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Leo8488 [2019-09-14 14:26:37 +0000 UTC]
Poor Keldor...I hope He-man comes to the rescue (or Teela or maybe Evil-Lyn who hopefully is double-crossing Hordak & saves him).
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Zombilein In reply to Leo8488 [2019-09-14 22:36:12 +0000 UTC]
nope, none of them comes to help him....
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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-10-01 19:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Quick idea...
As Keldor is lead to the top of the gallows, his open wounds ache, but nothing hurts worst than being betrayed by the woman that he once loved. Abounded by the warriors that once fought alongside him, his beloved panthor dead. Not even the masters of the Universe will come to his aid. No one will help him. He stares at Hordak, with such hatred. The being that ruined his life, if only he could go back in time & stop himself from throwing that vial. Then none of this would be happening. But what nobody knows, is that Keldor has an ace up his sleeve, what may call, " A Hail Mary".
Hordak, Does the prisoner have any last words.
Keldor looks up Hordak, with a smirk on his face.
Keldor: Yeah, I do...
Keldor head butts the guard on his left, & a leg swoop, knocking over the guard on his right. Another guard swings his sword down at Keldor. Keldor does a spin jump, so when the sword comes down, it slashes through the chain connecting his cuffs. Keldor turns & winks at the guy.
Keldor: Thanks.
Quickly, Keldor reaches down into his belt, into a secret pocket. He pulls out a small silver object. Bringing it to his lips, he blows hard as he can. No sound comes out, the solder (1st one) smashes the hilt of his sword on the back of Keldor's head.
Hordak: That was pitiful, now let's get back on with the execution.
As the guards lead Keldor back to the center, the (1st) soldier picks up the object, a whistle. With carved writing on the side. He examines it.
1st Soldier: HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!
Hordak: What is it?
1st Soldier: I'M GETTING THE F**K OUTTA HERE!
The soldier jumps off the gallows & runs off at full speed. Before he can shot the soldier, a girl appears on the hilltop. She points & screams (hysterical screams)
Girl: OMG IT'S REALLY HIM! IT'S KELDOR! LET'S GET HIM!
The girl runs down the hill letting out a high pitched shrill, suddenly a horde of girls follow. Than that horde quickly turns into a massive army. Hordak grabs the whistle & examines the writing. "CRAZY FANGIRL WHISTLE"
Hordak: FML...
The massive army of crazed fangirls climb all over the gallows & attack Hordak & Hordaks soldiers (World War Z or The Great Wall style).
Several hours later...
Keldor is relaxing on the beach, getting a full-body massage, food & drinks by the crazed fangirls. Hordaks head impaled on a stake, & his the rest of his men corpses roasting in a bonfire. Sitting next to Keldor is Loki.
Keldor: I could get used to this.
Loki: Remember what I told you when I sold it to you in the first place. CRAZY FANGIRL whistle can be used only once.
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Leo8488 In reply to Zombilein [2019-10-02 14:16:28 +0000 UTC]
YAY, BARBARO!
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Leo8488 In reply to Leo8488 [2019-10-18 20:25:18 +0000 UTC]
Loki, Keldor & Barbaro resting on the beach, being pampered by the horde of crazed fangirls, all-singing, "Always Look On The Bright Side Of Life"
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FoxWriter2 [2019-06-15 06:05:15 +0000 UTC]
That was a pretty interesting short story! The image conveys it all too well. Also you could really tell those whip marks have been there a while, with the purple bruising and all. It's a nice touch! Though not really in the literal sense... xD
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FoxWriter2 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-15 09:16:03 +0000 UTC]
Just a little bit, but it's alright xD
I'm not sure saving him is going to make it at all ._.
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Zombilein In reply to FoxWriter2 [2019-06-15 09:37:00 +0000 UTC]
I think he reached a point where he doesn't want to be saved. He knows, that he should have died long ago and knows what Skeletor did. Even if he was saved, he would be shunned from society for that. And he lost his powers, he would not be able to defend himself...
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FoxWriter2 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-18 16:10:12 +0000 UTC]
That's kind of depressing :/
But one gets the feeling of why and it's kind of absolute.
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FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 16:09:48 +0000 UTC]
^^ I read the one-shot; it was good. I like how it gave out the angst and sadness.
I want to say that if my ocs Jessica and Scarseca were there, they wouldn’t betray Keldor/Skeletor.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 17:50:45 +0000 UTC]
Nice song choice. In my head "Fade to black" played, I think being on his lowest now he might even welcome the end. Not that he will get it, though.
I always thought Tri-klops might be the most loyal and closest to a friend, Keldor had. That's why he accompanied Keldor on his journey in my comic.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 18:17:24 +0000 UTC]
yeah I noticed that as well. Made me really sad to see, that Skeletor didn't honour it. He treated poor old Trike quite badly
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 18:20:51 +0000 UTC]
Yes, when I saw that at the end of that episode, I thought, “But....Tri-Klops never laughed at you!” But I think the reason he did that to Tri-Klops is cuz of the “peer pressure” type of thing.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 18:46:25 +0000 UTC]
It wasn't just that episode. Skeletor threw him out of the throne room or did similar stuff, even though Trike was not the culprit of anything.
Still. I like to think that they have been friends, before Keldor was turned. And in my comic Trike is shaken by Keldor's apparent death
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 19:23:50 +0000 UTC]
awww your poor OC. Hope they will get free and their powers back. And then whoop Hordak's sorry little ass.
Here Keldor is actually content with his death. He knows that he as Skeletor has done so many horrible things, that he cannot be redeemed. And he knows that He-man probably won't show up for him. Duncan and Randor may hate him for all he has done. He had tried to kill poor young Adam at least twice.
But maybe there is some friend out there that might help him after all. Will Keldor be happy about help? Probably not. But heh, can't have all
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 19:28:14 +0000 UTC]
They want to.
Maybe there is.
Jessica: (she and Scarseca have heard before that Evil-Lyn betrayed Skeletor, but were foolish to think that Evil-Lyn wouldn’t do it again since Skeletor had tried to punish her before, and now doesn’t consider Evil-Lyn a friend anymore)
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 19:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Keldor: and rightly so. She, my former lover, betrayed me again and again. How can she be trusted, when she sides with the enemy and seeks my death?
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-13 19:42:30 +0000 UTC]
(I forgot to mention that Scarseca never liked Evil-Lyn from the beginning, Scarseca considered Evil-Lyn as the ally she doesn’t like.)
Scarseca: (to Keldor) I never liked her from the beginning.
Jessica: (to Keldor) The phrase: “Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me” really is a true saying. (Sighs) Damn our assumption.
Scarseca: (to Jessica) -_- Damn our assumption is right, Jess. (To Keldor) But still, after you tried to punish her after you found out she assisted with freeing that fucker King Hiss, we assumed she wouldn’t betray you again since you’re good at dishing out punishments.
Jessica: I hate myself right now.
Scarseca: I hate myself right now too.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 11:02:39 +0000 UTC]
Keldor sighs, not knowing what to say. They were right of course. He was a fool to trust her after all she had done in the past.
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 11:21:10 +0000 UTC]
Jessica: (to Scarseca) The times you talked to Evil-Lyn, at first I thought you were just being snarky for no reason—
Scarseca: (to Jessica) -_- I tried telling you my reasons for being “snarky” to her before, remember?
Jessica: >_> Right......
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 14:56:29 +0000 UTC]
Keldor: Please don't argue. That won't make it any better
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:06:13 +0000 UTC]
Scarseca and Jessica: (to Keldor) O_O ...sorry.
Jessica: (feels extra sorry)
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 15:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Keldor looks up at the gallows again and sighs
"Promise me something. When they come for me, please don't fight. Try to get away, before HE destroys you as well."
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:17:06 +0000 UTC]
Scarseca and Jessica: (to Keldor) (both feel sorrow growing inside of them when they hear Keldor along with even how they knew it would be pointless to fight Hordak anyway since Hordak stole their powers) G-got it.
Jessica: (to Keldor) (tears well in her eyes) Y-ya know we...we w-would do anything f-for you.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 15:44:53 +0000 UTC]
Despite his face being raw and hurting he smiles at them. A sad yet real smile that makes his eyes shine with gratitude.
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 15:47:48 +0000 UTC]
Scarseca and Jessica: (if they weren’t chained up, they would hug Keldor right now) (smiles back)
Jessica: (tears now roll down her face) (to Keldor) W-we’ll never forget you. A-also, w-we wish we could do something e-else to h-help you...
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-14 16:04:42 +0000 UTC]
Keldor: I will not forget you either. Take care of each other. Times will change, things will get rough around here
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 16:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Scarseca: (to Keldor) (doesn’t bother to fight back the tears that are now welling in her eyes) We will...Jess and I had plenty of practice of looking out for each other.
Jessica: (to Keldor) (tears roll down her face still) W-we’ll miss you so much! And, we a-always had fun working for you! I wish we can r-relive the memories of working for you again.
Scarseca: (to Keldor) So do I.
Scarseca and Jessica: (now secretly hopes that luck will happen so then Keldor won’t die along with them getting their powers back, and if there’s no luck, then they hope they can make Evil-Lyn pay for what she did since they’ll never forgive her like they never forgave King Hiss for attacking Skeletor that day on Snake Mountain)
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vampire0b20 [2019-06-13 13:25:10 +0000 UTC]
Noo Come on, give the man a break....
*hugs Keldor* Come at me fishman, don't you dare to lay a finger on my husband...
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Zombilein In reply to vampire0b20 [2019-06-13 17:40:03 +0000 UTC]
No rest for the wicket... but yes, poor old Keldor. I don't think he imagined being in this kind of situation. Maybe there is a friend that might come to the rescue...
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vampire0b20 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-14 20:07:32 +0000 UTC]
Well that hero needs to come soon or Keldor will be gone >.<
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Zombilein In reply to vampire0b20 [2019-06-14 21:25:11 +0000 UTC]
If no hero shows up, he will be hanged. And as for now, Keldor isn't to unhappy about that prospect. I think, he has given up.... and probably needs a good ass whooping to get his sh*t together.
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-11 17:00:05 +0000 UTC]
he doesn't look too happy... there will be a little oneshot, once the pic is finished.
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FemaleJester1212 In reply to Zombilein [2019-06-11 17:06:45 +0000 UTC]
No, he doesn’t. *Hugs Keldor in comfort*
I can’t wait to see the one shot. ^^
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Zombilein In reply to FemaleJester1212 [2019-06-13 08:20:47 +0000 UTC]
I think he really needs a little love right now
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