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Published: 2019-06-04 16:41:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1447; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Defeat.

That word floated through his mind, pushing every other coherent thought he might have back. He should be familiar with it. Ever since he launched the accursed attack on the Hall of Wisdom he had suffered it at the hands of the hero. A constant companion to every brilliant plan he had hatched in the past. And though the Masters had thwarted his plans he always had been able to pick himself up. This time, however, it was different. He had been utterly destroyed. This time, he was sure he would not come out of it alive. And what hurt him most was the fact, that his Second in command, his former lover was the source of his bitter loss.
He sighed heavily, trying to shift his weight a little, but the sturdy iron bands his wrist, arms and neck were bound together only bit deeper into his flesh.

Skeletor was gone, left behind was the shell of the man he once had been. A broken spirit in a beaten body. When Hordak returned, he had restored his face, yet made sure the acid burns were still fresh. It left him half blind, half of his face, lower arms and hands raw and painful.

His magic was gone. As much as he wanted to throw a ball of fire into the enemy's face, or at least heal the worst wounds a little, he found himself unable to do it. The powerful feeling of magicka that had surged through his veins for so long was gone. It left him feeling impotent and helpless.

His Evil Warriors were no more. Most of them had followed Evil-Lyn's lead. They had revelled in enacting their revenge on him. Revelled in seeing him helpless, in pain and at their mercy.  He had been beaten and whipped and silently he wondered why he still had all his limbs. Those few who were loyal to him had been slain. Panthor, his one true friend, had been butchered and skinned right in front of him. The look in the big cat's eyes still haunted him. It had pleaded for help, but he could do nothing but watch.
The Hordetrooper next to Keldor shifted his weight a little, bringing the man out of his brooding thoughts. A small frown appeared on Keldor's face. He still could not understand how Evil-Lyn had been able to summon Hordak back to  Eternia. Skeletor himself had destroyed the last sanctuary. His best guess was, that Skeletor in his misguided believes and arrogance had quite simply overlooked something. Something important.  And Lyn in her absolute lust for power had brought a force here, which would destroy them all.

Again Keldor sighed deeply and raised his gaze to a small hill. There, black against the red sky stood a hastily constructed gallows. Soon he would take his last breaths there. Soon the hunger, that burned through his body, eating his insides up and made him dizzy would end.

Where is that accursed hero, when I need him?

He thought bitterly, chuckling at his own foolish thoughts. His little outburst was rewarded by a sharp yank on his chains. Keldor hissed through clenched teeth as the throbbing pain in his shoulders intensified tenfold. He bit his bruised lower lip. There would be no hero to show up. There would be no one to save him from his end, for he was not worth saving. He – Skeletor – had done things, that simply could not be redeemed. He had murdered and defiled, enslaved those who dared to live too close to Snake Mountain. It was only right, that he was now on the receiving end. And even if he was saved, he would never be able to do any good. He was utterly helpless. Half blind, with burned hands and without any magic to rely on, he would only be good as a beggar on the street.
Keldor shook his head. No. He would end today.

At least I don't have to suffer under Hordak's reign any longer.

He thought gloomily, eying the gallows pole wearily.

At least I don't have to suffer through yet another defeat...

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Leo8488 [2019-09-14 14:26:37 +0000 UTC]

Poor Keldor...I hope He-man comes to the rescue (or Teela or maybe Evil-Lyn who hopefully is double-crossing Hordak & saves him).

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Zombilein In reply to Leo8488 [2019-09-14 22:36:12 +0000 UTC]

nope, none of them comes to help him....

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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-10-01 19:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Quick idea...

As Keldor is lead to the top of the gallows, his open wounds ache, but nothing hurts worst than being betrayed by the woman that he once loved. Abounded by the warriors that once fought alongside him, his beloved panthor dead. Not even the masters of the Universe will come to his aid. No one will help him. He stares at Hordak, with such hatred. The being that ruined his life, if only he could go back in time & stop himself from throwing that vial. Then none of this would be happening. But what nobody knows, is that Keldor has an ace up his sleeve, what may call, " A Hail Mary".

Hordak, Does the prisoner have any last words.

Keldor looks up Hordak, with a smirk on his face.

Keldor: Yeah, I do...

Keldor head butts the guard on his left, & a leg swoop, knocking over the guard on his right. Another guard swings his sword down at Keldor. Keldor does a spin jump, so when the sword comes down, it slashes through the chain connecting his cuffs. Keldor turns & winks at the guy.

Keldor: Thanks.

Quickly, Keldor reaches down into his belt, into a secret pocket. He pulls out a small silver object. Bringing it to his lips, he blows hard as he can. No sound comes out, the solder (1st one) smashes the hilt of his sword on the back of Keldor's head. 

Hordak: That was pitiful, now let's get back on with the execution. 

As the guards lead Keldor back to the center, the (1st) soldier picks up the object, a whistle. With carved writing on the side. He examines it.

1st Soldier: HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

Hordak: What is it?

1st Soldier: I'M GETTING THE F**K OUTTA HERE!

The soldier jumps off the gallows & runs off at full speed. Before he can shot the soldier, a girl appears on the hilltop. She points & screams (hysterical screams)

Girl: OMG IT'S REALLY HIM! IT'S KELDOR! LET'S GET HIM!

The girl runs down the hill letting out a high pitched shrill, suddenly a horde of girls follow. Than that horde quickly turns into a massive army. Hordak grabs the whistle & examines the writing. "CRAZY FANGIRL WHISTLE"

Hordak: FML...

The massive army of crazed fangirls climb all over the gallows & attack Hordak & Hordaks soldiers (World War Z or The Great Wall style). 



Several hours later...

Keldor is relaxing on the beach, getting a full-body massage, food & drinks by the crazed fangirls. Hordaks head impaled on a stake, & his the rest of his men corpses roasting in a bonfire. Sitting next to Keldor is Loki.

Keldor: I could get used to this.

Loki: Remember what I told you when I sold it to you in the first place. CRAZY FANGIRL whistle can be used only once. 

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Zombilein In reply to Leo8488 [2019-10-01 21:56:41 +0000 UTC]

hahahahaha that was epic  
Totally can see Keldor and Loki chilling out together  

Besides, he was saved

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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-10-01 22:27:27 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I got the idea, from a Loki meme.

Loki: I have an army!

Iron Man: Fangirls don't count.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=dGGNFy…

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Zombilein In reply to Leo8488 [2019-10-02 09:35:08 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha the power of Steroids 
omg I'm dying 

Yeah, you know, Barbaro did  the trick this time and saved Keldor's sorry little ass

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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-10-02 14:16:28 +0000 UTC]

YAY, BARBARO!

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Leo8488 In reply to Leo8488 [2019-10-18 20:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Loki, Keldor & Barbaro resting on the beach, being pampered by the horde of crazed fangirls, all-singing, "Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life"

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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-09-26 21:26:08 +0000 UTC]

 

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FoxWriter2 [2019-06-15 06:05:15 +0000 UTC]

That was a pretty interesting short story! The image conveys it all too well. Also you could really tell those whip marks have been there a while, with the purple bruising and all. It's a nice touch! Though not really in the literal sense... xD

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Zombilein In reply to FoxWriter2 [2019-06-15 08:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much really glad you liked it. Thought I overdid it a little with the wounds and it really is a depressing picture...

And now, Mr. dethroned, I'm-not-worth-anything Overlord needs some good little saving don't you think? 

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FoxWriter2 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-15 09:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Just a little bit, but it's alright xD

I'm not sure saving him is going to make it at all ._.

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Zombilein In reply to FoxWriter2 [2019-06-15 09:37:00 +0000 UTC]

I think he reached a point where he doesn't want to be saved. He knows, that he should have died long ago and knows what Skeletor did. Even if he was saved, he would be shunned from society for that. And he lost his powers, he would not be able to defend himself... 

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FoxWriter2 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-18 16:10:12 +0000 UTC]

That's kind of depressing :/

But one gets the feeling of why and it's kind of absolute.

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FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 16:09:48 +0000 UTC]

^^ I read the one-shot; it was good. I like how it gave out the angst and sadness.
I want to say that if my ocs Jessica and Scarseca were there, they wouldn’t betray Keldor/Skeletor.

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 17:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad you like it. I'm not much of a writer  

Well, Lyn tends to betray him, if she thinks she can gain something from it. But yes, as far as I followed your story, I bet they would not betray him.

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 17:44:10 +0000 UTC]

I’ve also been wanting to say that as I read the one-shot, the song “Missing” by Evanescence played in my head.

True that about Evil-Lyn. As evil as they are, they protect the ones they highly respect.

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 17:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice song choice. In my head "Fade to black" played, I think being on his lowest now he might even welcome the end. Not that he will get it, though. 

I always thought Tri-klops might be the most loyal and closest to a friend, Keldor had. That's why he accompanied Keldor on his journey in my comic.

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 17:53:12 +0000 UTC]

I’ll check the song “Fade to black” out.

I figured he would based on the episode of when Skeletor had that torture belt, Tri-Klops never laughed whenever the belt shocked Skeletor.

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 18:17:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah I noticed that as well. Made me really sad to see, that Skeletor didn't honour it. He treated poor old Trike quite badly

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 18:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes, when I saw that at the end of that episode, I thought, “But....Tri-Klops never laughed at you!” But I think the reason he did that to Tri-Klops is cuz of the “peer pressure” type of thing.  

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 18:46:25 +0000 UTC]

It wasn't just that episode. Skeletor threw him out of the throne room or did similar stuff, even though Trike was not the culprit of anything. 

Still. I like to think that they have been friends, before Keldor was turned. And in my comic Trike is shaken by Keldor's apparent death 

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 18:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

It does seem like that.

I imagine this scenario if my ocs were with Keldor in this pic—

Jessica: (looks at Keldor with a heavy heart cuz she and Scarseca had tried to help defend him, but failed and along with that, hers and Scarseca’s powers were stolen by Hordak, thus had them weakened and Hordak commanded his troopers to chain up Scarseca and Jessica too)

Scarseca: (had tried many times to break out of the chains even though she knew deep down it was pointless of her to do that now that hers and Jessica’s powers were stolen)

Keldor: (feels a hint of gratitude that the two choleric tomboys tried to help defend him and has the comfort of knowing that Scarseca and Jessica figuratively and literally stuck by him until the end...)

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 19:23:50 +0000 UTC]

awww your poor OC. Hope they will get free and their powers back. And then whoop Hordak's sorry little ass.

Here Keldor is actually content with his death. He knows that he as Skeletor has done so many horrible things, that he cannot be redeemed. And he knows that He-man probably won't show up for him. Duncan and Randor may hate him for all he has done. He had tried to kill poor young Adam at least twice. 

But maybe there is some friend out there that might help him after all. Will Keldor be happy about help? Probably not. But heh, can't have all  

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 19:28:14 +0000 UTC]

They want to.

Maybe there is.

Jessica: (she and Scarseca have heard before that Evil-Lyn betrayed Skeletor, but were foolish to think that Evil-Lyn wouldn’t do it again since Skeletor had tried to punish her before, and now doesn’t consider Evil-Lyn a friend anymore)

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 19:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Keldor: and rightly so. She, my former lover, betrayed me again and again. How can she be trusted, when she sides with the enemy and seeks my death?

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 19:42:30 +0000 UTC]

(I forgot to mention that Scarseca never liked Evil-Lyn from the beginning, Scarseca considered Evil-Lyn as the ally she doesn’t like.)

Scarseca: (to Keldor) I never liked her from the beginning. 

Jessica: (to Keldor) The phrase: “Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me” really is a true saying. (Sighs) Damn our assumption.

Scarseca: (to Jessica) -_- Damn our assumption is right, Jess. (To Keldor) But still, after you tried to punish her after you found out she assisted with freeing that fucker King Hiss, we assumed she wouldn’t betray you again since you’re good at dishing out punishments.

Jessica: I hate myself right now.

Scarseca: I hate myself right now too.

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 11:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Keldor sighs, not knowing what to say. They were right of course. He was a fool to trust her after all she had done in the past.

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 11:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Jessica: (to Scarseca) The times you talked to Evil-Lyn, at first I thought you were just being snarky for no reason—

Scarseca: (to Jessica) -_- I tried telling you my reasons for being “snarky” to her before, remember?

Jessica: >_> Right......

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 14:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Keldor: Please don't argue. That won't make it any better

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Scarseca and Jessica: (to Keldor) O_O ...sorry.

Jessica: (feels extra sorry)

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 15:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Keldor looks up at the gallows again and sighs 

"Promise me something. When they come for me, please don't fight. Try to get away, before HE destroys you as well." 

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Scarseca and Jessica: (to Keldor) (both feel sorrow growing inside of them when they hear Keldor along with even how they knew it would be pointless to fight Hordak anyway since Hordak stole their powers) G-got it.

Jessica: (to Keldor) (tears well in her eyes) Y-ya know we...we w-would do anything f-for you.

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 15:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Despite his face being raw and hurting he smiles at them. A sad yet real smile that makes his eyes shine with gratitude. 

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Scarseca and Jessica: (if they weren’t chained up, they would hug Keldor right now) (smiles back)

Jessica: (tears now roll down her face) (to Keldor) W-we’ll never forget you. A-also, w-we wish we could do something e-else to h-help you...

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 16:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Keldor: I will not forget you either. Take care of each other. Times will change, things will get rough around here

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 16:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Scarseca: (to Keldor) (doesn’t bother to fight back the tears that are now welling in her eyes) We will...Jess and I had plenty of practice of looking out for each other.

Jessica: (to Keldor) (tears roll down her face still) W-we’ll miss you so much! And, we a-always had fun working for you! I wish we can r-relive the memories of working for you again.

Scarseca: (to Keldor) So do I.

Scarseca and Jessica: (now secretly hopes that luck will happen so then Keldor won’t die along with them getting their powers back, and if there’s no luck, then they hope they can make Evil-Lyn pay for what she did since they’ll never forgive her like they never forgave King Hiss for attacking Skeletor that day on Snake Mountain)

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vampire0b20 [2019-06-13 13:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Noo   Come on, give the man a break....
*hugs Keldor* Come at me fishman, don't you dare to lay a finger on my husband...

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Zombilein In reply to vampire0b20 [2019-06-13 17:40:03 +0000 UTC]

No rest for the wicket... but yes, poor old Keldor. I don't think he imagined being in this kind of situation. Maybe there is a friend that might come to the rescue... 

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vampire0b20 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 20:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Well that hero needs to come soon or Keldor will be gone >.<

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Zombilein In reply to vampire0b20 [2019-06-14 21:25:11 +0000 UTC]

If no hero shows up, he will be hanged. And as for now, Keldor isn't to unhappy about that prospect. I think, he has given up.... and probably needs a good ass whooping to get his sh*t together.

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FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-11 15:50:22 +0000 UTC]

O_o Uh-oh...

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-11 17:00:05 +0000 UTC]

he doesn't look too happy... there will be a little oneshot, once the pic is finished.

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-11 17:06:45 +0000 UTC]

No, he doesn’t. *Hugs Keldor in comfort*
I can’t wait to see the one shot. ^^

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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 08:20:47 +0000 UTC]

I think he really needs a little love right now

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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 15:05:45 +0000 UTC]

I think so too.

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