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Published: 2010-06-21 23:57:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 8511; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 26
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Page 1 of a comic I have decided to make about Jess's run in with Pete. This is what happens after the 'Equinox' piece.

Lets see what happens. :3

For those of you who havent read the desc of the starting image.. Pete is taking apart her body/implants to get revenge. xD

These are OCs in a story based around the Mass Effect universe, ME is © Bioware!
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Comments: 18

iralovesart [2010-06-22 08:05:35 +0000 UTC]

dude you are faaast!
she's all like: "Screw it... can't move anyway, might as well just sit and wait it out,...damn psycho!"

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Gone-Batty In reply to iralovesart [2010-06-22 18:22:28 +0000 UTC]

lol yesss.

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Dutchkat [2010-06-22 07:02:28 +0000 UTC]

This is just fantastic, I love it how Pete is fascinated by Jess as a child is to a new toy.

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Gone-Batty In reply to Dutchkat [2010-06-22 07:17:15 +0000 UTC]

He loves taking things apart. xD

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Nemonus [2010-06-22 05:36:10 +0000 UTC]

It's very cool to see a ME fancomic, especially one drawn & colored so well. Pete and this whole situation is so creepy, I can't really decide whether I like it or not! XD Nice work on all the detail of his suit. (Wasn't your Star Wars character named Jesia? Is there something we should be noticing here? )

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Gone-Batty In reply to Nemonus [2010-06-22 06:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Just that my name is Jessica and I am very lame with names. xD <3 Thank you by the way I have actually been very lazy with the lines and coloring so its nice to hear it isn't blaringly obvious. @____@ LOL

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Nemonus In reply to Gone-Batty [2010-06-22 06:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Nope, no laziness in coloring is obvious.

Heh, I used to name characters after variants of my own name--ages ago, and then I sortof turned to the bashing the keyboard and seeing what comes out method.

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Gone-Batty In reply to Nemonus [2010-06-22 06:21:36 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Oh man, awesome. xD

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SeppunZetsumi [2010-06-22 04:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Don't steal from Pete!

Still. What he's doing is gross....

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Gone-Batty In reply to SeppunZetsumi [2010-06-22 06:10:13 +0000 UTC]

He is a bit on the psychotic side I would say. xD When you start looking at EVERYTHING as something to be taken apart you have officially crossed over.

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SeppunZetsumi In reply to Gone-Batty [2010-06-22 16:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah....he's still cool though. Love quarians.

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Gone-Batty In reply to SeppunZetsumi [2010-06-22 18:21:56 +0000 UTC]

*thumbs up*

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saniea [2010-06-22 01:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Im really excited to see more of this story
Keep up the great work!

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Gone-Batty In reply to saniea [2010-06-22 06:10:27 +0000 UTC]

<3<3 More to come for sure!

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ElysianOrchid [2010-06-22 00:42:45 +0000 UTC]

No Pete! Dont look at her eyes! Stay away from the big blues!!!

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Gone-Batty In reply to ElysianOrchid [2010-06-22 06:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I think his helmet has cute blocking technology. xD

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SacredDragon [2010-06-22 00:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Jess had a lot more implants than I previously thought! Not just inside her head, but in her arms as well. The first image was quite scary with poor Jess' cut open, so it's good to see that Pete stitched her back up there at the very least, evil sod though he may be. Excellent start so far, I'm hooked completely and wondering how this'll turn out for her. Makes me wonder just what those batarians did with her and what exactly they put into her during her time with them.

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Gone-Batty In reply to SacredDragon [2010-06-22 06:13:22 +0000 UTC]

*two thumbs up* Its gratifying to hear that you're looking forward to more! More there shall be!

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