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Published: 2005-12-29 10:33:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Random acts
slights of hand and windfalls,
taking things for granted.

Curled palm up in suplication,
nose in air,
snubbed.

Grovelling,
begging to be noticed,
slinking to background
and forgotten once more.

Searching for colour
in black and white photos.
Albums put away on dusty shelves,
lie discarded in forgotten memories.
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Comments: 6

thebellman [2007-01-10 21:14:02 +0000 UTC]

This is very good.

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MidnightShadow83 [2006-01-28 08:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Lot of feeling for such a short piece. Nice, honest and direct. I've missed your words. I like it.

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Redgold [2006-01-01 21:45:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem... sorry I took so long to comment and yes it is definitely colour rather than color !

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Alzemu [2005-12-31 04:17:07 +0000 UTC]

'Searching for colour'

er..isn't it color?

basically your poem is very smooth, and it flows rather nicely. great job!

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deniall In reply to Alzemu [2005-12-31 08:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Not in australia MATE!

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Alzemu In reply to deniall [2005-12-31 19:39:01 +0000 UTC]

oh...

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