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Published: 2010-09-30 03:03:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1539; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 21
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Studio project, Don Quixote, again. I am not happy with it, but it needs to be finished for now. Deadlines suck.BW "realistic" version:[link]
Help me out, ya'll - tell me what needs to be done to make this better.
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Oh this is looking great! And yeah... silly deadlines. For me though, I love this, but since you'd like critique on it: some of the lines are a bit fuzzy where I feel they should be sharper, for example the tip of Don Quixote's lance. Also I think since the sun seems to be really strong (or at least that's my impression) the shadows should be a lot lot darker and more defined. But these are really minor things, I think what you've got is great for tomorrow. I can't wait to see the back cover to this!
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Thanks, sweetie! I took your advice and sharpened some of the line work in the b/w version, and darkened some of the shadows. Thanks so much for the help!!
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Sure thing! It looked great in person and on the big screen! ^_^
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I like it! 
But Rossinant looks too strong ang and healthy.
I worked for 16 hours yesterday because of the deadline! 
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That's true, she does look very...sturdy... doesn't she?
Good luck with your own project! (Try to get some sleep in all those work hours...)
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Thank you, Vizen.
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just finished reading that book for Spanish class! i do gotta say you still did do a good job!
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Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you liked it.
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oh yes indeed! people should have their own view in life, regardless of others point of view! I'm not bashing on people with the same point of view, i'm just saying some variety would be nice now and then!
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