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Description Stef got mildly unconscious, but he's not hurt or that shaken really. Just a shock from the Elite bomb I suppose, meaning his personality is now no longer Stef..
It's Denzel

The personality of Denzel is that he's the more intelligent one, but a bit paranoid. His eyes change colour to purple. (For those of you who don't know, Stef has a multi-personality, which change whenever he gets unconscious).

Since it's not obvious, Lox is trying to stall for time on how to beat this guy. Lox is a really crappy fighter, and Stef? Well, he isn't captain of the military for nothing! He's relying that Stef would hold out on just shooting him in the head with little time-wasting, subject-changing matters.

Lox is annoying and I love that.

I like the angles from this, it's different and unusual!

My eyes.. gah.


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Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Stef by ~AteMozzarella
Lox by *enigmatia


I'm really bad at catching up on messages =/
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Comments: 62

I-luv-to-draw [2012-01-08 20:02:32 +0000 UTC]

*background

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I-luv-to-draw [2012-01-08 20:02:14 +0000 UTC]

I love the ackground advertizements...

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Kitkatluvspie1329 [2011-11-05 19:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Who's Leah?

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enigmatia In reply to Kitkatluvspie1329 [2011-11-12 07:39:13 +0000 UTC]

My sister

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NinjaPeoplez [2010-05-25 19:42:21 +0000 UTC]

I LOL'd at the ads and stuff.
Note the Irken being carried off in the backround.

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enigmatia In reply to NinjaPeoplez [2010-05-26 07:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Glad ta hear ya did!
Haha Yes. The character carried off pretty much foreshadows the ending of this round's comic.

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Stef-Cannon-3886 [2010-05-15 07:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice Irken cards! This is getting interesting

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enigmatia In reply to Stef-Cannon-3886 [2010-05-16 02:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Took some time to think of what to use! Thanks!

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W-i-n-g-e-d [2010-04-07 18:31:56 +0000 UTC]

This page make HAPPY. LOVE the angles!!

I'd be that random guy floating in the backround in panel 3.

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enigmatia In reply to W-i-n-g-e-d [2010-04-08 02:01:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Though for angles, this isn't my favourite page for it XD I think I have something somewhat better.
Aww, you even know WHY that guy was being carried away? XD

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Z-Z-Boomslang [2010-02-28 00:16:31 +0000 UTC]

I really love the angle in the last panel. Lox's boots look super cool.

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enigmatia In reply to Z-Z-Boomslang [2010-02-28 04:21:58 +0000 UTC]

OH yes All thanks Irken Elite Beta technology! Plus, I like to draw leg things like that P:

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Nikrain [2010-02-21 19:43:25 +0000 UTC]

YAY OTHER PERSONALITIES!
Does Lox know it's Denzel yet or does he not know about the alternate personalities??
And I like how Lox's foot is coming out of the square for the third panel. Simply awesome ^_^
And the good ol' "Pick a card, any card!" trick! XD He's just trying to annoy the hell out of him, isn't he?

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enigmatia In reply to Nikrain [2010-02-22 10:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Aah, next page Lox was just too keen to show him his trick to notice right away.

I liked it too, I thought with that, he felt much more closer, like we're seeing from Stef's view xD

Ye-ap! And wasting time. Lox hasn't worked anything out.. yet

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AteMozzarella [2010-02-21 02:22:14 +0000 UTC]

don't forget; Denzel is utterly useless in battle ;3

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enigmatia In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-02-21 07:28:46 +0000 UTC]

No he isn't P:
He's smart. I think a Smarty Vs. Smarty would be fun

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AteMozzarella In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 08:34:32 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhh but did I not tell you? xD He's a cowaard.

Then again, he could still work ;3

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enigmatia In reply to AteMozzarella [2010-02-21 10:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Coward? Eh xD Lox is nothing to fear. He's shorter than him for one, and if Denzel is as smart as he seems, he realises that Lox is wasting time

Seriously, Lox can't fight at all xD I'm not picking Denzel for that weakness. You'll see what I mean!

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AteMozzarella In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 11:00:19 +0000 UTC]

hahah xD But Denzel knows what elite weaponry can pack.

Still, cool though I'm excited to see what comes next xD

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InvdrDana [2010-02-21 01:20:50 +0000 UTC]

The first panel seems very flat, and yet I'm drawn to it for some reason. Part of me likes it because of the "zoomed out" feel. Plus you have to wonder what could be on Lox's mind right then by his silly expression and gait. I could imagine him humming before getting to Stef/Denzel. XD

I love the posture in the second panel! I like the placement of antennas too.

The angle in the third panel is simply epic. And you did a nice job on the foreshortening. His expression makes me smile. This was the first dev I looked at when I was feeling really bummed out, and the sillyness of this page made me feel somewhat better.

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enigmatia In reply to InvdrDana [2010-02-21 11:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yes. Someone else said the same, and I can't disagree with it. Haha, the humming, I'm so glad the message got through, because it's exactly how I imagine the scene in an "animated" form

Aww, I'm sorry to hear you were feeling that way today It does me something special to hear that you felt somewhat better from it though. Unlike an expected gift, with me expecting anyone to be effected by it, the sort of silly (perhaps a bit "intelligently dopey" if one thinks of Lox that way xD) atmosphere took someone like that.
Wow, some days I think your messages get me wondering what I did so much to get such a good comment

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InvdrDana In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-22 02:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I'm always imagining things like that when I'm drawing anything really. Then I wish I had the patience to actually animate a scene or something.

Thanks. Today's not as bad though. ^^
Haha, that sure would describe him. To me, he's the kind of annoying character that you want to yell at and hug at the same time. Except I don't think Stef would ever want to take part in the hugging. XD Can you tell I'm beginning to like Lox more and more?

Well, I think it's only fair since you've given me great comments in return. You started it!

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SaintHeartwing [2010-02-21 01:18:24 +0000 UTC]

...a card.

Ehhh-heh-heh-heh. It's actually probably a good thing that he got somebody with MPD...they're usually unstable and not able to "cooperate" to get something done. Also, the look on Lox's face...

PRICELESS. Hope Stef doesn't pick the Ace of Spades, though...that means "Death".

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enigmatia In reply to SaintHeartwing [2010-02-25 07:44:36 +0000 UTC]

Uncooperative, yes. But more because, well, in Blood Sports, if someoen in the middle of battle, who you KNOW is a trickster, would you pick a card? Stef's Denzel side is smart. He's either going to ignore or just get rid of him on the spot. The latter seems more appropriate in this situation, but I'm afraid that isn't what my intention of the writer for this comic is! Funny, I know more ways to kill my own character, than to kill my opponent!

Lox would try and INTEND death on someone but you know, his type, he's not interested in killing. He just happens to have been shoved in BS for his life. I suppose though, since there is something in it for him (LIVING) he's going to have to be as stealthy as his sick, little stature can make him. Let's hope he picks the Death card, oh yes.

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SaintHeartwing In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-25 12:41:17 +0000 UTC]

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grim-adventures [2010-02-21 01:00:22 +0000 UTC]

YAY! There's my ad!
I like the angles on this too! All different to the usual ones! And the backgrounds are always so funny! Like the irken being taken away by a scanning robot! And the 5000 monies ad too! (Did you keep the shading I did on the robots?)

I don't understand the shading on Lox's right arm though. The light's coming from in front of him so shouldn't there be shading on the part near his elbow? And what Stef says in the second panel is slightly hard to read.
(I'm trying not to press enter a lot if you haven't noticed!)

Yeah! I see you looking at deviations when you're supposed to be replying!

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enigmatia In reply to grim-adventures [2010-02-21 07:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeap!
The shading on the robots? Yes. I couldn't be darned to fix it. It looks a bit narrow to be honest but I'm too short for time to do it how I want it P:

Which elbow?
It's hard to read, because it's small and whispered..in an angry way, that's why it's all in italics.

I'm not stopping you from using enter, I just supposed you were doing it to make your messages look big!
There are just so many!

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grim-adventures In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-22 07:05:33 +0000 UTC]


Yep.

HIS right elbow.
Oh! Smart!

I pressed enter if I wanted to say something different.
Reply to them then!

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enigmatia In reply to grim-adventures [2010-02-22 10:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Next time, always talk from OUR point of view, not Lox's, it's easier!

Me too, I use enter for that as well.

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grim-adventures In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-22 11:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Fine.

Oh!

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Zerna [2010-02-21 00:34:41 +0000 UTC]

great angles and coloring! D Love Lox's pose in the last one.

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enigmatia In reply to Zerna [2010-02-21 07:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you The last panel was definitely my favourite, though I'm afraid there are some things wrong from it from a critique I was given, and I owe it to her for pointing it out! XDD

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Zerna In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 17:01:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I would have found some mistakes as well if I stared long enough.... but for the five seconds I looked, it was good! xD

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enigmatia In reply to Zerna [2010-02-22 10:54:13 +0000 UTC]

That's fine, I can understand that P: Thanks anyways!

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LollipopInMyHair [2010-02-20 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering why his eyes were purple this page, then I read the ARTIST COMMENTS! I like the panel when Stef/Denzel is laying on the ground, I really have no clue. A bunch of unusual panels this time around, it makes thi pae really stand out, I think it's my favourite so far .

I notice the "WE LOVE BLUD-SPORT" girls in the audience, on the third panel, you have a lot of cameos in this comic don't you.

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enigmatia In reply to LollipopInMyHair [2010-02-20 23:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most usual I think, it's because there isn't so many panels crammed in. It's basically like the previous page, but flipped upside down
The Artist Comments are a must! But I tend to go on-and-on, but I try to keep all my important info on top. Thank you!

Well this is actually only their second appearance XD I think if they ever appear again, they'll have time to make banners, and stalk Lox for his next location.

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NotNights [2010-02-20 21:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Like the poses
XD Random irken flying in the air Like how most the audience is XP
Great detail, that you put irkens and not some dots or somthing

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enigmatia In reply to NotNights [2010-02-20 22:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I'm most proud of the last panel's pose, I've never done something so close up like that before.
Aah yes 8D He was caught littering. The Maintenance Bot's didn't want THAT happening anymore, so why not remove the problem?
Thanks (: I would never have been satisified with dots, so Irkens was a must. Besides, it's a bit too close to put them as dots anyway, so there has to be some detail in there ^^ Besides, in IZ, they always draw all the Irkens in the crowds, so I may as well follow that traditional!

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NotNights In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 01:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.
Yes it is very popout like it is epic
Ah, tey do don't they, I never notice they drew all the irkens in there That must have been hard.

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enigmatia In reply to NotNights [2010-02-21 10:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, and to ANIMATE them too! But yes, in the Nightmare Begins, in the one where Zim is dressed like a teddy bear, all sorts of episodes where there are lots Irkens, there will be lots of animated ones xD
..I hope they get paid well!

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Unknown-D-Flamerose [2010-02-20 19:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Love the random girl flying through the air!!!! lol XD

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enigmatia In reply to Unknown-D-Flamerose [2010-02-20 22:40:39 +0000 UTC]

BE FREE!
Let's just imagine it screaming XDD
I say though, the Irken there has a special part to how the story ends

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Unknown-D-Flamerose In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-20 22:54:13 +0000 UTC]

ooh~ intr interesting esting~ ^^

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grendylgirl [2010-02-20 18:37:58 +0000 UTC]

You're really great with angles and details.
It looks like there's an angry Zim in the audience XD

I'd love to watch you color. See how you do it. <3

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enigmatia In reply to grendylgirl [2010-02-20 22:44:02 +0000 UTC]

YES! You mean the one near the far left? That was the second most Zimly Irken I drew in there. The MOST Zimly one got covered up by the Irken in front of him.

Hehe, that would be cool! I've only had two people watch me colour, and both got bored before halfway xD I could probably do something like Livestream or a recording but I always thought it would make me seem conceited.

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grendylgirl In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 00:02:58 +0000 UTC]

I love watching people color >] You should record it. I'd love to watch <3

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yourdarlingdawn [2010-02-20 18:12:48 +0000 UTC]

lol pick a card XD

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enigmatia In reply to yourdarlingdawn [2010-02-20 22:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes Pick one. It's not like it matters that you just got knocked out for a second by badly thrown bomb! XD

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yourdarlingdawn In reply to enigmatia [2010-02-21 20:01:00 +0000 UTC]

lol XD I'd be like 'all of them |D'

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Moonrisepower [2010-02-20 17:29:02 +0000 UTC]

I am loving lox so much, and the multi-personality idea is great!
And I wonder if I mentioned before that I really like the advertisements..?

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