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DemosthenesVoice — Our Eyes Burned Red...

Published: 2008-03-06 00:46:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2886; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 105
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Description Fishing. I was fishing with my two sons. We saw the first attack on Bravo Station. It was a quick flash of light, and it was gone. That's the way it went. A quick flash of light and everything was gone.

My Wife was getting her hair done. My oldest son was having a baby next week. My youngest son's graduation was tomorrow. I was planning on finishing the new greenhouse in our backyard.

Gone. Everything. In a flash of light.


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The second in the series. Im really happy with the way these are coming out, but I would love some critique.

About the same stats as the first.
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Comments: 16

warkiller [2009-04-25 18:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Great Work!
The rain could work because from the angle in the cave u dont see straght up, so with fast moving rainclouds or rainclouds moving towards the horizon it could actually rain...

The guys are just cool because the have realized there is really nothing they can do so they decided to go and watch the "fireworks"..

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to warkiller [2009-05-01 01:18:08 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you so much for all of your comments! i really appreciate all of them!

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warkiller In reply to DemosthenesVoice [2009-05-01 09:58:26 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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ErikShoemaker [2008-03-16 13:23:30 +0000 UTC]

there are no clouds at the sky where the rain could fall down from actually. The transitions from rock to sky and grass could have been more precize imo. The shapes of those two guys are too dark compared to the light within the near cave and the lightsource in the background.

I really like the atmosphere, the planet and the asteroid though, kepp it up!

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to ErikShoemaker [2008-03-17 16:41:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the pointers! i will definitely remember them next time around!

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1bardesign [2008-03-07 21:28:44 +0000 UTC]

very nice, although they are a bit too calm XD
really really good work, although i like the feel of the other one better, this has a better sky and moon imho.
this is looking like its going to be a great series ^^

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hydralisk3 [2008-03-07 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

woa is beutifulll

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to hydralisk3 [2008-03-07 23:48:23 +0000 UTC]

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Dominxx [2008-03-06 15:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, better than last one Gratz =]

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to Dominxx [2008-03-07 00:26:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Lotay [2008-03-06 02:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful, I can this shaping up to be an amazing series.

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to Lotay [2008-03-06 03:17:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i sure hope so!

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Lotay In reply to DemosthenesVoice [2008-03-06 03:25:26 +0000 UTC]

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Aphotik [2008-03-06 00:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice, I like this one better than the other. The guys standing there look a little too calm though lol. The only thing I would say is to maybe try the sharpen filter. Sometimes sharpening the whole picture brings it out a little more.

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DemosthenesVoice In reply to Aphotik [2008-03-06 01:09:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the tip! you were right, i just uploaded a new version with the filter. thanks again

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Aphotik In reply to DemosthenesVoice [2008-03-06 05:10:20 +0000 UTC]

No prob, glad I could help!

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