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Chapter 4 END!!
I suppose a lot of people didn't know it was already chapter 4 LOL OTL;; but yeah, short chapters, just like fricken shonen.
I SWEAR TO FRICKEN GOD i will speed things up! I'm so ashamed of constantly disappointing you guys with the slow as hell updates...
I will also start on little character profile things! C:
(and i started using different paper, because i was totally disgusted with the yellow-ness of the other paper i used. I'm one of those people that are SUPER muthafukin picky with things like paper, pencils, lead and erasers hahaha )
Enjoy!
please comment what you think about the slowly-unfolding story so far
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I totally love how you can draw a background without really drawing a background...The same with brick walls too =u=
Pffft. I'm rereading IDF for like the 3rd or 4th time..
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ooo are you mixing single displacement in with this story!? first i recognized neino cuz of the x's on his face and now kima, i really hope you do!
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So if Sock is just randomly picking a chick to get over Jin... why doesn't she just as him to pick kaku?
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AS DENSE AS OPRAH WINFREY'S ASS LOLOROFLBOMBER!!!!
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your drawing style and the charakters are just rocking!!!!
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You draw very well 
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WHOOA. Weird girl at the end...
Couple of spelling errors (transparent and dense), but overall, I liiike^^!
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okay that chick at the end is defiantly gonna give me nightmares, just the way you shaded her *shiver*
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*nods* the paper was a good change, i was kinda getting annoyed with the yelLow-ish one ^^
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Well I've only just started reading, and read through all the pages within the past half hour and now that I'm all caught up, I'm impatient for the next page. >_<
As much as I love your current art, I'm even more excited to see how you will grow. From the your first page to this one, there has been a significant level of growth in my opinion. Your pages got less cluttered, you got a better feel for what should fit in panels and the depth of the images that go into them, and an overall better idea of what a single page should entail. Sometimes I feel the story moves too fast, and that character development is a bit premature and rushed, but you're not getting paid to work on this so it's not like you have an editor to tell you to slow down or to help you with story development, so the way things are going is still pretty impressive.
Between your sketch pages and your inked pages, I have no real preference since I like them both, but your sketch pages give us a glimpse of your handwriting, which I've come to adore.
Please keep going and show us what's in store for these lovely characters of yours!
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I wonder which Zodiac they have. Could you tell?
The girl there looks cute.
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HEHE Aaaw it's so cute, I reckon sock will get the girl and fiona will get... the shoulder, HAHA! Tho I really want sock to get fi, and for them both to turn gay for each other... I don't think that'll happen HAHAHA! 
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lol yeah what is that thing otuside the window 8DD awesome! please continue!
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I likes so far...........BUT, I NEEEEED to know who creeper-window-girl-Fiona-look-a-like is!
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Haha ya I was kinda getting annoyed with the yellow paper. But just getting pages to read is good enough! XD
I really like how the story is unfolding. Especially how there's different stories going on at once and your just wondering "Who's that?!" or "Whhaaatt?!" haha. It's a nice way to grab our attention though :3
Keep it up! 8D <33
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Oh sock is so oblivious :3
Oh and creepy window girl?! THE PLOT THICKENS!!!
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O: OMG LOOKS SO GOOD. Looks...like a female version of Fiona O:! And lawl at Sock's face xD
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Sock is so amazing... even if he's as dense as oprah winfrey's ass ._.
I bet that girl at the end is like that because she overheard them and feels left out from the fun right?
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I love your style so much!
Ooooh, cute girl, i like her dress
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Yaaay ~~ Finally! i'm so happy! ^__^
It's so good.. did i tell you?
i love IDF x33
btw, i'm just as picky with stuff as you ~
i can understand thing like that xDu
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ohohoooo! So that's the plan x3 heh, they're such so cute.. I just love the way you draw
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I don't mind the slow updates as long as you DO update!! Honestly, your story is so well drawn and so interesting that it's really worth the wait!! Have we seen this girl in the last panel before or is she completely new?! She looks creepy! I like her!! The strand sticking off of her head is kinda fascinating!! lol
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the girl in the last panel reminds me of myself... in the mornings... *shot'd* ;;u;;
cool manga/comic btw~
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Yay! Another page! 
Your art is so freaking beautiful, man.
Please post more pages! >w<
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<33333
Yay page
Sock is so funny and oblivious haha~
hm, wonder who the window girl is~ guess we'll find out next chapter ^^
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dense as oprahs ass im gonna store that in my insults file... hahahhaha
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But you are not disappointing us that much, because you have great art and amazing story lines!
I can't wait to see more from you
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really like it so far! oooooooo a new character! so many questions I can't wait to get the answer for!!! *v*
And the art is amazing as uuuusualll
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LOVE the story. I just read all of it. I'm so impressed!
P.S. the second-to-last panel was lit really interestingly.
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omg is it kima? or wait, isn't kima from single displacement? Which is something else, right?
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Dude, I LOVED Sock's blank face, it's SUPER RAAAD.
AND! There's a CLIFFHANGER, why must you lure us into your story?! such a scary look looming through the glass...
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On the paper, it says chapter four end, but in your artist comments, you say chapter 5 end.
Just pointing that out.
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its a typo LOL it's chapter4 end, i was just so excited about starting chapter 5 i guess i..yeah LOL
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Haha, you had me all worried there for a minute.
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I can't say much besides the art work is beautiful~~~ :sob:
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is that the same person in your icon?
(mellolover account)
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mm what person? you mean the avatar person on the mellolover account? if so then yes hahaha
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lol yeah that's what i meant xD
are all the single displacement characters in this too?
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ahahah nope O: well, it's kinda complicated..but single displacement is COMPLETELY unrelated to IDF. What IS related is another story called Hotel of Nightmares which is where the single displacement characters originated from. And IDF takes place in the same world as Hotel of Nightmares xD
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