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Gequibren [2019-02-25 19:49:30 +0000 UTC]

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You have a fairly smooth and pleasant stroke. I like the shape you have given to the lines and edges because they have the right thickness and size.

I think the character's facial expression shows anger and at the same time a great physical effort to climb. Both the shape of the mouth and the eyes help a lot in this aspect. The pose of the arms and hands also has a great influence transmitting that feeling.

In terms of proportions and anatomy, in my opinion I think that everything is quite correct. The only thing that does not fit me just are the ears because the left seems to fall back, but the right one is stretched to the side. On the other hand, the right hand doesn't give the feeling that its mass is lying on the ground or earth. Maybe some shadow underneath would help to create that effect.

What I like most about everything is the effort and the details you have made. All those raindrops and water wetting the character are great! The shape of the wounds also give very good results to understand that the character is suffering or has lost a battle. Another important aspect are the tips of the hairs, which really look wet with that darker and chaotic aspect. I would still have added some additional detail to the top of the head, for example larger drops of water. Maybe also throughout the body. Examples here and here

What I don't like too much is the land. I think the darkness that you have added is good, as if it were shadow or blood, but the rest of that blank is completely empty. I would put some grooves of earth, small stones, grass, flowers, insects, etc. it would show a lot of visual richness and helps to integrate the character inside a entire world.

I think that in general the drawing is quite original and very well made because of everything mentioned above, so congratulations!
I hope this comment will help. Good luck and keep going!  

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NewHorizontStudio [2019-02-22 10:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Im not a expert still amazinf art work i really love how this guy look of course ib color. It eillbe better but without it still is amazinf

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theJfluffy [2019-02-20 03:55:45 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool

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AnimeStyleDrawer [2019-02-16 04:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Hello there, since you submitted this wonderful piece to ProjectComment, I am here to comment on it!

Right off the bat, I see no problems with this, it’s absolutely gorgeous. Upon closer inspection, I see some slight anatomy problems. Firstly, the right arm of the character. The arm above the elbow looks just a bit too long, also the right palm seems to be squished onto the ground in a peculiar way, however is not very obvious, since the arm is covering most of the palm. Proportion of the fingers look fine. Left arm and palm looks fine, I see no problems there. An obvious proportion error I see are the ears. The left one will ideally be smaller than the right, since the chatacter’s face is facing slightly towards our right. The head of hair, especially on the top, looks too big in terms of width. I also suggest putting colour into the piece, it will look more interesting and more visually appealing. Other than slight anatomy or perspective errors, I would say this is very well done! Face looks appropriate, beautiful effects. Great effort!

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Arc-Tangent [2019-02-10 13:23:19 +0000 UTC]

I love the emotion you captured here!

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TenSenses [2019-02-05 09:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh Link DEFINITELY runs naked right up to Hyrule Castle. 

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