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Rozzi-dk [2014-11-08 09:06:48 +0000 UTC]
For me, it makes a lot of sense. So very true!
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misfit-geek [2014-11-07 21:50:31 +0000 UTC]
So true.
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British-Prophetess [2014-11-07 21:29:08 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! I've chosen you as the 56th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week
You've portrayed the subject of depression in such a deep, profound and hard hitting way here. The last time I was depressed was last month and even though it lasted a few weeks it porved to be slightly difficult for me. Eventually I got over it but it kinda ruined October for me personally. I really enjoyed this poem, the meaning/messages behind your words were so easy to relate to.
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Tripoqgirl [2014-07-02 01:36:23 +0000 UTC]
I really like it, but I think in the line "No one will survive depression is left on their own" should have an "if" not an "is". Sorry if you find my comment annoying, but I think making this correction would improve the quality of your work even more.
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DavisJes In reply to Tripoqgirl [2014-07-02 02:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Sometime a writer can't see the small things.
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Tripoqgirl In reply to DavisJes [2014-07-02 02:25:33 +0000 UTC]
I find that it always helps to reread a poem a few times, just to make sure it is how you want it. That's the easiest way to catch mistakes. Writing a poem is a great way to let go of repressed feelings.
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CreativeSoul007 [2014-06-06 01:18:02 +0000 UTC]
Awww! Thanks so much! Now that I'm home from college, I feel like I'm doing better, sort of, but I still have bad days. It sucks; depression never really leaves you.
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DavisJes In reply to CreativeSoul007 [2014-06-07 01:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. I am 31 and I still have my bad moments.
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CreativeSoul007 [2014-04-16 04:05:58 +0000 UTC]
I can relate so well to this it's scary. Amazing job! Very poignant; more people need to be understanding and supportive, the stigma needs to stop. The horrible stigma keeps me from opening up to people about my depression.
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Giffin2 [2011-07-07 19:24:13 +0000 UTC]
I want to cut something. But not my wrists. I want to cut someone. Someone I hate.
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DavisJes In reply to Giffin2 [2011-07-09 13:07:43 +0000 UTC]
thanks
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Skitlesgirl105 [2011-06-03 19:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Thatz really good!!
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Jfulton360 [2010-11-13 21:45:15 +0000 UTC]
i can relate, and this is how i feel as well
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midnightl [2010-07-19 08:34:15 +0000 UTC]
I can relate to this as well. It's voicing my thoughts extremely well. Good work
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Aqua-Goddess [2010-06-26 16:53:42 +0000 UTC]
True..... So true... Except I don't cut... But the temptation... grows.
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Bluelezzie [2010-04-08 11:33:00 +0000 UTC]
very well done
, written exactly as it is
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Lady-DreamSoul [2010-02-11 05:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Very well written and hits very close to home.
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RhayvenNite In reply to DavisJes [2010-02-12 13:49:49 +0000 UTC]
Always good to just go to sleep. Its very therapeutic :3
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liebezch [2010-02-10 05:48:28 +0000 UTC]
thank you.
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Winding-Silence [2010-02-04 05:02:50 +0000 UTC]
Good work, and you are of course very right.
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Devildog501 [2010-02-02 02:10:29 +0000 UTC]
exceptional, it really does tell what dapression does to it's victims
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Lunastar12 [2009-05-30 03:19:27 +0000 UTC]
very good... i printed it off for my parents who are wonderfully oblivious to all around them...
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DavisJes In reply to Lunastar12 [2009-06-01 01:02:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
let me know what they say
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Bianca-Jo [2009-02-22 02:43:53 +0000 UTC]
Amen...
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DavisJes In reply to reno-xxxXXXxxx [2009-02-11 05:13:26 +0000 UTC]
I AM bipolar/manic-depressive.
If you ever wanna talk send me a note here or on Yahoo IM DavisJes2005.
Thanks for reading and thanks for the fav.
Just curious, how did you find this?
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