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Demosthenes-H — Owl Bones
Published: 2013-04-12 03:36:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 724; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 13
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Description bloodlust:
warmth, heat,
and me-

vulnerable and open:
young marrow wings
between your teeth

xylophonic
unlocked in
the pitch scale of

a lunar howl-
slithering, crackled
dripping tongues and fever eyes

treading & greedy to
rip away
those secret selfish worlds inside

the organs
of skies
down the back of your throat
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Comments: 15

menotmyselfori [2013-04-27 20:40:31 +0000 UTC]

"xylophonic/unlocked in/the pitch scale of"
Amazing job writing this!

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breathingglassstars [2013-04-17 20:59:10 +0000 UTC]

this is absolutely wonderful. ♥

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nosedivve [2013-04-13 02:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that last stanza is definitely the highlight of this poem. Just wow. This is perfect.
Congrats on the Friday Night Feature!

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dreamsinstatic [2013-04-13 01:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features .

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xXcinnamon-sunXx [2013-04-12 20:47:03 +0000 UTC]

Last stanza just really hit home for me. Gorgeous.

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Cygam-7 [2013-04-12 11:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Love this one

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Indigo-Serenade [2013-04-12 03:41:09 +0000 UTC]

This made me hungry for some reason.

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Demosthenes-H In reply to Indigo-Serenade [2013-04-12 04:02:27 +0000 UTC]

... hungry for some owl bones? mmm. delicious.

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Indigo-Serenade In reply to Demosthenes-H [2013-04-12 04:07:29 +0000 UTC]

No, I think it was the marrow and organs idea.

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Demosthenes-H In reply to Indigo-Serenade [2013-04-12 04:09:34 +0000 UTC]

marrow and organs? HOW DOES THAT ...

you sound like a carnivorous beast

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Indigo-Serenade In reply to Demosthenes-H [2013-04-12 04:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Because it's crunchy like peanut brittle and... okay, I can't explain the organs part, but you get the idea.

Thank you.

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Demosthenes-H In reply to Indigo-Serenade [2013-04-12 04:30:05 +0000 UTC]

peanut brittle? Is this some obscure canadian alternative to peanut butter?

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Indigo-Serenade In reply to Demosthenes-H [2013-04-12 04:31:38 +0000 UTC]

No, we have peanut butter.

You don't have peanut brittle? O-o

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Demosthenes-H In reply to Indigo-Serenade [2013-04-12 04:33:46 +0000 UTC]

what even is peanut brittle? O.o

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Indigo-Serenade In reply to Demosthenes-H [2013-04-12 04:38:44 +0000 UTC]

... Holy crap. You don't have peanut brittle.

It's... sort of like... damn, how do I explain this?
It's like solid thin squares of peanut-flavoured stuff that's sort of like hardened caramels. And it's studded with more peanuts. It's crunchy and sticky and very sweet. (Heheh.)

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