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Bramblestar27 — Foxleap and Cinderheart - You Suck At Love

Published: 2013-01-05 04:44:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 3740; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 332
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Description “Foxleap, I’m sorry!” Cinderheart cried, running after the orange tabby tom. “I…I never meant to hurt you. Well, I didn’t care, but…now I know what it’s like. Lionblaze hurt ME. He left me faster than a Windclan cat can run and then tried to kill you! I don’t know why I ever loved him.”
Foxleap turned. “I don’t think you ever did,” he mewed harshly.
Cinderheart paused, one paw lifted in the air. “What do you mean?” she gasped.
“You’re just like Berrynose,” he sneered. “The only cat you love is yourself. Why else did you cheat on both me and Lionblaze?”
Cinderheart stared at him in dismay.
“And now you HONESTLY think I’m going to take you back after you took advantage of my feelings and then spread rumors about me?” Foxleap went on furiously. “And it’s obvious I’ll always be second-best to LIONBLAZE. You begged HIM to take you back first! I guess I’m just a last resort.”
“Foxleap, it’s not like that at all…” The desperation was fading out of Cinderheart’s eyes to be replaced by a look of surly defeat. She couldn’t hide her selfishness anymore, her desperation to make herself happy with a mate. ‘But I can’t spend the rest of my life alone!’ she thought.
“What about our kits?” she asked, making a last effort to win him over. “We should raise them as a team! It was wrong of me to give them up. They need a mother. A REAL mother.”
“OUR KITS?” Foxleap spun around and stalked up to the gray tabby she-cat until he was nose-to-nose with her.
“You don’t care anything ABOUT our kits!” he spat angrily into her face. “You told Icecloud you thought they were just balls of dirt and squeaky voices. Why should you care now? And my sister was ten times the mother to them that YOU ever where. Maybe that’s why Lionblaze ended up with her in the end. Maybe that’s why she’s expecting his kits.”
Cinderheart visibly winced.”But I love you!” she wailed unconvincingly. “I didn’t then, but I do now.”
Foxleap gave her a wry smile and made one last comment before turning and stalking away into the bushes.
“You’re good at hooking up, but you suck at love.”

YES, another contest prize done! Pretty quick, don’tcha think? Just one more gais, and I will be DONE! DONE DONE DONE! Then I can move on to more important things Like…actually drawing things I want to draw! Not that I mind doing the prizes…after all, it’s my obligation as the contest hoster person and I owe it to the winners. But still…I’ll be glad to get all these prizes out of the way
This one is another prize for 1st-place winner *kirakats101 , who requested Foxleap shunning Cinderheart. I kind of made it into fanart from her winning fanfiction, A Thousand Years [link] In the fanfic, Foxleap and Cinderheart have a one-night stand but Foxleap thinks she seriously wants a relationship and he gets super pissed when he finds out she’s “cheating” on him with Lionblaze. Cinderheart dumps him the night after their one-night stand, but she is already pregnant with his kits. When she gives birth, Lionblaze knows right away that they’re not his, and breaks up with Cinderheart. After abandoning the kits and letting Icecloud and Foxleap raise them, Cinderheart tries to get back with Lionblaze by making up some bull about Foxleap raping her. Doesn’t work though, since Lionblaze is crushing on Icecloud by then and knows Cinderheart is dishonest.
After the story, I imagine that Cinderheart would be pretty desperate for a mate, so as a last resort she tried to get Foxleap to take her back as a part of her if-I-can’t-have-Lionblaze-I’ll-just-take-second-best-which-is-Foxleap train of thought (mind was blow. when you realized the train of thought actually looks like a train 8O). That’s what’s going down here! But, of course, Foxleap refuses because Cinderheart is a total bitch who cares more about herself than anyone else and wants a mate to make herself happy, not her mate. So he rejects her like a baws And yep, I wrote a fanfiction about it on a whim. I couldn’t help myself! It’s been forever since I wrote warriors fanfiction Kind of an epilogue to A Thousand Years…hope Kira’s not mad at me for adding onto her awesome fanfiction
So I’ll admit, I was always kind of fascinated by the idea of FoxXCinder. My most hated female character (except for maybe Dovewing) and my most loved male character…a couple? I felt bad for Foxleap in the story too, since he seemed to have a genuine crush on Cinderheart but she just wanted to get into his pants XD Anyway, I DON’T ship the couple but the idea of them having a brief romance and then breaking up is fine with me. And they have kits in the fanfiction too…Basilkit and Vixenkit! And they are SO CUTE Not anything like their bitchy mom lol.
Well I had a lot of fun with this picture The cats’ poses were pretty easy to draw, so I got the lineart done pretty fast. I decided to use an older color scheme of mine for Foxleap instead of my newer one…more flame-colored tabby than dark-orange-and-red tabby. So like this [link] instead of this [link] I really like the way his colors came out! I always give him green eyes because he looks sexy with them This time I added white to the end of his tail and made it all bushy to get the point across that yes, this is Foxleap, not Lionblaze or Firestar or anything. As for Cinderheart’s coloring…well, I started coloring her in and then I was like WHOOPS I’m using dark gray instead of medium gray! Well, maybe I can experiment and color her fur dark gray and her stripes medium gray instead of the other way around! And experiment I did. It doesn’t look as cool as I thought it would But still looks pretty cool, I think! Maybe a different stripe design would’ve looked better. Lol I love their expressions in this, Cinderheart is all like “Whine whine pweeeeeease take me back so I can haz mate like Starclan wants!” and Foxleap is all like “GUUUU AWEH OR I SHALL SLAP YEW MANEH TIMES ACROSS DA FACE WITH MAH BIG POOFY FOX TAIL, YARRRRR!” while rolling his eyes.
As for the background…I used another one of those fancy digital ones from Zoo Tycoon! Like the one I used here: [link] It’s kinda sad…I don’t really have time to play the game anymore, so I gotta use it for somethin’! Luckily, I have four “zoos” that are just replicas of the clan lake territories that I made that I didn’t put any animals in or anything. I’ve never had cause to use them for anything until I realized I could go down into the environment, take some pictures while low to the ground, and use them for backgrounds for my pictures by downloading the photos onto HTML. All I had to do was make the cats had a see-throughj background and them slap them on there W00T! I chose the best screenshot—one with a beautiful view of the forest canopy and some lichen and flowers in the background—and scaled the cats and BOOM done! Is that cool or what??? Great thing to do when I’m too lazy to draw a background of my own XD I was going to do a digital background for the last picture too, but…I’d already done one for my other TigerxDove picture and it seemed cheap to do it twice on the same couple. Anyway, I FREAKING LOVE THESE DIGITAL BACKGROUNDS!!!!11!!
But enough of my bragging. Even I get sick of it! , congrats on winning first place and I hope you like this picture! And my crappy epilogue to your story! Sorry for taking so long on your prizes…I will get the last one done ASAP, although that might not be for a while because January is going to be hectic for me
And, of course, here is my reference for the cats: [link] Had to flip it at one point to get the cats facing the same way I give Zoo Tycoon 2 FULL CREDIT for the background. I did design the environment and arrange the trees and crap, but all of the trees, plants, grass, and rocks and stuff came pre-designed with the program. OH, and the title and last line of the mini-fanfic is a reference to this song: [link] It describes the couple perfectly, don’tcha think? And DAMN, THIS DECRIPTION HAS A LOT OF LINKS! HOLY CRAP! Yep, they were a huge pain to put in XP Drown in links, my friends!
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Comments: 55

KalahariMeerkatfan [2015-10-27 22:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Tell the truth, Cinderheart would deserve this...but a new pairing to result from this. Berrynose and Cinderheart, both are self-centered, annoying furballs and thus they would be a match-made in StarClan. Also, it seems that Berrynose has a thing for sisters. He hooked up with Honeyfern until she died, then he hooks up with Poppyfrost (she either dies or maybe dumps him), then he would end up with Cinderheart...

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Winter-glaceon-wind [2015-07-03 03:29:51 +0000 UTC]

This makes me so sad...Cinderheart is one of my favorites...I always like Cinderpelt and when she got recarinated to Cinderheart it was obvious for me to end up loving Cinderheart too. I don't see her like that honestly...But I guess everyone has opinions. It's hard for me to accept them but everyone is different. I'm not trying to hate, your story is really good! The vocab fits perfectly, and the imagery is super great! Your art is beautiful too~ I guess I'm just saying I don't like the way Cinderheart acts in this. It makes me feel better to get this out.Thanks

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Swanbreeze [2015-03-14 05:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Cinderheart as a slut is very contradictory to the books... but i always knew she was so 'perfect', she should have some sorta DARK, EVIL side.
PS. sorry Cinder but u really r too perfect to be true. 

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KalahariMeerkatfan In reply to Swanbreeze [2015-09-06 14:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Tell the truth, I think having her be either selfish or wicked would make the books far more interesting. Of course, there is the idea of if the authors would be able to do it right. Kira did quite a good job .

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Swanbreeze In reply to KalahariMeerkatfan [2015-09-21 07:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it would be way more interesting to read LionxCinder bits if Cinder was less of a ... mary-sue.

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KalahariMeerkatfan In reply to Swanbreeze [2015-09-30 03:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Now I agree with you and Bramblestar27, Cinderheart is nothing but a Mary Sue now...so perfect (and fake) that it makes you want to kill her off as fast as possible. I don't know what Cherith was thinking when she was writing those Omen of the Stars books, she took a good character who wasn't perfect and just degraded her until she sucks. 

I was reading Dark River last week (or the week before?) and I love Cinderpaw in that book. I love how she always seem to take things paws first, even if it got her into trouble. But at times she would have moments of wisdom, but she didn't act like she was suddenly a senior warrior who knew everything. Besides...Dark River really makes me think that Cinderpaw had a thing for Hollyleaf, they were almost joint at the hip (and Lionblaze sure didn't like when he saw that Cinderheart had followed Hollyleaf).

When I read that written part of this picture, I came up with a new shipping; Selfish-shipping or maybe Egoshipping...as in Berrynose x Cinderheart.

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Ask-----cinderheart [2014-10-13 20:46:32 +0000 UTC]

and nw your spreading bad rumours bout me

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Ask-----cinderheart [2014-10-18 18:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, seeing as you're a complete and total Mary-Sue author's pet, I think it's my responsibility to give you some shortcomings.

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Ask-----cinderheart In reply to Bramblestar27 [2014-10-19 08:38:42 +0000 UTC]

ALL THOSE STUFF ARENT EVEN TRUUUUUU

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Ask-----cinderheart [2014-10-24 03:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Your fault for not being a well-developed character!

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Ask-----cinderheart In reply to Bramblestar27 [2014-10-24 05:03:01 +0000 UTC]

No one said so

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Ask-----cinderheart [2014-11-03 23:28:49 +0000 UTC]

I said so. As did the many other fans who think you're an unbearable Mary-Sue. Sorry honey!

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Ask-----cinderheart In reply to Bramblestar27 [2014-11-05 20:53:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm just gonna ignore u

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Silverstream111 [2013-02-24 21:23:21 +0000 UTC]

cinderxlion better, where do people even start getting the idea of these ugly pairings, very creative you used zoo tycoon as a background





I HATE SILVERXGRAY my username i just like that name IF YOU HATE THAT COUPLE SEND ME A MESSAGE SAYING I

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Silverstream111 [2013-02-25 01:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, first of all, I don't ship FoxXCinder. Foxleap deserves WAY better than that slutty mary-sue bitch. This is just a gift art for my friend because she had FoxXCinder in her fanfiction (because she needed to break up CinderxLion by having her cheat on him, not because she actually liked FoxXCinder). Second of all, I HATE CinderxLion. IcexLion is 1,000 times better. Thanks for the thing about zoo tycoon...I think.

Uh, no I don't hate SilverxGray...why would I?

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Silverstream111 In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-03-01 05:15:55 +0000 UTC]

ughhhh, i have no freakin idea what you and me are talking about

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Silverstream111 [2013-03-02 01:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Welll you left a weird comment, so...I replied

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Silverstream111 In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-03-03 03:06:54 +0000 UTC]

oh okay

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WitchWingofLightClan [2013-01-12 06:50:02 +0000 UTC]

The only ship I have for Cinderheart is CinderxDove. So they can both join Titanic at the bottom of the fucking ocean.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to WitchWingofLightClan [2013-01-12 20:30:18 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAHHAAAAA I don't see what Titanic has to do with it, but that cracked me up Lol CinderxDove, yep, pairing up the 2 mary-sues Mor eof a CinderxAsh fan myself but I can definitely see where you're coming from

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KiraKats [2013-01-06 04:42:00 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness dat story~~~ it makes this art 500% cooler

and the background! You know I love your zoo tycoon backgrounds~ Yes, I imagine that Cinderbitch would try to hook up with foxleap again after being dumped by lionblaze (again and again ) eeeeee that story made me smile and giggle like an idiot!!!! and it fits in with the art so well~

amg dat foxleap <3

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Bramblestar27 In reply to KiraKats [2013-01-06 06:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I couldn't help but write it I haven't written warriors fanfiction in so long and it just poured out of me! Plus, your fanfic deserved an epilogue about what happened to Cinderheart after Lion and Ice got together and how she got her ass kicked AGAIN XD

I actually didn't know, but I do now I LAV DEM TOO! Yep, she would...after all, she's still trying to uphold her reputation so she's not going to steal someone who's taken, so she goes after single Foxleap. But when he gets a mate (which I'm sure he will)...THEN she's screwed. HA! Shanks, now I'm smiling and giggling like an idiot at your comment

HE SEXAY! Except for his mouth, which looks all awkward But he looks soooooo annoyed lawl

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daisyfangs [2013-01-06 01:32:15 +0000 UTC]

WOAH MAN
WOAH
THIS IS AWESOME ;u;
I read the fanfic at midnight while everyone was asleep, lol. And I love the pic >u<
LIONXICE 5EVR YO

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Bramblestar27 In reply to daisyfangs [2013-01-06 03:02:31 +0000 UTC]

WOAH MAN
WOAH
THANK YOU 8|
Haha nice going! Pretty addictive, isn't it? Glad you like the pic!
TOTALLAY OH EM GEE *fangirl moment*

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daisyfangs In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-06 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Yesss ;u;

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Bramblestar27 In reply to daisyfangs [2013-01-06 06:08:02 +0000 UTC]

Iceon is da best

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daisyfangs In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-06 15:54:57 +0000 UTC]

yes ;u;

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kamibee [2013-01-05 23:00:49 +0000 UTC]

WEll reference...

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Bramblestar27 In reply to kamibee [2013-01-06 02:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Reference, yes, I don't trace.

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kamibee In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-19 17:03:08 +0000 UTC]

I didn't say that you traced at all... I was just saying that I recognized the pic! Oh, so far I'm at chp. 11 of your story... On a note, or by email can I tell you the words you mispelled? And how to rewrite a few sentences?(5 sentences tops) that I have seen bcuz I had to keep re- reading until I got what you meant to say when the words were misspelled... So......

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Bramblestar27 In reply to kamibee [2013-01-19 19:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay, good. Whoops, I misspelled some words? Strange...I used spellcheck and I proofread. But sure, tell me over notes. I thought everything was pretty straightforward, but if some part was confusing I'll be happy to clear it up.

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kamibee In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-02-05 03:22:01 +0000 UTC]

just some weird parts in there misspelled names, i cant name them all

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Bramblestar27 In reply to kamibee [2013-02-06 00:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Misspelled names? Not sure what you mean :/

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kamibee In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-02-06 01:47:33 +0000 UTC]

like u misspelled dustpelt in first few chapters, not all of the time though, things like that

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Bramblestar27 In reply to kamibee [2013-02-09 00:57:27 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, looks like spellcheck betrayed me! D:

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kamibee [2013-01-05 23:00:35 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love Wyethcat! This is their pick of Bluefur and Oakheart!

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Ask--Icecloud [2013-01-05 20:29:40 +0000 UTC]

I faved it because of the story

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Ask--Icecloud [2013-01-05 20:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool! You might wanna read the whole fanfiction that :devKirakts: wrote, I think you'd really like it :3

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PsychoStar1993 [2013-01-05 20:05:19 +0000 UTC]

This makes me think of the song you give love a bad name XD
And snap, Cinderheart just got told >:3

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Bramblestar27 In reply to PsychoStar1993 [2013-01-05 20:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Never heard that one, but it sounds like it would fit FoxXCinder X3
Lol she did! She shall be

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PsychoStar1993 In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-05 21:31:33 +0000 UTC]

It's a good song, an old song but a good one X3
Hehe, well unless she stops being a slut and gose for Ashfur :3

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Bramblestar27 In reply to PsychoStar1993 [2013-01-06 02:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Yay for CinderxAsh! Would still be slightly slutty of her since he's so much older, but I would be totally fine with that

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PsychoStar1993 In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-07 14:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Same here

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I-See-You-X [2013-01-05 05:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Amazing job, like always~

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Bramblestar27 In reply to I-See-You-X [2013-01-05 05:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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I-See-You-X In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-06 01:31:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome c:

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Raining-Rose [2013-01-05 05:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Is that a Simple Plan reference in your title?!

Anyways, this looks great. I've never thought of these two as a couple before. Hmm. XD Anyways, nice job on this.

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Raining-Rose [2013-01-05 05:18:57 +0000 UTC]

You bet your sweet hiney it is!

Neither did I, until my buddy Kirakats had them have a one-night stand in her fanfiction The ironic part is that we both hate Cinderheart and love Foxleap X3 Thank you!

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Raining-Rose In reply to Bramblestar27 [2013-01-05 05:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha. That's hilarious!

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Bramblestar27 In reply to Raining-Rose [2013-01-05 20:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol yah, we're both like DIE CINDERHEART DIE, Omg Foxleap you sexy beast!

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