow cranny, wondering if there was a part of the human's body that wasn't injured that he could grab hold of to pull him out. Taking a handful of the base of the boy's tattered shorts, he dragged the limp form towards himself, noting the soft whimper that rose from the back of the kid's throat. If he hadn't seen the warrior in action he would never have believed this person to be capable of doing what he did. He seemed so frail up close, and this was only emphasized by the state he was in.
If the boy drew attention to them by making any noise louder than that, Luke decided he would just ditch him. He wasn't going to die for some outsider. He just hoped that his heart would be cold enough to make that decision if the situation turned south.
"Z-Zoro?" he heard the human gasp weakly, his breathing completely uneven and blood seeping from his mouth. The kid was dying. No, the kid had been dying the second he hit the water...
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Luffy-x-Ryusaki [2013-07-14 21:05:22 +0000 UTC]
amazing drawing.. i like the grey tones you used here (: makes it so dark and the feeling of luffys shock is clearly to see there. i really like your way of writting, very good detailed describtions *-* <3
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takoyakikarneval [2013-07-10 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]
I like your pic! >3<
Beeing cruel to Luffy, making him shiver and bleeding is probably the best thing ever! +_+
I'm a sadistic one~ xD Just do it!
And the last lines are so good *///*
Maybe I'll take a look~ [...if I ever get the time to finish the one I'm reading... x_x]
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Zinfer In reply to takoyakikarneval [2013-07-15 14:48:08 +0000 UTC]
ehehehehe, I'm sadistic as well (if you couldn't tell by my gallery and fic) if i didn't have a reputation of a sane person to uphold I would totally do this kind of stuff all of the time
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takoyakikarneval In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-16 20:31:50 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to see more, nyahaha! xD
If I wouldn't be so embarrased, I'd do this stuff too ^~^Β
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Opirou [2013-07-10 00:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Wow I'm so going to read your fanfiction now ! ΓuΓ β₯ ... Or later ...Hope I won'te forget it sdfgh
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Zinfer In reply to Opirou [2013-07-15 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]
haha ^_^ yay! please go take a look. man I need to update it -_-' my poor readers. It was like this for my last fic as well... but I did finish it!
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Grey-Terminal [2013-07-09 18:59:31 +0000 UTC]
Luffy looks so handsome there ^^
great drawing
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Grey-Terminal In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-16 10:19:28 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome^^
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Zinfer In reply to lutece-irwin [2013-07-15 14:49:31 +0000 UTC]
>_>' cause... well...
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moonlitinuyasha1985 In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-18 23:05:36 +0000 UTC]
*goes after the ape men with a chainsaw*
SAY YOUR PRAYERS, YA DAMN DIRTY APES!
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yellowpikmin88 [2013-07-05 06:47:50 +0000 UTC]
Jeez this is dark. When is Luffy gonna get back at these damn dirty apes
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yellowpikmin88 In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-07 06:08:40 +0000 UTC]
I doubt they'll question you but I do think your story needs a more positive turn at this point so Luffy can get back at these guys and save his friends. I look forward to it
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yellowpikmin88 In reply to Zinfer [2013-07-15 15:42:37 +0000 UTC]
Great. Cause it's time Luffy have these repulsive apes what's coming to em
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jackie777 In reply to yellowpikmin88 [2013-07-07 07:32:43 +0000 UTC]
What's worse, one may think "well, Luffy shows up later, right? on the next islands, in other stories, so he HAS to survive this, right?" but then one notices an "AU" sign and it reminds him about "aSoIaF" series... and then you have a Doctor too, with his "time can be rewritten" face...
And then you start to seriously worry.
But then it leaves a writer freedom to actually kill everyone in the series... So I guess it's a good thing.
...Right?
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yellowpikmin88 In reply to jackie777 [2013-07-07 08:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Freedom to imagine is always good, but killing everyone on the series would probably just upset the fans. If you're going to make a move like killing off a main protagonist you have to do it right cause its very tricky in my opinion to kill off a Main character in a way that will result in something better for the ones who suffered. Ace for example led to the crew getting stronger and Luffy learning the true value if his friends. That's the kind of killing I'm talking about
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jackie777 In reply to yellowpikmin88 [2013-07-07 19:42:02 +0000 UTC]
Well, let's be honest here, we've met Ace just for a bit in Alabasta, and then he became a damsel in distress that everyone had to rescue. I'm not saying I didn't like him - he's like Shanks, you don't need lots of action with him to love him, he's just THAT likeable character. I just want to say that putting him between "main characters" is a bit of exaggeration.
Martin was the first to kill off his main character, and THAT came as a shock to everyone.
Hell, even I separated the crew and killed bestially Zoro once in my fanfic, which resulted in devastating Luffys mind for a long while, and left him thinking what the f*ck was he doing with his life exactly, and almost handing himself up to Marines. And yet people loved this dark atmosphere and good ending I gave them in the end. So I guess angst in fanfics is good as long as it's in reasonable amounts.
But hell, even sugar is bad for you, if there is too much of it, right?
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Zinfer In reply to yellowpikmin88 [2013-08-01 05:08:24 +0000 UTC]
*super late to get in on this conversation* My heart can't handle too much angst. When I stumble upon fanfics that include ANY of the crew dying I hardly ever risk the damage it would do to my heart. There's been a few that were beautifully done, but most of the time it just ruins my day and I'm stuck digging for something to lift my spirits again.
Funny coming from me who writes and posts pictures of the main character being executed >_>' Β and I guess revealing my tender heart on the subject is a spoiler of sorts... ehehe....
I love a nice dose of hardship as long as its got balance and a somewhat happy ending (which pretty much describes the One Piece series to a T)Β
*shuffles away after throwing her 2 cents into the pot*Β
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yellowpikmin88 In reply to Zinfer [2013-08-01 06:13:28 +0000 UTC]
No I understand. I don't like sad stories either unless the angst is balanced out. I'm pretty sensitive about character deaths too. If you need something with a happier story (there is done drama but nothing like what your describing) there's the story 'Luffy and the wolf' by my good friend XfabgheartX
m.fanfiction.net/s/7048574
She also has an account here, if you check my profile you'll find her icon (it's the pokemon Glaceon) hope this helps in finding a nice story to read
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XfangheartX [2013-07-05 00:01:17 +0000 UTC]
LUFFY~!!
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yellowpikmin88 In reply to XfangheartX [2013-07-05 06:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Take your stinking paws off him, you damn dirty ape!!!
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