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dczhang In reply to TirraMisu [2012-07-10 22:52:05 +0000 UTC]

<3 Thank you!

You are so good to me

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dczhang In reply to frozentofu [2012-07-10 06:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I thought so too, but I'm not sure if it's something I did wrong or if it's just the angle...
I know I made the neck longer from the original reference I used. Hmm...

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frozentofu In reply to dczhang [2012-07-10 06:22:06 +0000 UTC]

maybe i'm just used to drawing freakish long necks but the neck looks fine to me. =___=;; The foreshortening of the left arm also looks a bit awkward. maybe if you make her hand larger and do a more dynamic shading it will give a better effect?

btw, i like her armpit. <3

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dczhang In reply to frozentofu [2012-07-10 22:51:43 +0000 UTC]

I think it might be the angle of the circle thingy that goes over her arm! Let me tweak this a bit.

Thanks for always giving me pointers and telling me what you notice I really do appreciate it.

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frozentofu In reply to dczhang [2012-07-11 01:06:16 +0000 UTC]

no problem! If i'm ever being too mean..then just tell me. i don't know when to stop sometimes. >.<

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dczhang In reply to frozentofu [2012-07-11 07:55:02 +0000 UTC]

I'll take as much specific criticism as you've got for any illustration.
It's the general statements that rile me up, since I don't know how to fix them.

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frozentofu In reply to dczhang [2012-07-11 23:15:32 +0000 UTC]

your forewarned man. I'm a tough one when it come to critcism. i've been holding back so far!! xD

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