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frozentofu [2012-07-11 23:21:15 +0000 UTC]
i never saw this one at ax! i like her skin tone a lot. that's always the hardest part for me! >.< her lips seem off center and her body a bit small compared to her head. you may want to shade the left side of her face darker to give more shape to her face and to show where the lighting is coming from too.
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dczhang In reply to frozentofu [2012-07-12 00:19:03 +0000 UTC]
The consideration of lighting definitely wasn't there in this piece. It could've had a lot more contrast and been more interesting, and I think it needed to be, especially because it's such a design oriented piece. I seem to have problems with lips a lot! Time for some specific practice.
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frozentofu In reply to dczhang [2012-07-12 00:33:10 +0000 UTC]
you can always retouch it in the future and sell it next year. your style of lips tend to be very thin and petite. but that may just be my own perception since i draw fatty big lips. =___=; try doing some quick real life sketches focus specifically on the face. and never be afraid to be a stalker and people watch!!
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