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dnmn89 — Peach
Published: 2009-04-21 21:32:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 931; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 34
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Not much to say about this one. Not sure if i like it yet.Lines are
Colors are mine
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Comments: 9
thank you very much. I'm glad you like it
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I would have to agree with that statement sir.
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glad you like it, but i'll be updating it with a revision soon
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i think i know why.
it feels a bit flat compared to the other ones you've done. her clothes and the background are too close to each other as far as shade goes. since pink is close to red, it all becomes a bit of a blur. the green on the egg sticks out too much because you don't really use green anywhere else.
i'd throw some greens and blues in the background as opposed to the flat pink to give the piece more balance. i'd also eliminate the marquee window because there's enough action going on with the mushrooms.
her hair looks a bit too sloppy and almost feels like you were a bit lazy with it. give her tiara, necklace and belt buckle more of a "bling" feel since they seem to just bleed in with everything else.
in other words, show us round 2.
now, go be awesome.
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Thank you sir. I'll fix that in a few moments
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