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Published: 2013-08-16 18:57:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2434; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 8
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The hierarchies of the four Overlord stories being written by myself and three of my fellow Overlordians."Reborn Darkness" by , "Shadow's Embrace" by , "Rise of a new Shadow" by , "The Eye" by
Decided to start with this one while I still had reasonably few characters to work with. Much easier that way.
I will be updating this one every once in awhile when new chapters are posted. I will re-submit it during larger updates.
As always, please give me a heads-up if I have misspelled, missed something or otherwise made mistakes
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Glad to hear so. Should have been a line connecting him to Jinx, but hopefully that names serves well enough for that purpose
Yeah, but as Clunch has been somewhat absent with updates for a while, so I am not when it grows again
Well, for a given value of 'alive'. You'll just have to see
Tiny changes are easy changes, it will take all of twenty seconds, and.... done
Heh, yeah, the one thing I won't change, no criss-crossing lines or everything goes to hell, poor Shadow will have to suffer that little indignity, maybe it gets rearranged next time
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The name is better 
In time, perhaps. He's busy with another project now ^^
Ooooh, now it's your turn to tease 
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W'll have to thank Jinri for demanding that I change it
Oh, good to hear it isn't just lack of inspiration then
Heh
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sorry for not updating the eye in a while my mind is quite a chaos at the moment with different projects. I'm not only occupied with stories but also university stuff because i'm planning to go to Kenya for my thesis and to Sweden for an internship. Thirdly my chocolate mold sculpturer is slacking ass what causes quite some frustration so I don't write that much at all. I know what to type though just need to get a good feeling and i'm right back on that track. Don't want all that energy you put in go to waste.
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No need to apologise, if you are busy you are busy, I understand
I know how time-consuming university can be. And that is before side-projects.
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I know but i wanted to explain nonetheless ^^
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So, lessee...
Grubby is a Minion Digger, with only two n's
Same for the Rulling Hammer of Kerma.
One of the shadow weavers goes by the name of Ssirin, with two i's.
Grime is an Advisor assistant, with three s
And finally, I might mention that the druids lack a hierarchic structure. Also, Count Doran might be worth mentioning, while he's rarely onscreen, he does play an important role.
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Thanks. I will correct those when I have time today
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I like how, in all the coloured names showing which faction they belong to, Jack's name is in black XD
The dwarven faction needs to grooooooow, though I have no doubt that it will soon enough
I noticed the Miruvor mistake too, yeah, though I can't say I disagree that he should be dead.
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I have taken to begun to use black for unaligned characters, or those whose allegiance is in flux. Which I thought fitted him rather well.
Indeed. And when more dwarves pop up they will be added. I prefer to have character names, and that was a good one, I will keep it until/unless Sun overrules with another name
Heh, it will probably come some day.
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Oh yes, very fitting for him ^^
Sun actually gave me permission to come up with the name for him, so I think it won't be needing a change
Probably, yup.
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Then consider that name permanent
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It's great to see them all grow
Wait, Miruvor is dead?
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I think it took me three playthroughs to figure out that they could be killed, that was quite by accident.
Oh! That reminds me, I am missing the Bomber Beetle Queen. Need to rectify that.
Crap, why the hell did that happen?! Must be a something from sometime earlier, definitely was not there when I worked on it in streaming. That was not supposed to happen
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Should be easy enough to fix to the correct icon with some good old fashioned copy & pasting!
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And that was exactly how I fixed it
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Done, I had accidently uploaded it in a far smaller file size, it should work fine now
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it works now so if you didn't change anything it was probably a deviantart error.
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No, I did change something, I had uploaded the file in the wrong size, I just had to correct that and upload in the right size so it could be zoomed in again.
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good good ^^ I can see it now properly thx.
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I will take a look at that at once, one moment.
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Totally awesome to see the additions of Initation, so the characters will have a bigger impact in the story than I thought at the beginning. I thought you named the traveller but if you don't call him that here it might not be his true name! Are you having deep deep plans O_o I'm watching carefully.
I really thought for a moment I've forgotten to introduce another elf but I saw Lamba in a earlier chapter so that's the only addition I miss for now (he should be placed next to pernor because he is a gladiator as well.) ^^
At Shadows embrace it looks awesome I don't know if you wanted to include the two minor reds as well but that's your choice ^^
I can't thank you enough for keeping this so nicely updated through time.
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His name at the end of Initiation is his real name, the only reason I did not write it or his allegiance here in this is because it would be a spoiler for those who have finished the story yet.
Right, will fix that asap. Thanks for reminding me.
Hmm, I think I will wait until more of the red clan is introduced.
My pleasure, it helps me as well. It makes it easy to get an overview of everyone and who they are when I forget.
The only problem will come when the stories starts to get too big for the frames, or when Lamaohi starts to write and I have to split it into five 
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Makes sense ^^, I don't know if a name will tell them that much without a title but I saw the titles of the others so than it makes sense to wait.
I understand the waiting more will follow
O splitting in 5 would be cool but hard to keep enough space. I don't need a lot of space now but it might change XD and Ramul already has an incredible amount of characters.
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That was what I thought.
I thought as much.
It would be a small nightmare to reorganize everything, but the more stories the merrier, within reason, of course.
Yeah, and so does Sun as soon as minions begins to grow, and I now I will probably need a fair amount of space too. I will probably have to expand it at some point.
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Ye when the minions arive all hell will break loose in most stories. I have faith in a good expansion
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Apropos, have you planned TE to play out like SE and RoanS, in the sense that Liha will become a proper Overlord with the hives and minions? Provided you want to answer that at this point.
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Yes she will be someday if Granlork doesn't backstab me and kills Liha or some other different situation not to my liking. It will end a bit like Overlord 2 with an end battle and a surprise ^^
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Huh, I would not see that coming if it did.
That makes sense, it seems most of us like to have some kind of surprise planned for the end. Though I doubt I would ever by able to do it in the style of MM
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I think you can ^^ and if I ever reach the end of the story you probably our of all have the biggest what just happened moment ^^
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I am not so sure, but thanks for the confidence
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So, that was what the mysterious empty space in the top left.
A bit of grammar:
Freyr Tyr is titled as "prins", might be "prince" instead, unless that's the actual title the Kiret use.
Sedora Nazuth Neth is probably Nazush Neth, and a command squire.
And SE's creature section might need an update.
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Actually not, or I would have updated it in tune with posting the Initiation pieces. But I thought it might work well to have them there, as I am not quite done with them yet.
Yes those are all mistakes, thanks for the corrections.
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O_O I totally forgot to give the elf a name, didn't thought about it because he was talking the most out of three. Will need to do that next part XD
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I thought as much, I will just have to add that next time, no harm no foul
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Seven hells, now there's three stories to look at. I noticed two typos: "Mistriss" under Juno and the hamlet that has been conquered first is called Faairdal.
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Thanks, will fix those immediately.
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And because I did not pay attention to the minion names and looked through the first arc for them, I notice that the red leader Igniot isn't mentioned. And there is of course Kael as a paladin commander, with three named faces being Gerd, Parson and Jern.
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Understood, will get that sorted out asap.
I did not add Kael because he was dead by now, but I suppose it would fit better to add him, at least until we get introduced to a new paladin leader.
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Well yes, considering he is an actual paladin, while Haeren is one of the heroes and a governor.
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And now regarding the new additions: Gernot is the delegate of the craftsmen, not traders. And while it wasn't mentioned that much yet, Alderius and Morning Wood are the delegates of two elven (or mostly elven) movements, called Keepers and Reformists, respectively. Both contain several elven cultures and are more separated by age rather than origin, with the Keepers being more popular among the older elves, while the younger ones often prefer the Reformists. The Keepers aren't exclusively elven, as they also cover the druids due to strongly overlapping interests, which contain a minority of non-elven races.
And a few typos: Morning Wood without an 'r' in the surname, the minor paladin that died in the volcano was called Parson and there is an Aurenthurian Parkiament.
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Thanks, will fix those soon.
Do you have a name for the Noble delegate? Or is that irrelevant/something to be revealed later?
Hmm, I thought I had checked the spelling, oh well, it should be easy to change.
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Maybe she will be named, maybe not, but she is pretty irrelevant and might be replaced by another one sooner than later. Nobles aren't known to stay in their position for long.
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This is woah XD you really didn´t have to do this but I love it. Even if it´s small now it will be big so big. I don´t really have a special color but orange can suit the story well ^^.
What happened with the stream? our friends kept us busy a bit too long so we couldn't make it unfortunately.
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I know I don't have to, I do it as much because it is fun
Indeed, I imagine all sides of this will grow rapidly over time
If you don't care about the colour then I will either have it remain orange or change it later if I feel another colour is more called for
Nothing really happened, which was the problem. It was a bit boring without you two, and we had no real topics to talk about, and I was really not in a good mood to work so I got more and more annoyed with my work and had really little enthusiasm to continue. I ended up stopping after only two hours as I could not get myself to continue. Hopefully next time will be more interesting
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I will love it every step of the way,
Too bad it was less enjoyable yesterday
P.S did you continue your lovely jewel story? Very interested how you continue this classical form of writing.
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