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BE HONEST WITH ME, DID YOU EXPECT THIS?
Recognise these two? They're now employed by Zort as little Sniffers. To blood-hound Lox, ya know? 'Coz they're crazy!
They're supposed to be storming through that little doorway opposite of the stage (where Lox entered the room), but in a more EXPLOSIVE way! Still looks.. flat :/ Help me?
- EXPLANATION:
Zort is on a hoverboard thing. This is how it looks and what it looks like in schematic [link]
It doesn't move. It just hovers. He's got those two girls on a leash now, get it? It makes a low voooooooooom noise.
EVERYONE WANTS LOX'S PELT ON THEIR MANTLE!
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Invader Zim © Jhonen Vasquez
Zig by *Cecilie013
Lox, those two crazies and Zort by ~enigmatia
Ugh, finally finished this. Probably the page that took the longest to do. And is STILL looks stupid!
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This isn't explosive enough? Are you kidding me!? XD They might as well have just blown up the doorway the way they're charging in there
I think the best part is that the two crazies (as they shall be referred to now XD) are literally jumping out of their panel here. It really seems to add an element of chaos if nothing fits quite right XD
I love the expressions on everybody! The crazies look, well, insane, Zort is still trying to look cool (but his hoverboard just makes him look like a lazy bum), and Lox and Zig are obviously freaking out XD I love it!
I really like the angle you have going on Zort there..but something about it seems just a tad off..0_o Even though he's "above us" on a hoverboard, he still seems a bit too angled there.. as thought hes leaning back a bit too much.. Maybe he's just trying to reel the crazies in though? So he has to lean back..IDK XD That and something about the shape of his..dare I say it..crotch section ( UGH) looks weird.
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Idunno! XD it's an artist thing- when you make it yourself, see every part of it in the process of creation, it just doesn't feel so good to you anymore.
Hey, those two don't come with any other name, why not
I like to take that part with Zort as not just a fail-attempt to be cool, but to take a laugh at cliche action scenes in movies where the dude with the sunglasses crashes through the Store window with 80's sunglasses
Gosh then I must totally f'ing fail in that department 
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That's very true! I feel that way all the time about things I draw/write/whatever XD You're your own worst critic after all!
lol I know what you mean..it's just awkward to draw. And the IZ ones look awkward on their own..they're too square-esque
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wicked. they look hungry, maybe some raw flesh will do the trick?
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fffffff...there on leashes..kinky XD
no but this is interesting here XD
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IT DOESN'T MEAN IT THAT WAY!
Oh yes D: Explosive too.
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haha, I love their expressions in this page. XD
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Haha, love the drool coming out! No peace for Lox!
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Some people just salivate naturally like that when they see some things 
And none, whatsover 
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WOW. SUCH AN EXPLOSIVE PAGE.
Those blue and red effects really pop it out XD I should get me some 3D goggles. Or, ya know, just steal those nifty shades of Zort's and convert 'em. By the way, the way you've worked the viewers perception of the angle we're seeing Zort is cool beans ;D
Boy, Lox's exclaimation just puts the icing on the cake XD
I think the thing that's just offsetting the overall outward action are the poses on those two crazies. The one on the right's front leg kinda kills the perspective and motion with that pointed toe. Not many people land their toe first, and though it also looks like she's more in the process of putting weight on that leg, it's too foward from the body to really indicate the change in weight distribution. Try walking around a bit, or running- you'll notice that most of the time that your front foot is flat, your body is almost completely above it. Her hands could also pop out of the page a bit more.
But, okay, I lied about the one on the left, that pose is pretty good XD Had you going there, right?
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You can actually make pictures 3D.. and that wouldn't be a bad idea for a picture idea
And you can make them1 XD I never tried. Though I still have a pair of them, which I kept from a movie theatre (They were supposed to be returned but almost nobody returned them anyway.. heck XD) I'm glad the angle works, it looks to me it really helps convey the looming height and powerfulness of him.
XD Life sucks when your only workable problem solver is your own two feet and an open exit.
Aw, I could probably get away with it and pretend she's prancing in ecstasy? Naw, this wasn't my intention - they were both supposed to be stampeding in, and I totally get what you mean. I learned a lot about running poses from *DefectiveFal who does some really great work at them. She makes big mention of the distance of the legs for a good running pose, and nothing of the feet from what I remember. That could just be automatic for her.
Anyway, I gave it a go (I actually did this ages ago when I first read your message 
....And I did. Good thing I left this for so long to contemplate the methodology of your trick. That was sooooo very evil of you
It's always better have a visual aid then just be told what to fix. Thanks for that (:
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I shall make NO comment on how twisted it is for him to have two insane-looking women searching for Lox, though I'd-
Oh, who am I kidding. This is twisted. It's like he's a pimp and they're his ho's. YECH. Though you'd think he'd be a bit surprised to see the 8-foot-tall demonic woman standing by her own dead body. 
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I doubt they'd be in the prostitution business, if they had any in Irk
Yey!
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Poor Lox xD He's going to get eaten alive by those fangirls
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Not eaten! Taken care of
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I can't tell if thats worse or not
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OH
MY
GAWD
I AM SPEECHLESS, IT'S SO EPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIC
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And explodey! And RED! D8
Thank so much! <3
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Haha, you could say they're Lox fangirls!
Other than that the colour seems striking and Zort's sunglasses are very awesome. Makes him cooler than he already is I have to say!
Oh Lox, the reason is because of your faux-gentleman charm, it's hard to find a nice guy these days
It also seems that Zig has been interrupted from her very important 'Why Lox will burn in Hell for Eternity' speech
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Have you seen my opponent's comic so far? I could say I'm a fangirl of the adorableness in that one!
..Oh, ha, I never made my comic covers look so exciting 
Thank you! The motion lines would have been good though, ugh 
Those glasses.. so cliche, so stupid - they were a MUST-HAVE for Zort
Yeah, the Armada lacks of gentlemen completely last time I heard, this false attitude seems the best it can get for now!
My personal goal, you just described simple. Always improve from my last major piece. Never stop! Never so abruptly like Zig there either
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Actually I have not.
It proves difficult to make a comic cover exciting enough to grab people's attentions, so scrap that and just get straight to the comic!
Of course!
Oh yes Zim being an incredibly large example
So true, so true
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Hubba whaaaa? What sick twist of events. Lox is in so much trouble, Zort's probably gonna eat him. 0_o
I certainly don't think it's flat, I love glowy, reddy stuff. It fills the page with ... SPECTACULORICIOUSNESSFULLNESS!
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This is where I finally get to use the expression "Stuck between a rock and a hard place"! All poor Lox wants is to be left alone to silently grieve.. or shake off that death he caused.
Zort.. mmhmm.. I think he's got his job more in mind - making sure Lox dies fairly in BS and get back to his old, more relaxing job, of commanding.. and stuff
Ooh, just how they're running, it doesn't look like they're moving so much; more like the background is moving
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Hmmm, but Zort may get hungry, we'd better salt and pepper Lox just in case. Why a schedule, I don't have one and well... Yes, it's better to have a schedule.
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Wow, This is too funny!
I feel a little bad for Lox, I'm a fan of him but not crazy for him like these two (Or am I?)
I wasn't expecting this..I thought Lox kicked a chair at Zig and was gonna make a break for it. But this is more awesome!! Keep it up! XD
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Thank you! 
Ooohh, you thought it was Lox's foot? 
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The clue for the next page is a picture of the massive particle accelerator thing?
Or, wait, am I incredibly wrong on that?
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Yesssssss 
If you can tell what's going in that link that would be cool. Otherwise I'd feel like the only person who laughs about stuff like that :[
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Yes, and very useful.
Oh, um, the fact that it's huge and looks really complicated and there's one little guy working on it?
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And I scared some students in my Grade 9 Japanese class!
But I guess I really didn't explain myself well with it.. the Next Page actually at the moment links to [link] - not my actual comic page no. I mean't to say, what would you think is going on in that picture. I put the clue for those who didn't know what room that was related to.
I was really hoping that there was someone out there who watched the Live news coverage of what was going on in the Particle Accelerator that day. Because they had live camera footage of the control room. I was stalking the forums for the accelerator and someone took a screenshot of the Control room about 1 minute before they launched the experiment, and edit it in PS...
I dunno if you heard about it, but they said that the particle accelerator had a 1 in a million chance or something that it would form a black hole and do this [link] Information which I scared Grade 9 kids with
That meltdown picture.. yeah
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Oh! Okay. Somehow I didn't see that other picture.
Oh, yeah. I heard of that black hole chance. Well, at least they knew what they were doing.
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Naw that's fine. It's just that now I've been linking every Next page to a stupidly-named website (and now) a picture of some sort, so I hoped people would catch on.
Yuh. I was so totally anticipating something totally awesome to happen... and it was really just a speck on the monitor. I forgot what they said they learned from it though
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I think they used it to learn how the laws they knew worked on small particles and to understand more about other laws in the universe.
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Haha, hardcore fangirls, totally >D
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>D YEAAA HARD COOORREEEEE *pants exsplode in hardcore maner*
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>D SO HARD CORE *pants exsplode in a hardcore maner* YEAAAAAAAAA *headbang*
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Man, I'd hate to see ya at a hardcore music concert! XD There will be pieces of Maci everywhere!
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its a pretty horid site its so scary cus im all like THIS BE LIKE HARD CO*BOOOOMMMM*
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lolzXDDDDDDDD that's epically funny
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I like 'em too
Thanks!
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lolz so trueX3333 and ur welcome
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