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Published: 2009-02-24 01:24:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 11899; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 81
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YAYYLOL
ook everyone! MY BIGGEST MOTIVATION IS
COMMENTS REGARDING THE CONTENT OF THE PAGE!
Please don't hesitate to tell us what's on your mind XD
Comments regarding the ARTWORK are fine too, but we really prefer to KNOW what you guys think about the story 8) (that is SLOWLY moving along XD )
Thankss! <3
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a lil confusing.. only a lil though.. xD mostly cause i'm reading this at like 3:40 in the morning!
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............*staaaaaaaaaaaaaares* *insert depressed anime aura* i am not fit to call myslef "artist".....
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I really love the way you draw hands, as random as that sounds XD they're so crooked yet anatomically correct...if that makes sense LAWL
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I'm reading this now right in an half hour and I'm loving it >////<
I had ideas for a comic of mine but after this... Gwaaaaah never mind, IDF it's so interesting 
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on second thought I'm kinda liking the pencil thing.
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FFF 'why not' indeed. 8D
I just came across your comic today, and I am so insanely floored by it. The artwork is AMAZING (yes, in each and every style so far >w< ), and the characters are fantastic, so expressive and individual from each other, but so much alike at the same time. I'm actually a little confused by the storyline so far, but I'm sure it's just because I'm rushing though the damn thing out of excitement. I can't wait to take the time to really think about this cute comic, get everything sorted out properly, and get even more properly excited for what's to come. Really coolio. <3
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Ilike that the story is back on. Of course the art is AMAZING, but the story is beyond cute! I especially like Fiona's subtle transformation to more manly, and in this scene, I lOVE the part where zero and sweet leave. LOL, had me rolling. Their little dejected backs all sad.
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I love the story! 
Your story is like a drug. I am going to follow the comic until the end of it. I am trying to comment on every page.
I hope you understand my english, because I come from germany.
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Regarding the story, I'd like to know more about Zero and the "fag".
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They are all just so cute!
I like the pace of the story. It's not too fast so I can remember everyone and isn't so slow I stop reading it. Keep up the good work!
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I'm luvin the story!
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The story's awesome! And I like now that it's at a more moderate pace than in the beginning. In the beginning I felt it was going too fast and that there's maybe a lot more information that could've been included. 
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whatever happened to Sock's lip ring?
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Nevermind. I got him confused with some other character.
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GAHHH
I love Sock :< He's becoming my favorite charcacter haha
I'm always always amazed at how neat your sketches are
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ahahaha awww! everyone lovessock so much C: he's so dorky though, hopefully i'll be able to shed some light on his persona in the near future LAWL
and thank you ;o; !! i try to make them as neat as i can XD
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im curious. who's making this comic? one person or a group?
this is awesome btw.
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Fio has such LOL worthy reactions to everything! It makes me smile!
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Somehow your story always makes me smile (dunno why exactly, but it is refreshing). Maybe it is also the drawings (especially the facial expressions).
Anyway, it is good how fast the character relations develop because I am utterly unpatient xD
I cannot wait to see how the story develops further~~...
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also, i think a bit more detail in the buildings would help (:
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fio's expressions still kill me <3
it seems like i've lost track of the story since it's been so long since i've read the first pages and i dunno, the rest of it doesn't seem to tie in to make it um... flow better? know what i mean?
i'm kinda thrown off right now ><
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I think Fiona should look a bit more feminine.
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i wonder what their hair colors are....
i also agree with whoever said that sweet and zero should play match makers. that'd be awesome
anywho, i love the art
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The story is getting interesting. This love octagon has my attenciionnn!
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;D yay ive been commenting to much bt the story is so amazing come to thik of it they look different from the biggining
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In my opinion, the flow of the story overall is thrown off by the early pages. The story also relies on telling rather than showing. The reader barely sees any of Fio's doublelife before a friend sees through it. The readerβs told Fio's mom cries at night (if I recall correctly), Fio lives as a girl for her, but Fio hates living as a girl...The reader doesnβt really get to see this in action.
I think if the pacing were slowed down, if the reader was shown more-- more of Fioβs day at school, more of how difficult Fioβs life is, maybe Fio awake at night hearing his mom cry or seeing her cry, maybe giving Hae-Jin more appearances before revealing her eye. Maybe show Fioβs unhappy through his interactions with more of his classmates- a cold shoulder shown towards others, maybe someone else remarking on that tall girl being a grouch-- I think if things were allowed to be a mystery for a while longer, that could actually make the story stronger, build intrigue, and draw people in more. βWhy IS he dressed as a girl if he hates it so much?β βWhy is her eye covered all the time? Is she just emo or something?β
Ah, but it would probably suck to redo a lot of pages, so I wouldnβt blame you at all if you don't. XD The pacingβs definitely improved over time along with the art, but it seems there are some lingering issues with telling over showing.
For example, on this page, Hae-jin's thought bubble in the fourth panel is unneccessary. Her expression, the "errr" and then yanking her hand away convey her awkwardness well enough themselves, especially since she already thought Fio was a freak a few pages ago, so the unneccessary thought bubble weighs that panel down without actually contributing anything. I think if you trust your art to carry itself more, you'll find that the story might shine through more clearly.
I hope this was helpful!
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AWESOME
I love the expression from Fio!
And the story still got me hooked!
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your drawings are so beatiful *-*, and I really like simpler sketchy pages *_*, I don't know, I think they has more emotion than inked pages.. e-e'
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Hmmm, I think someone ordered an AWKWARD TURTLE right about here.
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On this page, and the past few that you've posted in pencil, have seemed a lot sillier, and I like that.
PRETEND THIS COMMENT IS MOTIVATION PIE.
LIKE HUMBLE PIE, BUT INSTEAD OF TASTING LIKE MODESTY,
IT TASTES LIKE FOURTEEN CANS OF MONSTER AND LOVE.
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Awwwww Sock is so awkward and cuuuteee~~! *pinches his cheeks*
LMFAO @ Fiona's facial expression in the last panel. You're amazing ;^;
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Your story and characters are awesome! *-*
I want to know more about Crow! =O
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I am so totally loving this. Really interested in how this will turn out. Got the dark, the light, the fun, and Sock. Gotta love a guy who wears nail polish and won't let up.
Miss the inks, but this is just as lovely. Your lines are so neat.
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It's love
The story is great! And the art is too, of corse >w<
Can't wait for more :3
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I just cannot wait to see what will happen >w<
Go go go!!!
And w00T!!! So many pages >w<
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Man I'm so happy now that the pages come more often 8D I love your sketches anyway so I'm really glad you stopped inking haha.
The story's nice, it feels a bit slow but there are limits to how much development you can fit into a page. With the more frequent updates it'll be superb I think 8D
And wow you have nice handwriting
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haha ohmygod >u<;
could they be more closed minded? ahha
love it!
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I really love your page layout. It makes it so easy to read.
I hope Sweet and Zero appear again soon! They're so much fun. XD Fio is very tall... in the third panel. Must be puberty or something....
By the way, is it your handwriting on each page? If it is... it's so neat!!
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i lovve hae-jin. shes like, shes still holding my hand D:
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lolol, i'm confused on why hae-jin called fio (?) sister. XDD or is it like a personality thing?
anyway, i totally love where this is going!! <33
for some reason, even though Fiona is totally my favorite of all 8D, i love Kaku! haha, i usually fall in love with side characters (right..? or is she main, haha. xD)
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btw, i've seen that face before, Fio. >W>
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i just re-read this, and, it just amazes me how much you've guys have improved, art wise.
the story seems neat sofar, i can't wait for future pages.
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I want fiona act like a drug human!!!
thinking in his looooooove!!!
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