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I just- I fixed it- this whole scene, I fixed it you’re welcome:
-actual context for character motivations and tie into bigger storyworld/series
-actual emotions
-actual fighting/strategy instead of yeeting your sibling (a criminal misuse of a perfectly good stabby boi at your disposal)
-pacing! talk during waiting times, little or no talking during action times, if you try n do everything at once, it’s too much for now, and probably not enough for some other bit down the line, because you didn’t spread your beats out properly
-focus on and initiative by the main characters rather than random NPCs of ultimately no consequence like the gladiators
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....I do love the yeeting the sibbling though XD After all, this is pre-movies Thor "strategy"! XD
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Well, I'm not sure that Thor knows who Thanos is nor why Loki would need to run away from him so I thought this part was a little trange, but otherwise the last three panels seemed better than the film.
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